VN Ren'Py Where It All Began [S1 Ch.4 Fix 1 Steam] [Oceanlab]

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Just putting this in a spoiler because of web crawlers:

My own thought on incest in this game is that it's simply a hot potato, and I mean that purely for the risk it poses for Ocean's future revenue streams via third party providers (for both SG/WIAB). This seemingly came to fruition when WIAB was removed from Patreon. For me personally, incest is not my thing (having two sisters and, for a time, two foster sisters IRL just turns me off the subject), but I am happy to play games that contain it because I can more or less chose ignore it and pretend the whole landlady thing. I don't begrudge those that like it.

I said in a post a year or so ago that Ocean needs to either go all in or remove any hint of incest entirely. As it turns out, he didn't do that with SG Season 1 when he had the chance to do so with the Nika/Nami relationship. He keeps trying to maintain this illusion of ambiguity in both games, and I don't think that's working out.

Just to be clear, I want Ocean to either be unabashedly all in (thus, accepting the business/financial risk long term) or to remove the incest entirely. Enough of this nod, nod, wink, wink shit already. If he chooses the latter with WIAB, he needs to be doing it now, and, obviously, he needs to come up with a convincing alternative explanation for the existing relationship dynamics. EDIT: ... and the only way I can see Ocean achieving this is by not having William related by blood tothe others.
I fully agree, on all fronts, but right now there is nothing to do beside play the waiting game. When Ch4 is released we will know or at least have a idea of what direction he will go. Until then everything is really up in the air. But I would die laughing if after months of discussion the evil modder returned with a new mod, right after the release.
 

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I fully agree, on all fronts, but right now there is nothing to do beside play the waiting game. When Ch4 is released we will know or at least have a idea of what direction he will go. Until then everything is really up in the air. But I would die laughing if after months of discussion the evil modder returned with a new mod, right after the release.
To be honest, my fear is that any changes made are done in a way that still retains too much inconsistency/ambiguity/contradiction in the story. That's why I advocate an all in or all out approach (an all out approach would leave that evil modder with some serious work to do ;), to the point where the modded version of WIAB is akin to "What's Up, Tiger Lily?" )
 

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To be honest, my fear is that any changes made are done in a way that still retains too much inconsistency/ambiguity/contradiction in the story. That's why I advocate an all in or all out approach (an all out approach would leave that evil modder with some serious work to do ;), to the point where the modded version of WIAB is akin to "What's Up, Tiger Lily?" )
I quite agree too, but I fear this will not be the approach, I am betting on a SG situation, for better or worse. Also what up tiver lily is a masterpiece.
 
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I quite agree too, but I fear this will not be the approach, I am betting on a SG situation, for better or worse. Also what up tiver lily is a masterpiece.
Well, this was worth a try... ;)

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Well, this was worth a try... ;)

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but what the sh''''t is that!!?That's no sense,if ocean fear about patreon rules,why doesn't patch like all others games of incest gen?it's simple and works,the idea of the reality show will desroy all the plot of the game...lol
 

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but what the sh''''t is that!!?That's no sense,if ocean fear about patreon rules,why doesn't patch like all others games of incest gen?it's simple and works,the idea of the reality show will desroy all the plot of the game...lol
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Ocean won't do that idea of course, but he will probably scrap all incest stuff ans references. My guess is that MC's parents abandoned him or died or whatever and he was close to the family like, Helen was his mother or father best friend or something like that so he's really, REALLY close to that family, consider them like his own but they aren't related at all.
 
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To bring some closure to the Patreon vs SS issue. I was chatting with someone on Discord via DM, and he leaves me this image of the SS ToS.


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You can find all of it here:
 
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To bring some closure to the Patreon vs SS issue. I was chatting with someone on Discord via DM, and he leaves me this image of the SS ToS.


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And even if they dont enforce it, its not reaaallly a patreon issue.

If Subscribestar gets as big as patreon, the payment processors will start to take more detailed looks and it will be the exact same development.

I never bought porn online, but how do these guys get around it lol?
 
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And even if they dont enforce it, its not reaaallly a patreon issue.

If Subscribestar gets as big as patreon, the payment processors will start to take more detailed looks and it will be the exact same development.

I never bought porn online, but how do these guys get around it lol?
The same gang that controls the banks controls the porn industry.
 

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With that one, Ocean still tries to have his cake and eat it too...
Because he CAN have his cake and eat it too. That story was very specifically written to avoid hangups by never addressing the legal status of their relationship. He DOES very clearly and repeatedly address they aren't biologically related, but there is no open discussion of adoption or foster care specifically. There is also never any discussion of what their relationship would be, tending to use their name and implication of that persons role in the others life. The American payment processors would be forced to try to argue the spirit of the law in a situation the water is as murky as a bog. And feel it necessary to single out a very specific game out of the thousands w/o justification.

