ProofreadingRUS

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Man that script needs a proofreader. And what's with those new crazy long words?
besotted ???
Sounds like someone was drunk when he made up that word and put it in the dictionary.
Don't care if it was used before Jesus Christ was born.
Words like that are being used to make the game sound more intelligent , I guess.
So unless we need a dictionary every time, words like that shouldn't be used.
The game is hard enough as it is. Also for those with that problem, just google it and that's it.
I doubt that word will come up in a real conversation in the real world.
And if it does, I might ask the person to take off the mask and repeat what he or she just said or write it down.
Regardless, that script needs to be looked over twice for mistakes......peace
 
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I'm Not Thea Lundgren!

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Man that script needs a proofreader. And what's with those new crazy long words?
besotted ???
Sounds like someone was drunk when he made up that word and put it in the dictionary.
The script is fine if you speak English as your first language.
The word is around 450 years old so from around Shakespeare's time.
 

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Man that script needs a proofreader. And what's with those new crazy long words?
besotted ???
I'm Spanish and I knew that word. It comes from the French word "sot" meaning stupid or dumb.

Sounds like someone was drunk when he made up that word and put it in the dictionary.
Funnily enough, a common usage of besotted is to say someone became an idiot due to alcohol or drugs.
 
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Opinion: Too much teasing, almost to the point where it is annoying/irritating instead of arousing. Dev needs to understand there is a limit to how much you should tease.
 
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Man that script needs a proofreader. And what's with those new crazy long words?
besotted ???
Sounds like someone was drunk when he made up that word and put it in the dictionary.
The script is fine if you speak English as your first language.
The word is around 450 years old so from around Shakespeare's time.
I'm Spanish and I knew that word. It comes from the French word "sot" meaning stupid or dumb.
Funnily enough, a common usage of besotted is to say someone became an idiot due to alcohol or drugs.
As I understand it the word origin is almost 1k years old. Aristos is right on it being derived from the French Sot, and Sott in Middle English, but it could even have been older (Gallic possibly). They aren't positive when it got cobbled together into besotted, but I think Not Thea probably might have pegged it right as Shakespearean. Sorry if we occasionally throw out big words. It makes us feel smart. Well, me at least. :D

I saw we used it in EP15 when I came on, could have been Cheeky though as I don't remember writing that specific line and we both had a hand in that scene. I do know that I had already used it again in EP18 along with several more uncommon ones. I think big words suit Theresa's personality. >=) Oh, and despite the possible usage I wasn't drunk in either case, never have been, but delirious is a distinct possibility.
 

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Opinion: Too much teasing, almost to the point where it is annoying/irritating instead of arousing. Dev needs to understand there is a limit to how much you should tease.
Could always watch porn? The plumbers and repairmen get right into it usually.

I sometimes think Cheeky teases too much, and he thinks I should tease more. He really plays to the buildup and I tend to make things a bit more porno. We meet somewhere in the middle, but do tend to err more on his side given this is an erotic VN and not just a quick fap. If people get impatient there is always ctrl. :)
 

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Could always watch porn? The plumbers and repairmen get right into it usually.

I sometimes think Cheeky teases too much, and he thinks I should tease more. He really plays to the buildup and I tend to make things a bit more porno. We meet somewhere in the middle, but do tend to err more on his side given this is an erotic VN and not just a quick fap. If people get impatient there is always ctrl. :)
Well to be honest think you could have gone bit farther and faster with Elaine overall, but on the whole there is enough payoff between tease and action in my opinion and reasonable that different people have their own speed.

KingX317 Going for all girls will almost certainly blow up in your face, though some groupings of a few girls might be possible to make them willing to share you. Personally I think even one most do not think possible (Though less likely for threesomes on that one, let alone a foursome and MC might need to make a fast tactical retreat in that one also known run as fast as he can and hide well for a while :p). As long as game is in update though I would say just go for them all and replay for the specific routes you want when game completed.
 
