VN Ren'Py When It All Started [v0.04] [Kalyha]

[Porthas]

Kalyha

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Sincere questions, not being sarcastic.

 

[Porthas]

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The way the story is setting it up and how the kid is responding - doesn't work.

My polite suggestion is - you may wanna rethink this. It's not plausible. But that's just my two cents.

 

[ramvivat]

yeah! so blackmail among the list of tags is what it's about. Admittedly, at first it revolts. but if you sit down to smoke and think - then our whole life is a complete blackmail - either you go to work or you die of hunger - why not blackmail? either you go to study or after school you are nobody if not worse - also blackmail. many foolishly do not succumb to it and find themselves without anything in life, having screwed up their lives from a young age. in short, the MC is blackmailed out of his comfort zone for his own good. although to be honest - at first I experienced wild indignation from the blackmail attempt. but nothing - I think the guy will manage somehow. and judging by the game 18+ he will cope "in the right way."

in the RHC, by the way, the family from the MC and Adrianna was also blackmailed by circumstances in the form of rent and taxes - and they got out relatively calmly even having received advantages in the form of a nightclub.

The author raised an interesting topic, if you think about it. that life forces you to become stronger or die.
author, damn, you're a fucking philosopher, you know that? =)
take five bro! thanks. sincerelly.

 

[ramvivat]

On the one hand, Porthas seem to be right.
but it is necessary to make an allowance for the fact that the MC is an introvert, not particularly familiar with external life. in a way, he's an otaku. and he, unlike the MC from the RHC, does not even have a living friend Alex, who would come to his house and would get him with kicks. MC is unfamiliar with real life. his whole real life is home-school-home-school if I correctly understood the beginning of the story.

plus such a moment - they are trying to blackmail the family on a piquant topic. the son and mother have not yet really come to their senses after what happened, and for good and they should be taken "warm" for further circulation, until they change their minds, have time to sort things out in the brain and begin to think soberly about what happened to them. in principle, the blackmailer did the right thing.

that's just one thing, but it worries me: a blackmailer for a young man is too experienced.
if you remember, the house was robbed by two young men. it is unlikely that they were more than 30. even 20 if they are, it is very doubtful.

I'm still annoyed by the fact that father left for work and the house was robbed. perhaps someone from his father's job is behind all this (but what motives?)
Another suspect is Victoria's husband. the motives are also not clear, but he is trying to give money ... maybe it’s my spoiled imagination that is playing and I myself am spoiled - but I see this as an attempt to become a sort of kind family friend in order to corruption of the female part of the family,
as in "big brother - another story" where a mother's friend, having first corrupted the mother herself, began corrupting her daughters.

further attempts to give money will be a characteristic sign of the possible correctness of my version.

it's like a bad cop - a good cop - a bad cop, and so on until the end succumbs. how metal is heated and cooled - and thus the MC of Alfred Bester's novel "Tiger! Tiger! Tiger" broke the safe out of the spaceship.

plus the blackmailer called After that aunt's husband trying to give money.
that is, "if it doesn't work out well, then let's start on the bad side."

+PS: you ask, why the hell am I slandering my aunt's husband? but I didn't like him. his mug is not to my liking. I can't help myself.
I would have liked it more if this aunt's husband could have been put behind bars for blackmail and the aunt herself taken into the family of MC - the more girls in the harem, the merrier the harem. right?

+PPS: if the aunt's husband is so proud that he has "money - chickens do not peck!" then he could hire a detective and he would find those scoundrels that robbed the family. I think correctly?

maybe start a poll? who is behind the blackmail? =)
and then compare it with the author's version ... when the author makes sure that the blackmailer is still found (after all, I hope the author will not rewrite the script (?), even knowing that the "public" has already guessed everything, and knows approximately who is the scoundrel who pressed the button and sent the whole family into incest debauchery)

 

[clowns234]

On the one hand, Porthas seem to be right.
but it is necessary to make an allowance for the fact that the MC is an introvert, not particularly familiar with external life. in a way, he's an otaku. and he, unlike the MC from the RHC, does not even have a living friend Alex, who would come to his house and would get him with kicks. MC is unfamiliar with real life. his whole real life is home-school-home-school if I correctly understood the beginning of the story.

plus such a moment - they are trying to blackmail the family on a piquant topic. the son and mother have not yet really come to their senses after what happened, and for good and they should be taken "warm" for further circulation, until they change their minds, have time to sort things out in the brain and begin to think soberly about what happened to them. in principle, the blackmailer did the right thing.

that's just one thing, but it worries me: a blackmailer for a young man is too experienced.
if you remember, the house was robbed by two young men. it is unlikely that they were more than 30. even 20 if they are, it is very doubtful.