There is no comparison to what he did in WiAB where he originally openly stated they were related.

I think he's going to have to spell out the changes in this case bc the original still exists and got him in trouble. If he doesn't, all it would take is some asshole reporting a render from the first version with a sexual render from the second version and WiAB gets nuked all over again. No one takes the time to do the research over this sort of thing, so Ocean needs proof of the negative in this case to protect the project. Or else he's going to eventually realize he's left himself to the mercy of a hoard of unhappy patrons who might just decide to blow it all up bc updates are taking too long on Summer's Gone.
 

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To bring some closure to the Patreon vs SS issue. I was chatting with someone on Discord via DM, and he leaves me this image of the SS ToS.


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Nope, they fall under the specific category Abuse or Harm involving Incest. Under the Adult category doesn't mention anything with Incest. If they were really strict about Incest many VN developers and Comics developers would have been shutdown by now.
 

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Nope, they fall under the specific category Abuse or Harm involving Incest. Under the Adult category doesn't mention anything with Incest. If they were really strict about Incest many VN developers and Comics developers would have been shutdown by now.
This was pointed out to me by a developer. And I've told you before, SS is just making the view to the side, just for now.
 

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Yossa? Is that you? :LOL:

I could not possibly disagree more with your view on this. You say there is more to the story than...lets use the words "family relationships" instead of "incest" here. There isn't. Not yet at least. All we have right now is a premise. And that premise is the MC returning to a place he didn't want to go back to, to see people he didn't want to see again because his not-mother got into an accident and refuses to speak now.

No she wasn't hurt. She isn't dying. She doesn't need blood or a vital organ. She just "lost her voice". How does it make any fucking sense whatsoever for William to put himself through something he REALLY doesn't want to just to see an unrelated lady that isn't speaking anymore!?!?!?

So I ask what else is there besides "family relationship drama"?
Not sure of the argument here other than it coming off as saying that the only reason William would return is if it was a family member going through shit. I have family that I'd sooner pour gas on than piss on to put them out if they were on fire. I have a couple friends who I'd prioritize over family in any circumstance. I'd go to hell and back to help them, regardless of the personal risks.

Someone going mute is the result of severe psychological trauma. My eldest sister went through such a period. That's enough to get you there bc that sort of damage can be just as dangerous as physical trauma. The fact that it's the result of a crime is enough justification to keep you there. Now, the trauma just has to justify Helen becoming mute. And if Helen is going to be a LI, that relationship will have to be redefined. Summer's Gone has the benefit of clarifying Nami isn't related biologically and leaving the rest completely vague. At least in regards to the legal terminology that would fire off the red flags.

I agree w/ your comment about Katie. And to clarify, my position is this story can easily be told w/o incest. The problem is, the original exists. The closer we get to certain events repeating, the more necessary it becomes for Ocean to spell things out. Waiting until the end isn't an option bc it would be too easy for an unhappy fan to nuke the project again. Waiting until the end is not an option here. You're talking tens of thousands of fans actively choosing NOT to be cancerous assholes just once for YEARS for us to reach the end of this story. That's an irrational level of faith in humanity.
 

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Not sure of the argument here other than it coming off as saying that the only reason William would return is if it was a family member going through shit. I have family that I'd sooner pour gas on than piss on to put them out if they were on fire. I have a couple friends who I'd prioritize over family in any circumstance. I'd go to hell and back to help them, regardless of the personal risks.

Someone going mute is the result of severe psychological trauma. My eldest sister went through such a period. That's enough to get you there bc that sort of damage can be just as dangerous as physical trauma. The fact that it's the result of a crime is enough justification to keep you there. Now, the trauma just has to justify Helen becoming mute. And if Helen is going to be a LI, that relationship will have to be redefined. Summer's Gone has the benefit of clarifying Nami isn't related biologically and leaving the rest completely vague. At least in regards to the legal terminology that would fire off the red flags.

