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Here's a teaser of the new character introduced at the end of 0.3, of one of her scenes from 0.4. I may have posted this a few days ago, but it got lost in the comments about the new update.
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This shot is a good example of how much you're improving, even now. Lightning in DAZ is pretty tricky, specially to create a dark environment and even worse for a dark skin character, you'll miss a lot of details if you don't know what to do.

Compare that one to the shots below (ending of 0.3) and the improvement is very noticeable.
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Great stuff.
 

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There's a link in my signature about NTR, I won't take any more questions/suggestions about in the thread because I am tired of talking about it.
My apologies, thank you for pointing out the link. I can imagine how time consuming just having the NTR discussions alone can be. I am enjoying your game and hope to see more in the future.
 

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Hello,
You are one of the devs I'm following for a while and I am actually thinking to put some money onto. Before I go I would like to know how and when and between whom you planned that optional NTR. How it affects your main story, and what do you mean with skippable? Is it still relevant to the story, or just some totally unrelated section? Don't want to know which side (for or against) I am with NTR, just want to know how is it planned. :)
Check out the link in my signature for any questions on this issue. I won't discuss it in the thread anymore. If the explanation is insufficient, don't commit money. I pledged Big Brother early on so I understand completely.

I don't know if I would do that- as you have said, a lot of people like the pacing (I do as well, choices were my issue. Lol) and it is moving the plot forward while you introduce characters and situations. It's being done beautifully. A LOT of these games are "feast or famine" (here is a mathematical example);
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:)

Edit: I forgot to mention I loved the line where Sofia said that she couldn't give the MC a HJ because her RA was acting up. That was pretty funny- it's good to see that someone recognizes what a debilitating condition that it is...although, imagine the death-grip she would have on your willie if she were able to get her gnarled fingers around it. :p
Thank you! That was a little shout out to some fans too. I didn't really know what it was until someone mentioned they had it. Milfs come with some real life health issues sometimes! And thank God she had RA!

Please add a Linux build next time. That's 30 seconds of my life gone that could have been spent staring at the menu carousel instead.

Again, please rename "wiki" - it sounds like a hyperlink.

As criticism, I'll say that I thought it was odd how sequential pictures would occasionally shift over half an inch. There were a bunch of instances of that, and they seemed unintentional.
I can post a Linux build tonight, and I'm hoping to get an Android version out very soon.

I think I'm keeping the 'wiki' as it is, and someday I will hyperlink the names in the game when people are mentioned. And yes, the slight picture moves in Carina, Sera, and Raquel scenes were unintentional. Those were the first scenes I rendered for the update. The Sofia, teacher, and locker scenes look better because I did those last and improves impr the month.

This shot is a good example of how much you're improving, even now. Lightning in DAZ is pretty tricky, specially to create a dark environment and even worse for a dark skin character, you'll miss a lot of details if you don't know what to do.

Compare that one to the shots below (ending of 0.3) and the improvement is very noticeable.
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Great stuff.
Thank you! Took a lot of trial and error to get a setup that worked for me. 0.4 will look very nice!

My apologies, thank you for pointing out the link. I can imagine how time consuming just having the NTR discussions alone can be. I am enjoying your game and hope to see more in the future.
Thank you very much! :extremelyhappy:
 

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Wow, thank you very much! If you've been playing the game for a while, or played updates 1-3, you can literally see the improvement before your eyes. Still getting better too. I don't know if it was explicitly said in the story, but Sofia is Spanish. Dios Mio!



This happened back in May. Live and Learn. All the characters had to be redesigned back in May after the first release, and none of these are standard Daz models, they all have lots of modification.



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I will try and fix the issues once I find it.



No comment. Anything that you assume about their relationship I will let you assume. Incest isn't allowed on Patreon, so they are just very good friends with similar nicknames, a familial relationship, and similar appearances.



Thank you! I will fix that for the future, didn't notice that.



How did you get that error Cat? I'm unable to replicate it. It should be defined in Episode 2 or if you jump to 3. Old save maybe?



