The game is way too short, i guess thats why its a demo.
anyways, what IS there does have some merit.
first off i absolutly loved the domination choice, the way it was presented as a legitimate part of her therapy was really nice, i hope in the future it will go alot deeper than what was in this demo, but i guess time will tell, i for one wouldd love some hard domination and BDSM in this route.
The hypnosis part seemed a little rushed to me, but the general idea of using them for a quick fuck making them belive they love you for the duration, does have some very nice oppetunities if you dont fancy the harder domination.
The pure choice found to be boring, but hey, what else would you expect from a person who wants hard domination and BDSM.
The actual therapy sessions where pretty good in their writing, the explainations of what the mental mechanics of the situation is and all that i very solid, i dont know if its actualy true, but it sounded beliveable enough to me
The subway scene, was so confusing, i am guessing there is a plan with this in the future, but as its done here in the demo its pure and utter waste of time, it leads nowhere, not even to anything potential in the future and if you talk to her, she gets mad and you get locked out of the subway scene.
The bar scene was nothing spectacular but atleast it can lead to something in the future and seems to have a point in the game unlike the subway scene. however i dont like the model of the bartender at all, i know its just personal preferance and others may disagree, but you asked for feeddback
so there you have it. the therapy part of the game was the absolute best part of the game, i think you can do a little to slow down her comfort level a little, after all she goes from being unable to utter a single word about what has happened, to being perky and happy in just 2 days.. maybe slow that down somewhat.
ohh yea and the "puzzle" part of the game could work out really well for future, i do feel there should be some reward/consequence to it though, as it is right now, you guess wrong it just resets.. you should make some incentive to get it right the first time and actualy pay attention to the hints and the situation...
as i mentioned earlier i really like the therapy part, and that alone has me exited for the future for this game, there is such a huge potential for some good scenes to be made in this setting.