VN Ren'Py Where It All Began [Ch. 3 Full] [Oceanlab]

[lonelyk]

Now that's a great dev log! And the previous dev log didn't seem to be controversial on Discord, only here, so hi Ocean! <3
It is another thing I like a lot with Ocean is that he uses feedback as it should be, to improve his iterations, while feeling confident enough to dismiss the outliers and to not take it all personally.

This reworked Scarlet is great, much much better than in the previous dev log. She is still quite changed from old Ch6 Scarlet but she retains some of her Ch6 self, she still looks mature but not like a granny, and overall really good (and classy, which was the case of the Scarlet from the previous dev log and is certainly linked to her story revamp). Really good work!

Katie did not change much, she still looks nice! But Zoey is another successful change, I liked her former self but she now looks more real and much improved.

 

[NeroZee]

Ok first off Zoey looks cute as fuck, i am a sucker for freckles so i am instantly on board with it(i would say i am not TOO happy with her losing her tattoos but i can live without them). Also Katie looks AMAZING as well, especially with the pony tail.

Now onto the controversial part. Scarlett this time around does look better IMO, she definitely is more of a proper cougar type looking MILF. Although i personally still think her chapter 6 self looks the best it's fine. I dont want the dev to spend too much time obsessing over 1 character trying to please everyone, that will never happen. One good example of a MILF that you updated that looks WAY better than her previous self IMO is Amber from Summers Gone.
Also on a minor note, Ocean i love your work man, but stop with the goofy hats lol, first you gave Scarlett what looked like a silly oversized sombrero and now she has a hat that looks like it came from a Popeye movie or something. If you want a classy looking hat may i suggest something like this

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but honestly i wouldn't even bother, at the end of the day this is really a minor thing, probably shouldn't have even brought it up.

Anyway give me more of Zoey and Katie, cause OOF.

 

[Razrback16]

Ya I never played the old version of the game but the new Scarlet character in the latest log above looks better as she actually looks like she's in her 40s, the other one looked 22.

 

[JETracktor]

I personally am a huge mature/milf fan

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[Erostraus]

Holy shit. 10/10

 

[LostGhost]

Ch6 sacrlet will be missed but the new one looks great anyways

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

I'd like to know what MC's affiliation with Leah and her family is in the reworked version because in the original Hellen and Dillion are MC parents and Leah and Katy are his sisters but in the reworked version MC is not related to them so was he adopted or some shit? He obviously grew up with them and Hellen seems to love him more than her own children so he must've been adopted, I highly doubt she'd feel that way about a guy who was just her daughters childhood friend. Anyone have clarification on this?

 

[Zane Truesdale]

Zoey seems WAAAAAY better now. Wow, that was some good dev log.

 

[DuckDairyDip]

Scarlet seems like a straight upgrade for me. Zoey I also like though I kind of wish she kept some of the tattoos. Glad that Katie is still pretty much the same.

I'd like to know what MC's affiliation with Leah and her family is in the reworked version because in the original Hellen and Dillion are MC parents and Leah and Katy are his sisters but in the reworked version MC is not related to them so was he adopted or some shit? He obviously grew up with them and Hellen seems to love him more than her own children so he must've been adopted, I highly doubt she'd feel that way about a guy who was just her daughters childhood friend. Anyone have clarification on this?

Did you use the patch? Haven't played the rework in a while but pretty sure with the patch it changes the MC from being childhood friends with them to being Helen's son and Leah and Katie's brother like the original.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

ooohhh myyyy...they both look so good. Zoey's improvements are incredible. Before she looked like the girl I've seen in every other AVN. Now she looks unique, cute as fuck (love them freckers!), and I'd actually bang her now. Nicely done, Ocean!

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Scarlet seems like a straight upgrade for me. Zoey I also like though I kind of wish she kept some of the tattoos. Glad that Katie is still pretty much the same.


Did you use the patch? Haven't played the rework in a while but pretty sure with the patch it changes the MC from being childhood friends with them to being Helen's son and Leah and Katie's brother like the original.

I did not use the patch no but my question was more directed to the Canon relationship between MC and those mentioned and not a patch.. I know the patch makes em related but what's their real relationship tho.

 

[DuckDairyDip]

I did not use the patch no but my question was more directed to the Canon relationship between MC and those mentioned and not a patch.. I know the patch makes em related but what's their real relationship tho.

Based on the writing and what the patches change for both the old and reworked versions, it seems evident the intended relationship is them as a family otherwise a lot of things make no sense.