I am very new to coding and I just got the wiki to have working images. It uses screen language which is completely new to me and behaves very differently from the main game. It needs some improvement and it will continue to improve as the game goes on. You should have seen it before this update! :closedeyesmile:



It's just the story I wanted to tell. I understand the girl from the gym might not be for everyone. These updates are really building what comes next. I'm working on adding the options to turn people down, but I won't render additional scenes to include a story with Raquel that doesn't include romance. It will just be a shorter game for those who choose not to go down that road. *shrugs*



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Playing from save three did that but my save 2 did not! Save 3 was after the phone call and save 2 was before picking what girl you think was the hottest.
 
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Why does this Game jump from Scene to scene without any stuff in between? It feels completely unconnected, just random Scenes after Scenes. Really hard to follow any story that way.
 
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@carnalcardinal

Thank you for the update!

Here's a tiny contribution to your project in the form of yet another modification of your mouse pointer:

welcome_to_temptation_5.png as a replacement for the current one welcome_to_temptation_red3.png

I think it looks a little better with the inner black contour replaced by a smooth transition from opaque white to transparent red and some filled gaps around the outline of the arrow.

Good luck with the next update!
 
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Playing from save three did hat but my save 2 did not! Save 3 was after the phone call and save 2 was before picking what girl wyou think was the hottest.
Ah. It was my mistake 100 percent. I didn't put variables into the 0.2 release for that scene. They are in 0.3 if you play from the beginning or start at 0.3. I'm very new to coding and make mistakes sometimes, so I will always put the option in to skip the current update. I can't always guarantee the saves will be compatible since I make a lot of coding mistakes. Sorry. :/

Why does this Game jump from Scene to scene without any stuff in between? It feels completely unconnected, just random Scenes after Scenes. Really hard to follow any story that way.
I know the transitions need improvement, but I have been working on them. They were much better in part 3 I thought. He'd say he had to go somewhere, screen goes to black, maybe get a text, then the new scene opens. Short of rendering scenes of him just walking around, I don't know how to make them better than they were in part 3. I can't go back and fix the earlier parts of the game, but I am open to ideas to improve them for part 4
 

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I'm a bit confused on what some of those choices mean, an example is choosing which one was more sexy, I chose Camila because she didn't have any vote and later during a conversation with the girlfriend I had an option to choose "something" Camila twice and I did it, but like I said, I have no idea if that was a good thing or not. I'm not into NTR at all and would like to fuck every girl (harem fan here:p)

@bossapplesauce You said that the NTR choice is already on the game but not the actual scene, so which choice was it?
 
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I'm a bit confused on what some of those choices mean, an example is choosing which one was more sexy, I chose Camila because she didn't have any vote and later during a conversation with the girlfriend I had an option to choose "something" Camila twice and I did it, but like I said, I have no idea if that was a good thing or not. I'm not into NTR at all and would like to fuck every girl (harem fan here:p)

@bossapplesauce You said that the NTR choice is already on the game but not the actual scene, so which choice was it?
Choosing Ella will lead to NTR content, you can be happy with your choice of Camila. On the path you chose the girlfriend will turn into a jealous slut, choosing Katya will make your girlfriend want a threesome with two girls. There is no right or wrong answer, it just affects the sex life with the girlfriend.
 

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If you choose Carina or Katya, it will undo that.

I can try to make it clearer in game that choosing Ella leads to her wanting other men. But in order to get that image to pop up in the game, you had to skip a warning sign in 0.3 or get a bj in 0.2 while she talked about being with the MC's friend.
 

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If you choose Carina or Katya, it will undo that.

I can try to make it clearer in game that choosing Ella leads to her wanting other men. But in order to get that image to pop up in the game, you had to skip a warning sign in 0.3 or get a bj in 0.2 while she talked about being with the MC's friend.
I get it if you pick Ella she it can lead to ntr but you can still stop it. I figured all this out the first time i played an she said something about other dudes i told her nope!
 
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I find it fascinating what does and doesn't trigger certain fetish responses. On every page there's a "WAIT! NTR?!" followed by "It's optional... please read the information linked in my signature" repeated over and over. Kudos to @carnalcardinal for her patience with the reading impaired.

In contrast, the scene with Ella's mom appears to be unavoidable, and no one seems to have an issue with it. It's like:
(and seriously, this is an actual SPOILER spoiler)

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To be clear, I have no problem with that scene. I like my smut to be smutty :). I'm a big fan of this game, and it's on my short-list of updates I'm most looking forward to! I'm considering which of my pledges to reduce from $10 to $5 so I can add myself as a patron.