I agree w/ your comment about Katie. And to clarify, my position is this story can easily be told w/o incest. The problem is, the original exists. The closer we get to certain events repeating, the more necessary it becomes for Ocean to spell things out. Waiting until the end isn't an option bc it would be too easy for an unhappy fan to nuke the project again. Waiting until the end is not an option here. You're talking tens of thousands of fans actively choosing NOT to be cancerous assholes just once for YEARS for us to reach the end of this story. That's an irrational level of faith in humanity.
Now he has clarify that they may have different parents, before S1, even that was ambiguous and before I don't think it was defined. But I agree that is much easier in SG to muddle the waters than it is here, even if the intent is pretty clear. Regarding WiaB, I also agree that the more clear he is the better, problem is that he has not a reccord of being clear
 

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Not sure of the argument here other than it coming off as saying that the only reason William would return is if it was a family member going through shit. I have family that I'd sooner pour gas on than piss on to put them out if they were on fire. I have a couple friends who I'd prioritize over family in any circumstance. I'd go to hell and back to help them, regardless of the personal risks.
Understandable. And I did mention that there are always exceptions. But my point still stands. There is an implied duty and obligation when it comes to family that simply isn't there otherwise. And remember, William was not happy whatsoever to get that call or to return to Wollust. If he does, there HAS to be a damn good reason for it.

I agree w/ your comment about Katie. And to clarify, my position is this story can easily be told w/o incest. The problem is, the original exists. The closer we get to certain events repeating, the more necessary it becomes for Ocean to spell things out. Waiting until the end isn't an option bc it would be too easy for an unhappy fan to nuke the project again. Waiting until the end is not an option here. You're talking tens of thousands of fans actively choosing NOT to be cancerous assholes just once for YEARS for us to reach the end of this story. That's an irrational level of faith in humanity.
I agree that the story can be told without incest. Whether Ocean can do it or not is a different matter. What you can't argue against is that the game up to this point was literally based around family dynamics. There is nothing else to it. Cut off the family element and you're left with what exactly? Landlords and tenants? Roommates and childhood friends? It's not the same thing.

Also agree with you and it's a point of contention between me and yossa999. He is fine with Ocean making whatever retcons and changes necessary throughout the development of the game. I, on the other hand, think it's an awful and unsustainable way to tell a story. Imagine Tolkien spending 15 opening chapters describing hobbits and The Shire as we know them to midway through the story suddenly change hobbits into 10 foot tall skeleton-like creatures and The Shire as a desolate wasteland.
 
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Understandable. And I did mention that there are always exceptions. But my point still stands. There is an implied duty and obligation when it comes to family that simply isn't there otherwise. And remember, William was not happy whatsoever to get that call or to return to Wollust. If he does, there HAS to be a damn good reason for it.


I agree that the story can be told without incest. Whether Ocean can do it or not is a different matter. What you can't argue against is that the game up to this point was literally based around family dynamics. There is nothing else to it. Cut off the family element and you're left with what exactly? Landlords and tenants? Roommates and childhood friends? It's not the same thing.

Also agree with you and it's a point of contention between me and yossa999. He is fine with Ocean making whatever retcons and changes necessary throughout the development of the game. I, on the other hand, think it's an awful and unsustainable way to tell a story. Imagine Tolkien spending 15 opening chapters describing hobbits and The Shire as we know them to midway through the story suddenly change hobbits into 10 foot tall skeleton-like creatures and The Shire as a desolate wasteland.
I kind of gave you an example of the family dynamic: Vito Corleone, Santino Corleone, and Tom Hagen. I don't remember if it was explicitly shown in the movie, but in the book, Tom was kind of a street kid, and Santino brought him into their home, treated him like his brother and Vito let him stay, and accepted him as his son, although officially, as far as I remember, there was no guardianship or adoption.

It is clear that the concept of "family" is quite specific in the Godfather, but the Zanes are also not quite ordinary. So Willie, without further ado, rushed home to help Helen when Leia called, just as Tom would have done for Vito, even though the Irish kid probably didn't have a drop of Italian blood in his veins, and much less Corleone blood, which seems to be the deciding factor for you in this "unique family dynamics" of yours.

Now about the retcons. Do you really not understand that the game started when the rules weren't as strict (at least not as strictly enforced) as they are now, and many developers had to adapt their games to the changed rules? What do you prefer to play, the dead Life Happened or the live WiAB? Why this shitty argument over and over again, "haha, the landlady's tenant, what a bad writing". That's one thing.

Secondly, fuck, if I could even understand what the old WiAB was about. Just a mosaic of barely connected events, characters and weird conversations between them. I came to WiAB after SG and thought, "Seriously? The developer of SG made this shit? This was probably his first attempt at AVNs." It wasn't until the lake scene that some parts of the story started to make sense to me, although it was still very rough. And it wasn't until chapter six that I could watch it without my eyes bleeding.

Some people come to the development of AVN with writing experience or storytelling skills, some learn in the process. If you think Ocean started WiAB with a solid background in writing novels and scripts, reread his old posts, he was learning as he went along. So the plot changed along with his own evolutions. I partially agree that most of us would probably lock in a certain version and not change it anymore, no matter how much we wanted to. For example, such a strong connection between WiAB and SG in the last chapters is clearly a late addition, I don't think he originally planned anything more than maybe mentioning characters from another game and maybe a few cameos that don't affect the plot.

