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Another Zane Family?! The plot thickens.
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I'm sure it will happen as he builds the next couple of chapters, then a final continuity polish at the end of season one. I think right now, he's just been focusing on getting the story clearly away from the danger territory. My guess is he'll extend the changes to SG S1 with pure script rewrites for simple changes, because there won't need to be many, if at all, but he might simply for clarity, then make sure of all the changes in S2Ch1, then go back and polish Ch1-4 WiaB while doing Ch5.I think he really need tk ajust early scenes. Make William more suspicious of Dylan and Helen, make them more distant. The tone difference is huge and is my only complain about the how the solver the issue, is really better than I hoped for. But just drop it all, don't make references to Helen as a mother or something like that. Make their relationship one born of necessity and practicality not love , and tone down Katie bully, she can't have be bullied as hard if she was the blood child. Still there is a couple of plot holes but much less than if he have tryed have is cake and eat it too. I loved the William mirror scene, but I hope that his shame over Leia also os tonned down. All in all. Good update.
That seems legit to me, not to set him and Miru apart so much as neutralise his potential chaos. At the moment the Zanes don't have any family to accuse of the interference, and Leia's the one who will get the family and the Asanos in trouble. So by Willi returning he's now in a precarious situation where he has to face judgment... but who got Leia to call William back? Emilio and Riri. What's their stake? And who is the mole the fed's have at Leia's? Riri or Emilio spring to mind. But it could be any of the girls, that would be easiest.I wonder if this will be part of the plot in the future, namely the family's attempt to somehow force William into a marriage of convenience and somehow set him and Miru apart?
They're the ones Kata mentions at the farm in ch3Another Zane Family?! The plot thickens.
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My god. What happened to Emilio that he went from this to super gay slay queen barber in SG. I figured he'd be dolled up here in WiaB, too. Its like he had a mid-life crisis after WiaB and decided to glam the fuck up.
You have my permission, not that you need it.Are we allowed to categorize this as slop now? Gourmet slop because visually it is stunning but the writing is on the level of most of the garbage you see in F95.
With each new update, I wonder more and more whether she will be able to stay in power and not get stabbed in the back, with her attitude towards people. William and the rest of the family do not count, they are more or less equal. But look at her disgusting attitude towards her subordinates (the same scene in the glory hole).Prob pissed off queen leia
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I didn't play but Leia seems to be central to the story, you won't be able to avoid a core character, and the sexual dynamic is obviously a driving force too for the plot (it's a porn game). Writing an entire route without her just because people don't like her seems like a lot of work for little benefit, this only works if her relationship with MC has no impact in the others, and I don't think that's the case.Honestly, one of the many disappointments is the lack of options to make clear the lack of interest towards Leia.
Since I expect the "but she got depressed because of William's abandonment" all very sad but then she decided to become a monster.
They talked about Jennifer and Tony briefly in the old non-steam version too, so this is planned. Dylan has a fucked up family.Another Zane Family?! The plot thickens.
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Very unlikely to happen. So suck it up or move on.not until some hero updates the patch
don't like NTR and I don't think it's a slow burn, but Long Story Short is very very good.Pls name a game better than this I will 100 % play this asap espacilly if it has ntr in it
But the same qualitie and slowburn with faster updates
I have to be honest I loved quinn from the college game but hated that she did 180.With each new update, I wonder more and more whether she will be able to stay in power and not get stabbed in the back, with her attitude towards people. William and the rest of the family do not count, they are more or less equal. But look at her disgusting attitude towards her subordinates (the same scene in the glory hole).
Unless the family relationship completely breaks the story now, I've seem fan patches in games that didn't even had it at the beggining, don't underestimate the fans. With that said, if in a year there is not one I'll suck it up, no problem.Very unlikely to happen. So suck it up or move on.
I hope, WiaB can't have the luxury of being the mess that is SG S1. I don't think that I will like it more, because I liked how personal it all felt before, but I think is something that I can like. But futher change will be needded, I don't even think this is the chapter 4 that he had in mind 2 yesrs ago, is a soft reboot where the first 3 chapters don't is fully fitting in with the rest, with would be fine if we have 10 insted of 4, maybe this was one reason to make it bigger, get things better set up.I'm sure it will happen as he builds the next couple of chapters, then a final continuity polish at the end of season one. I think right now, he's just been focusing on getting the story clearly away from the danger territory. My guess is he'll extend the changes to SG S1 with pure script rewrites for simple changes, because there won't need to be many, if at all, but he might simply for clarity, then make sure of all the changes in S2Ch1, then go back and polish Ch1-4 WiaB while doing Ch5.
I think I'm enjoy this a lot more, I like this kind of tension more than the way it was before.
That seems legit to me, not to set him and Miru apart so much as neutralise his potential chaos. At the moment the Zanes don't have any family to accuse of the interference, and Leia's the one who will get the family and the Asanos in trouble. So by Willi returning he's now in a precarious situation where he has to face judgment... but who got Leia to call William back? Emilio and Riri. What's their stake? And who is the mole the fed's have at Leia's? Riri or Emilio spring to mind. But it could be any of the girls, that would be easiest.
They're the ones Kata mentions at the farm in ch3
Already played but a good suggstetion but I think WIAB is better ... hope ocean gets fast updates but no idea how ... or that WIAB wont get ditched by oceandon't like NTR and I don't think it's a slow burn, but Long Story Short is very very good.
Leia had been escalating the drugs before William was back, and has been organising the guns, it's only been a few days and she has the gun shipments alread close. So I think the initial call was EMilio and Riri's terms if Leia wanted their approval. I'm not sure what their power over her is, but maybe she's set them up to contradic her worst impluses, so they can veto her if she's going off the rails? Or maybe they were there from Joe's time when he was running things.I hope, WiaB can't have the luxury of being the mess that is SG S1. I don't think that I will like it more, because I liked how personal it all felt before, but I think is something that I can like. But futher change will be needded, I don't even think this is the chapter 4 that he had in mind 2 yesrs ago, is a soft reboot where the first 3 chapters don't is fully fitting in with the rest, with would be fine if we have 10 insted of 4, maybe this was one reason to make it bigger, get things better set up.
I think that Emilio only gave the ultimatum to call William after the bar scene, but not before, that was Leia introducing chão because she is cornered
looking forward to 2027 so much but if they kill off helen with a rock to the head i will never play vn againLeia had been escalating the drugs before William was back, and has been organising the guns, it's only been a few days and she has the gun shipments alread close. So I think the initial call was EMilio and Riri's terms if Leia wanted their approval. I'm not sure what their power over her is, but maybe she's set them up to contradic her worst impluses, so they can veto her if she's going off the rails? Or maybe they were there from Joe's time when he was running things.
Who cares about the Zanes? Dude added the Winchester boysAnother Zane Family?! The plot thickens.
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