I made some criticism last time I posted, so I will offer some praise this time.
2 things I felt was on the money for cheat route. MC could cause a blunder with Debbie when he tells her it's not love. She gets heart broken and hints at finding "someone closer to her age." Now I am not sure if this is the dev's intention, but it certainly seems like it could set up a secondary NTR situation where Debbie teases the MC (who is still potentially infatuated with her) with pics of her new BF or whatever. I really liked this turn of events because the MC's blunder was not forced just to satisfy a potential NTR situation. For MC's character, it makes sense that he could indeed just be infatuated in a lustful way to this young girl that is teasing him. It also fits that he wouldn't want to lie to her. Part of writing convincing material for NTR is to maintain some believability in the choices that are obviously blunders that would lead to suboptimal outcomes (not necessarily for the player, but for the MC).
The other thing I liked was the the apparent modification to James' character based on your route. Some other guy criticized this aspect, but I thought it was brilliant. You want to cultivate the right environment for the specific route to thrive in. Using James as kind of a cautionary tale for the MC was nice. I suppose in the other routes, he is a cuck or sharing type that will encourage the MC to explore those ideas. It was done very well.
2 things I felt was on the money for cheat route. MC could cause a blunder with Debbie when he tells her it's not love. She gets heart broken and hints at finding "someone closer to her age." Now I am not sure if this is the dev's intention, but it certainly seems like it could set up a secondary NTR situation where Debbie teases the MC (who is still potentially infatuated with her) with pics of her new BF or whatever. I really liked this turn of events because the MC's blunder was not forced just to satisfy a potential NTR situation. For MC's character, it makes sense that he could indeed just be infatuated in a lustful way to this young girl that is teasing him. It also fits that he wouldn't want to lie to her. Part of writing convincing material for NTR is to maintain some believability in the choices that are obviously blunders that would lead to suboptimal outcomes (not necessarily for the player, but for the MC).
The other thing I liked was the the apparent modification to James' character based on your route. Some other guy criticized this aspect, but I thought it was brilliant. You want to cultivate the right environment for the specific route to thrive in. Using James as kind of a cautionary tale for the MC was nice. I suppose in the other routes, he is a cuck or sharing type that will encourage the MC to explore those ideas. It was done very well.