Well, accept it or find something more in line with your vision of how the game should be developed. Or, even better, create your own and show them all how to do it right. Or don't do it and keep complaining. :KEK:
You definitely won't impress Ocean with this, the dude is pretty stubborn, otherwise these games would have been abandoned long ago after all the ups and downs.
For example, I’m quite curious in how the guy will get out of the plot knots that he himself tied. So far he entertained me with his games so I'm okay with the changes.

And the most important thing about retcons. I'm too lazy to look for the post, it was here in the zone, although about SG. Ocean basically promised that there would be retcons over retcons. :KEK:
He said something like: "Some things that seem like make no sense now will become clear later, as the plot progresses. Moreover, some current events will acquire additional meaning or even change it."

P.S. Fuck you for making me to look for the exact quote:
[...]Weird, unexplainable behavior is supposed to happen... Because at some point, far deeper in the story, the pieces will align and a light bulb will go off.

It will change the meaning of entire scenes that were three, seven, or fourteen Chapters ago.

And this doesn't just apply to Nami.
It affects pretty much every character. Many of them have quirks the players see as weird, unreasonable behavior.

And that's because most of it hasn't been explained yet. (And most of it won't be explained in detailed words, but a lot of hints, etc. will be dropped that give you a deeper insight into a character's motives & desires.)
If you think that you didn't sign up for this when you signed up for this thread - run, Forest, run! :KEK:
 

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Because he CAN have his cake and eat it too. That story was very specifically written to avoid hangups by never addressing the legal status of their relationship. He DOES very clearly and repeatedly address they aren't biologically related, but there is no open discussion of adoption or foster care specifically. There is also never any discussion of what their relationship would be, tending to use their name and implication of that persons role in the others life. The American payment processors would be forced to try to argue the spirit of the law in a situation the water is as murky as a bog. And feel it necessary to single out a very specific game out of the thousands w/o justification.

There is no comparison to what he did in WiAB where he originally openly stated they were related.

I think he's going to have to spell out the changes in this case bc the original still exists and got him in trouble. If he doesn't, all it would take is some asshole reporting a render from the first version with a sexual render from the second version and WiAB gets nuked all over again. No one takes the time to do the research over this sort of thing, so Ocean needs proof of the negative in this case to protect the project. Or else he's going to eventually realize he's left himself to the mercy of a hoard of unhappy patrons who might just decide to blow it all up bc updates are taking too long on Summer's Gone.
In SG, Ocean left some dialogue in there that still acts like a nod, nod, wink, wink.

Nika is asked TWICE why Cheeto is a redhead.

The very CLEAR inference here is that the person asking the question assumes Nika and Cheeto are biologically related, hence they ask why does Nami have red hair when Nika has black hair. There is simply no other reason to ask such a question.

Does Nika answer unequivocally that, hey, we're not related? No, he doesn't.

Those two sequences of dialogue were left ambiguous and in the game, even after the rework.

Do you really think Ocean has the financial resources to go after the "payment processors"? If, for any reason, Ocean or any other AVN Dev loose their income streams because of future third-party provider bans, there is very little they can do about it.

Now he has clarify that they may have different parents, before S1, even that was ambiguous and before I don't think it was defined. But I agree that is much easier in SG to muddle the waters than it is here, even if the intent is pretty clear. Regarding WiaB, I also agree that the more clear he is the better, problem is that he has not a reccord of being clear
I think an added complication is one we cannot gauge. How important is it to the overall story, for example, that William be a Zane - be blood related to at least Helen and Dylan? Only Ocean can answer that because only Ocean knows how the plot/story advances beyond what he's made public up to Ch 3. Leia and Katie not being Zane's is already out because of their integration into SG Season 1.

I acknowledge that there are several things in the current plot that don't work if William isn't blood related. For example, the inference that William was always Helen's favorite child is unrealistic if he isn't blood (unless Helen is a colossal pervert who likes young boys. Umm, let's not go there).

In terms of relationships, the three "siblings" (Leia, Kate, William) can have a deep, complicated family-like relationship without necessarily all being blood-related, provided they were all brought up for most of their childhoods under the same roof. That much is possible and I know this from personal experience. [EDIT: ... and yossa999 gives an excellent expansion on this subject of non-blood family ties here: https://f95zone.to/threads/where-it-all-began-ch-3-full-oceanlab.19856/post-15994348]

You are right, Ocean doesn't have a good record for being unambiguous...
 
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