Ceesko

Engaged Member
Jun 3, 2017
2,123
5,416
All this updates and still zero scenes.. Just an obfuscated ass story with zero sense... There is a of lot TV series that has more hot scenes per episode than this supposedly "porn game" ... What a mess.
 

yueziyue

Member
May 12, 2018
142
176
even the dev was in this thread,I want to say this up date was horrible.
If you are at the sandbox model, you can't continue the game. unless you back to the VN part.
who can even realize that?and what about the player can't back to the VN part?
and also the map was mess like hell too.
every part .Especially EVERY GATE was LOOKS ALIKE! even the players want to go back to his own room,they will try EVERY SINGLE DOOR to get there.
 

bosp

Active Member
Jan 3, 2018
647
1,313
Game is nicely written and shows some promise but... due to his inexperience the dev has managed to make a few cardinal UI/UX game design sins:
1. The riddle where you have to input your answer instead of offering choices (never a good idea to think your players have the will to guess the answer to the riddle and making them unable to progress further if they don't get the proper answer with an exact phrase and punctuation). Not to mention that in a fantasy medieval times there would not be such a thing as a piano... harp or harpsichord maybe but piano - no.
2. Free roam as dev envisioned it is a complete UI mess that will make players give up on the game immediately. It's counterintuitive and completely confusing.

In addition - the dev spent a lot of time making UI elements very very ornate hoping to provide some additional screen eye candy for the players. Wrong, it just makes UI more confusing with unnecessary embellishments. There is one old rule about this and its called KISS - keep it simple stupid.

My suggestion would be to stop wasting precious development time on the free roam and divert resources to expanding the VN part.
 
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Deleted member 2030943

Active Member
Feb 16, 2020
532
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Game is nicely written and shows some promise but... due to his inexperience the dev has managed to make a few cardinal UI/UX game design sins:
1. The riddle where you have to input your answer instead of offering choices (never a good idea to think your players have the will to guess the answer to the riddle and making them unable to progress further if they don't get the proper answer with an exact phrase and punctuation). Not to mention that in a fantasy medieval times there would not be such a thing as a piano... harp or harpsichord maybe but piano - no.
2. Free roam as dev envisioned it is a complete UI mess that will make players give up on the game immediately. It's counterintuitive and completely confusing.

In addition - the dev spent a lot of time making UI elements very very ornate hoping to provide some additional screen eye candy for the players. Wrong, it just makes UI more confusing with unnecessary embellishments. There is one old rule about this and its called KISS - keep it simple stupid.

My suggestion would be to stop wasting precious development time on the free roam and divert resources to expanding the VN part.
Yeah, the free roam seems kind of pointless, but the VN is excellent. Really enjoying the story so far.
 

tempdeath

Newbie
Mar 17, 2019
36
53
I thought the riddle was a bit out there... A piano... kind of strange. the animation, I can see the intention but not there yet. I really like this dev, creative, unique and tries to listen to feedback and improve. it is a fantastic game within a really cool world. Just give the dev time, normally some of these devs start with sh*t and then get better after 3 or 4 games, dev here has set the bar high 1st game. free roam is a bit pointless at the moment but could be a good tool to progress story, let the dev create.
 
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