I'm not trying to criticize anyone with NTR-phobia. I get it... really! I just find it ironically humorous what some find objectionable in the context of a porn game.

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- Someone having sex with their own significant other is not NTR just because the MC (or you) like(s) them.
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If you choose Carina or Katya, it will undo that.

I can try to make it clearer in game that choosing Ella leads to her wanting other men. But in order to get that image to pop up in the game, you had to skip a warning sign in 0.3 or get a bj in 0.2 while she talked about being with the MC's friend.
The BJ from Ella in 0.2 is sooooo hot though. I have trouble skipping it. :eek:penedeyewink:
 

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Sam is the girl in that scene, Trent is the vampire albino. And Ella is leaving in 2 weeks, but will be gone for 3 weeks.
... whaa..? Sam is .... *starts game* ... huuuh .... ok. But see, i rest my case - too much jumping around. I don't even know who that girl is supposed to be. Did she even have a scene before? Where did she come from, how does she connect to the MC, the story or anything. Who, why, and what's happening?
 
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I enjoyed the update. I'm interested in watching how the Carina and cuckold paths develop. You are thinking about better transitions, which I think is good. I'd venture that some transitional dialog is needed when moving between scenes.

I enjoy drama. Right now the drama between the GF and MC is my favorite, with the sisters, Katya, and the MC's friends. I don't have much interest in the teacher or Raquel. Plot developments could change this.

I'm mixed on Sofia. I like that she pursues the MC, but it all came together too easily. No conflict, nothing to overcome.

I agree with others that I would like to see more choices. Miles being less of an idiot in particular. How about handing a girl a towel, right? I'd prefer some charisma.

Terrific renders. Thanks for your hard work.
 
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Wow, thank you!

I also think you are the first person to even mention that. :closedeyesmile: I had a hard time not blabbing in the thread about it, felt pretty filthy writing that one.

I enjoyed the update. I'm interested in watching how the Carina and cuckold paths develop. You are thinking about better transitions, which I think is good. I'd venture that some transitional dialog is needed when moving between scenes.

I enjoy drama. Right now the drama between the GF and MC is my favorite, with the sisters, Katya, and the MC's friends. I don't have much interest in the teacher or Raquel. Plot developments could change this.

I'm mixed on Sofia. I like that she pursues the MC, but it all came together too easily. No conflict, nothing to overcome.

I agree with others that I would like to see more choices. Miles being less of an idiot in particular. How about handing a girl a towel, right? I'd prefer some charisma.

Terrific renders. Thanks for your hard work.
Thank you! It's been hard learning to write, code, and render all at the same time. In each update you can see the improvement. It's kinda cool in a weird way.

I disagree on the Sofia part though.
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I find it fascinating what does and doesn't trigger certain fetish responses. On every page there's a "WAIT! NTR?!" followed by "It's optional... please read the information linked in my signature" repeated over and over. Kudos to @carnalcardinal for her patience with the reading impaired.

In contrast, the scene with Ella's mom appears to be unavoidable, and no one seems to have an issue with it. It's like:
(and seriously, this is an actual SPOILER spoiler)

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To be clear, I have no problem with that scene. I like my smut to be smutty :). I'm a big fan of this game, and it's on my short-list of updates I'm most looking forward to! I'm considering which of my pledges to reduce from $10 to $5 so I can add myself as a patron.

I'm not trying to criticize anyone with NTR-phobia. I get it... really! I just find it ironically humorous what some find objectionable in the context of a porn game.

ETA


Truer words have seldom been spoken
Are you truly asking why people that don't like netorare are okay with netori? I don't wan't to start a discussion, but they are completely opposite. Is just like why some people don't like to play as a female MC, many like to play as male and get as much woman as possible, not the other way around.
 

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Are you truly asking why people that don't like netorare are okay with netori? I don't wan't to start a discussion, but they are completely opposite. Is just like why some people don't like to play as a female MC, many like to play as male and get as much woman as possible, not the other way around.
I think you need to read carefully, he isn't talking about Netori.
 
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