I'm still annoyed by the fact that father left for work and the house was robbed. perhaps someone from his father's job is behind all this (but what motives?)
Another suspect is Victoria's husband. the motives are also not clear, but he is trying to give money ... maybe it’s my spoiled imagination that is playing and I myself am spoiled - but I see this as an attempt to become a sort of kind family friend in order to corruption of the female part of the family,
as in "big brother - another story" where a mother's friend, having first corrupted the mother herself, began corrupting her daughters.

further attempts to give money will be a characteristic sign of the possible correctness of my version.

it's like a bad cop - a good cop - a bad cop, and so on until the end succumbs. how metal is heated and cooled - and thus the MC of Alfred Bester's novel "Tiger! Tiger! Tiger" broke the safe out of the spaceship.

plus the blackmailer called After that aunt's husband trying to give money.
that is, "if it doesn't work out well, then let's start on the bad side."

+PS: you ask, why the hell am I slandering my aunt's husband? but I didn't like him. his mug is not to my liking. I can't help myself.
I would have liked it more if this aunt's husband could have been put behind bars for blackmail and the aunt herself taken into the family of MC - the more girls in the harem, the merrier the harem. right?

+PPS: if the aunt's husband is so proud that he has "money - chickens do not peck!" then he could hire a detective and he would find those scoundrels that robbed the family. I think correctly?

maybe start a poll? who is behind the blackmail? =)
and then compare it with the author's version ... when the author makes sure that the blackmailer is still found (after all, I hope the author will not rewrite the script (?), even knowing that the "public" has already guessed everything, and knows approximately who is the scoundrel who pressed the button and sent the whole family into incest debauchery)

Yea, I'm thinking the BIL is behind the break in also. Setting himself up as the family savior with his money. Getting the video was just a nice bonus.

 

[ramvivat]

Yea, I'm thinking the BIL is behind the break in also. Setting himself up as the family savior with his money. Getting the video was just a nice bonus.

sorry who is BIL?
ah! BIL is the MC?
talking to yourself on a cell phone? =))) or have you not yet reached that moment where the blackmailer got in touch with your mother's phone?

but - OK. your version taken. thanks.

 

[masterdc1976]

love Kalyha´s work mostly RHC, but this update finally looks like the next one might be interesting.
the previous releases got me a little confused, now its seems like its going somewhere, still prefer RHC but now I will keep an eye out for this one also

 

[ramvivat]

love Kalyha´s work mostly RHC, but this update finally looks like the next one might be interesting.
the previous releases got me a little confused, now its seems like its going somewhere, still prefer RHC but now I will keep an eye out for this one also

in order not to fall into hypocrisy, learn to sort things. constantly ask yourself "why does this make me angry here, if almost the same thing in another place was it ok?" you will learn to isolate the very thing that is unambiguously unacceptable for you (you also have to find out the reason for not accepting "this particular one")

there is an expression "they threw out the baby with water" - this is when, not knowing how to sort out something useful, they throw everything away. I'll give you an example from real life. these are gold miners that wash tons of rock for the sake of golden sand. although they might not see the gold nuggets and throw the rock out as empty. and at the same time throwing away gold, which can simply be washed. if you learn how to sort things, you will mine a lot of gold where gold nugget hunters go empty-handed. and there are still methods of how to extract gold from the rock from which the golden sand was washed. it is a chemical method. there is still gold in the ground where the golden sand was taken from, it is just that it is even finer than the golden sand and is not available for washing. do you understand the hint? and by sorting out what pisses you off, you can turn it to your advantage. but it takes patience. =)

 

[Ghostload]

Update:
Almost a year later, still a lot of text and teasing........one forced blow job.....

Thanks for letting us know.

I wish more thread "analyzers" would tell us if it's worth playing without having to check the changelog.

 

[clowns234]

sorry who is BIL?
ah! BIL is the MC?
talking to yourself on a cell phone? =))) or have you not yet reached that moment where the blackmailer got in touch with your mother's phone?

but - OK. your version taken. thanks.

BIL = brother-in-law (husband of MC's aunt)
My theory is that brother-in-law hired goons to rob the place. The video was unplanned, but now BIL has it, so he is going to use it.

