I really enjoy the story. The graphics are done well. Improvement could be in using transitions. I do not mind bouncing from person to person. But it is best to use establishing shots, cut scenes, and other tools to clue the viewer into what and with whom.
If I had to complain, it would be that the women have more testosterone than the males. Not to mention the males are prettier!? I get it. The developer is
really into piercings, tattoos, gauging, and sexual domination. You have to do what you love. But the extreme here has a danger of losing an audience that isn't.
I enjoy the story and can tolerate some extremity in the characters. But when ALL the characters are extreme, the story gets lost.
P.S. Dick move with the Rick Astley! "Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down."