I call BS on the 15 minute claim. Having noted the various questions about playing time in this update I kept track. I'm a quick reader. I read all the text and let the various animations etc run their course. Playing time was a bit over 40 minutes. Admittedly I explored both sides of a couple of choices, both sides of the dart game for example,but a straight play through would have been only a couple minutes less.
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If I had to decide between 100 renders of mediocre quality vs. 10 almost life-like looking renders I would choose the former, that's true. This isn't what my comment was about though. Other people have already said how the writing is still average and the story less interesting so I am not going to write lengthy texts about it.
Vidal the king of Pervert
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it's only chapter one I would hold off judging the story as a whole until more chapters come out
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For the Rework:
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Writing is OK.
Miru is now much better in the Rework compared to the Old Version, she was just meh before and now she could be a much more interesting char.
But overall i still hate this strange Laia. Normaly i love a little bit of strange chicks but her, No THX. If i would meet her in RL i would def win the Marothon.
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Writing is OK.
Miru is now much better in the Rework compared to the Old Version, she was just meh before and now she could be a much more interesting char.
But overall i still hate this strange Laia. Normaly i love a little bit of strange chicks but her, No THX. If i would meet her in RL i would def win the Marothon.
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I complety forgot the plot of the previous version but after playing this rework, am I the only one who thinks Leia is responsabile for mother's accident just to bring MC back? Dad seems pretty chill
Miru looks cute than never, I'm gonna really feel bad when I start cheating with Leia...she is the only one in my heart that evil,cold snake
Miru looks cute than never, I'm gonna really feel bad when I start cheating with Leia...she is the only one in my heart that evil,cold snake
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Well, Leia was always strange. New or Old version. She thinks in both that its Dylans fault when she talks with the MC. But i have more the feel that she is atleast a part behind it what happend with Hel.I complety forgot the plot of the previous version but after playing this rework, am I the only one who thinks Leia is responsabile formother'saccident just to bring MC back?Dadseems pretty chill
Miru looks cute than never, I'm gonna really feel bad when I start cheating with Leia...she is the only one in my heart that evil,cold snake
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In the old one too, she had a lot of shady business, in this rework it just seems more explicit (the MC himself doubts her words).I complety forgot the plot of the previous version but after playing this rework, am I the only one who thinks Leia is responsabile formother'saccident just to bring MC back?Dadseems pretty chill
Miru looks cute than never, I'm gonna really feel bad when I start cheating with Leia...she is the only one in my heart that evil,cold snake
Wait this is being reworked... again?!
Well this bodes well for Summer's Gone, doesn't it. Honestly don't understand how you manage to rework something for the second time before you even finish it.
Well this bodes well for Summer's Gone, doesn't it. Honestly don't understand how you manage to rework something for the second time before you even finish it.
Hm... a patch is coming, surely? Incest isn't even something I typically care about one way or the other, but the rework as it stands feels strange.
Miru is MC's girlfriend, and Leia was a "close friend" from his past. For everyone else the game avoids stating any kind of connection or relationship to MC whatsoever, despite trying to sell us on all the emotion and drama surrounding them. The emotional tension between MC and Helen feels hollow without any hints as to what she's supposed to mean to him. With all the heavy feels, the game is set up perfectly to be about an estranged son reconnecting with his family, I mean he even used to live with them in his own room. I think it would be difficult trying to sell it as just a bunch of people he used to know.
Instead of doing either approach though, the game insists on awkwardly pretending the topic doesn't exist while trying to make the audience invested in these characters. That isn't gonna hold up very long. So what's the plan here?
Miru is MC's girlfriend, and Leia was a "close friend" from his past. For everyone else the game avoids stating any kind of connection or relationship to MC whatsoever, despite trying to sell us on all the emotion and drama surrounding them. The emotional tension between MC and Helen feels hollow without any hints as to what she's supposed to mean to him. With all the heavy feels, the game is set up perfectly to be about an estranged son reconnecting with his family, I mean he even used to live with them in his own room. I think it would be difficult trying to sell it as just a bunch of people he used to know.
Instead of doing either approach though, the game insists on awkwardly pretending the topic doesn't exist while trying to make the audience invested in these characters. That isn't gonna hold up very long. So what's the plan here?
Shit, sounds like it'll need to be reworked.
edit: Seriously though, someone will come along with a patch. I'm a little surprised you can't just define your own relationships as that seems like the easiest way of doing things for all parties concerned.
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Vidal the king of Pervert
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a Witch Hunt this is a Witch Hunt my baby is innocent i Tell YouI complety forgot the plot of the previous version but after playing this rework, am I the only one who thinks Leia is responsabile formother'saccident just to bring MC back?Dadseems pretty chill
Miru looks cute than never, I'm gonna really feel bad when I start cheating with Leia...she is the only one in my heart that evil,cold snake
y'all just jealous cuz my baby is a bad bitch
i mean when you take a step back and look at it what do y'all really have means motive and opportunity in what country is that enough
to convict someone y'all should be ashamed of yourself
Should I play it or wait more, because it says "beta" but I don't know if the beta tag will change before the next content update.
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Content wise, everything is there, it's just missing the galery which will be added in the final version.
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....?But overall i still hate this strange Laia. Normaly i love a little bit of strange chicks but her, No THX. If i would meet her in RL i would def win the Marothon.
Marathon? You would meet her and...challenge to run a marathon that you would then win?
I kinda want to see it. Let's call it the Autist Route. Meet new characters, challenge them to a marathon.
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donno why dev was allowed to keep rating and reviews from an old game when they made a new game, should this not just be the reviews and stars for 0.6 and then a whole new thread with zero reviews and 0 stars for the reworked one?
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Well I can't wait to see the rest of the game with that insane quality ; Oceanlab really killed it, it's awesome.
What an overhaul of Miru ; how would I ever get to break up with her and be with Katie ?.....
Everything is much better written and stunning ; a 10/10. Really can't wait for next update and SG of course
Edit : And of course, Helen and Leia... hot damn, they are at their most gorgeous, too much to handle for me
Edit 2 : When I said Miru overhaul, I also meant in her personnality. The writing has improved dramatically for her and everyone's reaction to MC's return. *chief kiss*
Edit 3 : sorry for too much edits...oh wait
What an overhaul of Miru ; how would I ever get to break up with her and be with Katie ?.....
Everything is much better written and stunning ; a 10/10. Really can't wait for next update and SG of course
Edit : And of course, Helen and Leia... hot damn, they are at their most gorgeous, too much to handle for me
Edit 2 : When I said Miru overhaul, I also meant in her personnality. The writing has improved dramatically for her and everyone's reaction to MC's return. *chief kiss*
Edit 3 : sorry for too much edits...oh wait
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Everytime i see a rework of a rework it mention me to AMAROT or any other good starts of a VN but in the end they lost theyr writer with the Story and visions, betrayed etc. ... milking the patreon is the new thing ... But i wont lied whene i said this is not worth it in the end for this VN ... it is a master peace of work but on the end we will see ... i have no glue this will end like the other ones.