 

[masterdc1976]

in order not to fall into hypocrisy, learn to sort things. constantly ask yourself "why does this make me angry here, if almost the same thing in another place was it ok?" you will learn to isolate the very thing that is unambiguously unacceptable for you (you also have to find out the reason for not accepting "this particular one")

this was my first comment on this post, until then I did not find it relevant to respond.
its not about standards, until this update this game did not peak my interest, some times a gam just starts off interesting or ends badly.

in this case "for me" only in this update it started to show be interesting, the previous did not have any hooks, so far still there is not any real hooks "for me" but based on RHC I hope there will be some action.

again "my opinion/contribution" not fact.

peace.

 

[masterdc1976]

BIL = brother-in-law (husband of MC's aunt)
My theory is that brother-in-law hired goons to rob the place. The video was unplanned, but now BIL has it, so he is going to use it.

that would be a twist that probably would make aunt very available

 

[ramvivat]

BIL = brother-in-law (husband of MC's aunt)
My theory is that brother-in-law hired goons to rob the place. The video was unplanned, but now BIL has it, so he is going to use it.

heh - I was talking about him. it was him that I chose, his face is not to my liking. Precisely pro husband aunt Victoria.

 

[BlackPinkX]

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The way the story is setting it up and how the kid is responding - doesn't work.

My polite suggestion is - you may wanna rethink this. It's not plausible. But that's just my two cents.

No sim card needed. The police with imei code can track it but it' s a porn game, plots mistakes won't matter

 

[ramvivat]

this was my first comment on this post, until then I did not find it relevant to respond.
its not about standards, until this update this game did not peak my interest, some times a gam just starts off interesting or ends badly.

in this case "for me" only in this update it started to show be interesting, the previous did not have any hooks, so far still there is not any real hooks "for me" but based on RHC I hope there will be some action.

again "my opinion/contribution" not fact.

peace.

not all openings of chess games are interesting - this is normal. =)

 

[clowns234]

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The way the story is setting it up and how the kid is responding - doesn't work.

My polite suggestion is - you may wanna rethink this. It's not plausible. But that's just my two cents.

No sim card needed. The police with imei code can track it but it' s a porn game, plots mistakes won't matter

Going to the police would expose the content of the video, which is what they are trying to avoid.
Plus, the MC is not the player, and not as experienced - so you have to give him some leeway as far as not always making the most logical choices. And yes, it wouldn't set up the game if they caught the blackmailer before the story even gets started.
I'm looking forward to where this is going. Kalyha's work has not let me down yet.

 

[BlackPinkX]

Going to the police would expose the content of the video, which is what they are trying to avoid.
Plus, the MC is not the player, and not as experienced - so you have to give him some leeway as far as not always making the most logical choices. And yes, it wouldn't set up the game if they caught the blackmailer before the story even gets started.
I'm looking forward to where this is going. Kalyha's work has not let me down yet.

Assuming the criminals are smart and the police corrupt?

 

[ramvivat]

Going to the police would expose the content of the video, which is what they are trying to avoid.
Plus, the MC is not the player, and not as experienced - so you have to give him some leeway as far as not always making the most logical choices. And yes, it wouldn't set up the game if they caught the blackmailer before the story even gets started.
I'm looking forward to where this is going. Kalyha's work has not let me down yet.

the law of the literary genre - the hero must be generally not stupid, but at the same time stupid as a cork at the beginning of the story and gets smarter before our eyes as the story progresses. otherwise the story itself would not have been born. well, it would be a short essay a couple of pages more like a boring police report that no one reads. and fiction should be not only entertaining but also instructive. and teaching is hard work, if you think about it. we sometimes in conversations can yell at each other but we do not hear each other. but you need to make sure that people want to hear the thoughts of the author. so that people listen to the thoughts of the speaker.

 

[clowns234]

Assuming the criminals are smart and the police corrupt?

The more people involved, the more likely the content of the video would be exposed. I don't know if the police would necessarily need to be all that corrupt for that to happen. There could easily be locker room talk. 'Have Sarg show you the video of the mom with her son that we confiscated... It's crazy hot.'

 

[ramvivat]

Assuming the criminals are smart and the police corrupt?

I think the criminal will be smart enough to keep the MC family on the hook long enough for the women of the family to become MC whores (due to developing an addiction to regular doses of MC sperm), but at the same time stupid enough to fall into pride from "what he's smart!", and not guess to escape in time for the moment when the police still put two and two together and get the name of the blackmailing villain. for if the offender is not found, the reader will fall into frustration and stop reading, since the logical end of the game "everyone died" will work - interest in the work where the villain will not be punished is lost (after all, we do not read Greek tragedies, right?), And the reader wants a "happiend" - the villain must be punished, and the main character, he is a knight in shining armor, embracing his women, smoothly goes into the sunset. and if the offender is found too early, there will be no action =)