 

[lipe2410]

Scarlet looks in old chapter 6 is still more remarkable. But that's ok, i'm more interested in her sister Helen. And i prefer too that Ocean stop spend time overthinking about this and move futher with the new chapter.

 

[mommysboiii]

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Hello,

So, welcome to the next Dev Log


The last Dev Log was quite a bit controversial due to the changes I made to Scarlet.
And I expected this.

I'm a person that tends to overthink. And that's pretty much what happened with Scarlet. At first, I was like "She looks too young."
Then I was like "Stop overthinking, Ocean."... But what if I was right?
So I made the decision to not do any more renders with her until I got some feedback that either support my thoughts about her looking too young or her being mature enough.
I personally am a huge mature/milf fan and so I just had to go back and change her again. (Gladly, I didn't do any more renders with her.)
The second new version I created just didn't do it for me. That wasn't Scarlet. It felt wrong.
So I did go back to what felt right and left some parts of Scarlet untouched. But changed others quite drastically.
To refresh your memory... Here's the old Scarlet from various chapters.

Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 6
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In Chapter 6 she had a visual upgrade.
So, for the new new one, I custom sculpted her body and changed her hair again. Did some small skin and material changes and that was it. This Scarlet just feels like Scarlet... But I still had to do some changes to make her fit more to her updated personality and story. (4k version attached.)

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While the old Scarlet always embedded some sort of Rocker theme, the new one needed some "classy" drops.
With the next Dev Logs, I will show some actual in-game renders with the new model.

2. Zoey and Katie
Now we get to the next point of today's Log.
Two other well-known characters will be previewed.
I did preview Katie before and she didn't get changed much. Zoey on the other hand got a full-out rework.
In the old WiAB, I wanted to start Zoey's story much MUCH later. Which was a big mistake because a major story point would've started way too late.
In the new WiAB, Zoey's story will begin within the next two chapters and quite some lore will be dropped on you.
Let's get to some visuals. First the old ones.

Old Katie (Chapter 3)
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Old Zoey (Chapter 3. Warning: Nightmare inducing.)

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Both together (Chapter 6)

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One thing I always hated about Zoey was her weird body. She had huge tits, a super narrow hip, and a big ass.

I had already previewed her with these two renders:

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Her body got custom sculpted and reworked her skin map.
Here is an actual Chapter 2 in-game render.

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There's one issue I still have with her and it's the SSS (Subsurface Scattering.) I will work on that while I go through the update.

Now Zoey... Good old Zoey... She gave me quite the headache and I tried a lot of different variations.
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The new Zoey changed quite a lot.

Besides the obvious hair and skin material changes, I also changed her body.
She's now thicker and a little chubbier. I will preview some actual body shots of her in the upcoming logs.
And her personality also got updated. She still has some things from the old Zoey but she's way less "Sexual for the sake of being sexual."

So yeah, I guess that was it.

All new renders are available in High res at the bottom to download.

Take Care!

- Ocean

dayyyyyyyymmmmeeeeeeeeeee so many waifus more waifus than in my dragonmaids deck in yu gi oh

 

[Blob]

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but looks good

 

[Cabin Fever]

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Now that's an age-appropriate face & hair for Scarlet.

While the old Scarlet always embedded some sort of Rocker theme, the new one needed some "classy" drops.
With the next Dev Logs, I will show some actual in-game renders with the new model.

While that outfit is sexy as fuck, it still screams "I'm a trophy wife past my prime but I'm trying to hang on to that status with an over the top slutty outfit". But if that's the goal then bravo! Well done.

 

[drooopy]

i see dev got rid of scarlet's belly hair as well, that's nice

 

[Yngling]

I did not use the patch no but my question was more directed to the Canon relationship between MC and those mentioned and not a patch.. I know the patch makes em related but what's their real relationship tho.

I'm sure they just renting rooms from each other.
Don't ask and don't worry.

 

[sorco2003]

Ok, we are read and appreciated here at F95 . In the Patreon post there were two or three criticisms that Scar was too young, on Discord I read some comments in passing, but this is where we said she looked too young. It's a great improvement the new Scar, I still prefer the Scar from episode 6, but now I can see her and say that she looks her age, and she is very beautiful too.
Zoey... all improvements for her, better face, a more real body according to what Ocean says and freckles! I mean, they covered me a redhead under the blue hair?
Finally, a render in game of the goddess herself, Katie, she was already perfect, she was perfect in the previous previews and continues to be perfect in this last one. Pure beauty.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Based on the writing and what the patches change for both the old and reworked versions, it seems evident the intended relationship is them as a family otherwise a lot of things make no sense.

That's exactly what I was thinking, I guess it's one of those "not related" *wink* *wink* situations.