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From reading half a dozen or so pages in this thread alone, yes it will blow up in your face.
Ugh, this makes it really difficult because you don't know whom you should dismiss and how that also might end up blowing up in the MC's face...
Just a few examples:
Will the younger sister help the MC when he drops her and doesn't help her with her issues?
And will the coffee shop girl call the police when she figures out something and the MC doesn't try to fix the whole thing?
If the MC doesn't pursue the younger sister of his step mom (2nd wife of his father) will she even help him or will she side with her sister?
Also, might it turn out positively when he forgives his step mom and gets on better terms with her?
And if the MC doesn't pursue the best friend of his mother (incest patch: his mother) will that cause her to not involve him when her business faces a critical situation which then in succession might lead to her and her friend losing their business?
When the author wants us to dismiss certain women then he shouldn't write the story in a way that makes it very difficult to dismiss them. As of now he really designs this story to blow up in the MC's face.
At least that is how I see it.
Maybe you can drop two to four of the side girls but that's it. And even that might cause some issues later on...
And the ladies are all quite beautiful...
 
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Ugh, this makes it really difficult because you don't know whom you should dismiss and how that also might end up blowing up in the MC's face...
Just a few examples:
Will the younger sister help the MC when he drops her and doesn't help her with her issues?
And will the coffee shop girl call the police when she figures out something and the MC doesn't try to fix the whole thing?
If the MC doesn't pursue the younger sister of his step mom (2nd wife of his father) will she even help him or will she side with her sister?
Also, might it turn out positively when he forgives his step mom and gets on better terms with her?
And if the MC doesn't pursue the best friend of his mother (incest patch: his mother) will that cause her to not involve him when her business faces a critical situation which then in succession might lead to her and her friend losing their business?
When the author wants us to dismiss certain women then he shouldn't write the story in a way that makes it very difficult to dismiss them. As of now he really designs this story to blow up in the MC's face.
At least that is how I see it.
Maybe you can drop two to four of the side girls but that's it. And even that might cause some issues later on...
And the ladies are all quite beautiful...
I think you should just play how you want or go for maximum content on your first playthrough (by romancing everyone). In the patch or next release we will have the quickstart feature incorporated and you can start from any chapter after answering a "few" questions. So it should cut down on the tedious side of replayability.
 

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Question:

I haven't played this game since episode 14 and i used to fuck around with every girl in this game (if you enjoy this game and like almost every character its hard not too) i read that this game wont be a harem game (and ofc doesn't have the harem tag), which is fine, but can i still use this ''playstyle''for now by just flirting with every girl or are there consequences already? Do i need multiple saves?

Thanks in advance

cannot wait to play the last 3 episodes btw:)
 

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can i still use this ''playstyle''for now by just flirting with every girl or are there consequences already? Do i need multiple saves?
No major consequences yet apart form if Katie catches you with Jenna & you tell the truth

Will be consequences in future though, so will need multiple saves to see all content.
 

Cigar-Ferras

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No major consequences yet apart form if Katie catches you with Jenna & you tell the truth

Will be consequences in future though, so will need multiple saves to see all content.
I haven't actually played through like that to see what happens. What does Katie do? Is it just that you ruin relationship/friendship with Katie?
 
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DA22

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I haven't actually played through like that to see what happens. What does Katie do? Is it just that you ruin relationship/friendship with Katie?
Well since your relation with the three main girls is partly also based in your friendship with them and as a sort of adopted family member from past, there is your chance to survive it, but if you really fuck it up you tend to destroy the whole relationship in reality and it will for sure have an impact.

(My personal hope is that the older relation you have with the three main girls, together with the fact you are willing to give up on a few million for them, might save your ass after a cooling down period if you earned plenty of brownie points with them, showed you care for each of them and have not been fooling around behind their backs beyond the three of them and their best friends do like you). Devs may well disagree with this though. :p
 
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