VN Ren'Py Completed Wicked Choices: Book One [Remastered v1.0.1] [ASLPro3D]

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GOOD GOD MAN, ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!?!

Holy crap, that was over 16,000 words and almost 350 renders!! All from a couple of guys who is doing this only part time right now because they can't seem to make it past $1,100 a month in support!!

Honestly, there was a time when I considered that I would've done all of Chapter 4 in one month's time... no kidding!! Man, was I EVER stupid to THINK THAT!!! LOL

But, yeah, I am glad that you liked it bud and enjoyed it as a whole!

As for "nadu", truly was wondering if anyone would notice my addition of that in there... being a fan of Gor, myself, what better way to describe a submissive posture for a character than to use a term or set of them that has become a staple in BDSM...

...though in my opinion, Tarl Cabot wasn't really a DOM in the series.

I agree, Tarl was never a dom, just an "all you can eat buffet" kind of guy that exploited/adapted to the culture/situation. I always loved the Gor books and nadu can make me stand at attention (at least part of me) in 2 seconds flat.

And no, I am not trying to kill you :winkytongue: I just felt that the monologues, in the parts describing the scenes could benefit from more fleshing out. But I do understand that this would augment the volume of text exponentially and would not be feasible. As always you stroke a good balance between what you wanted to do and what you knew you could achieve in the time allotted.

 

[Catwashere]

Forgot to add that this game needs anal and rimjobs!

 

[ASLPro3D]

*snip* all the ones who have slaves *snip but at the same time i would want my own harem...

You do realize that, by that argument, that you'd have to include yourself within that 'hit list' right?

I can't speak to the ending of the game... as it isn't written yet... it only goes up to Chapter 12 right now and also will depend on each person playing it.

Wants, needs, desires... some of them are doable, some of them will not be... going to be honest with you. Some of your worst enemies in this game can turn out to be your strongest ally, depending on choices the player makes, and some that may be your most faithful of follower could get killed before or during the war as well.

Some people have equated this game as a 'Game of Thrones' of adult games... while it wasn't my intent and truth be told, I've only seen two episodes of Game of Thrones and have never read the books but, from what I understand from the things I heard of that series from those who have watched it, people you sometimes least expect in it dies...

...well, same will be true with this game... some by your hand, some by your choices, some by your inaction and some who just can't handle the pressure or truth... NO ONE in this game is SAFE and not everyone will make it to its conclusion.

As for being Powerful, the MC isn't right now... in fact, he is sort of in a state of denial about his role in this whole fucked up situation... Power isn't absolute, nor does Power come without Price... truthfully, I am not making a Disney movie here or a 'YOU CAN HAVE IT ALL' game...

...no...

This is game is my statement about mankind, about religion, about morals and viewpoints.... all of which you can choose from and decide the type of person you'd be if you were that person's shoes... and you'll also have to live with those decisions and the type of person you find yourself to be on your first playthrough...

...what you decide to do after learning and discovering that will be up to you... you can replay it and try different things or you can set it down and accept it for what it is... but this will be no fantasy fairy tale where everything comes up smelling like roses... and not every player is going to get their way...

...life rarely works like that... so too shall this game.

*insert evil laugh*

PS: Yes... the girl that the Monk was having sex with had both female and male genitals... she is an Arch Demon... all of the Archangels and Arch Demons are of both sex.

 

[ASLPro3D]

Thank you @Safetydummy and, yes, we both do see things pretty much the same way... you are correct and thank you for the compliment for my viewpoint and means of which I relayed it.

As for a movie... heh, it would be an interesting one, I'd give you that... but think some of my other, more better thought out stories would fit the bill for movie or television series better... and likely would spare myself the fires of public opinion than what this game would likely cause if done as either. LOL

 

[ASLPro3D]

I agree, Tarl was never a dom, just an "all you can eat buffet" kind of guy that exploited/adapted to the culture/situation. I always loved the Gor books and nadu can make me stand at attention (at least part of me) in 2 seconds flat.

And no, I am not trying to kill you :winkytongue: I just felt that the monologues, in the parts describing the scenes could benefit from more fleshing out. But I do understand that this would augment the volume of text exponentially and would not be feasible. As always you stroke a good balance between what you wanted to do and what you knew you could achieve in the time allotted.

Yeah, my greatest frustration is that, as a book in novel form, we'd already be gearing up for war... this having to do the story with images (in comic book format) is killing me, as there is so much more development that could happen with the characters, with the whole lore and... certainly... feel less rushed to me.

It also tells me that for the other stories that I would like to do in the future for everyone, it is going to be necessary to have a staff of people doing art... because this is really frustrating and I am limited in my own abilities of what I can do myself as an artist and writer... @Palanto Games can probably cite the many times that I've cried pitifully because of this fact.

Maybe once we get better known and have more support, things like that will be different... but, yeah, you aren't alone in that frustration.

PS: Oh and Tarl Cabot was a pussy and push over!! Doesn't mean I didn't enjoy or like the series... but man, it was like the writer was wrestling with the concept of himself throughout... he wanted to see himself as a DOM... but by all definitions, he was only a 'Poser'.

 

[Catwashere]

You do realize that, by that argument, that you'd have to include yourself within that 'hit list' right?

I can't speak to the ending of the game... as it isn't written yet... it only goes up to Chapter 12 right now and also will depend on each person playing it.

Wants, needs, desires... some of them are doable, some of them will not be... going to be honest with you. Some of your worst enemies in this game can turn out to be your strongest ally, depending on choices the player makes, and some that may be your most faithful of follower could get killed before or during the war as well.

Some people have equated this game as a 'Game of Thrones' of adult games... while it wasn't my intent and truth be told, I've only seen two episodes of Game of Thrones and have never read the books but, from what I understand from the things I heard of that series from those who have watched it, people you sometimes least expect in it dies...

...well, same will be true with this game... some by your hand, some by your choices, some by your inaction and some who just can't handle the pressure or truth... NO ONE in this game is SAFE and not everyone will make it to its conclusion.

As for being Powerful, the MC isn't right now... in fact, he is sort of in a state of denial about his role in this whole fucked up situation... Power isn't absolute, nor does Power come without Price... truthfully, I am not making a Disney movie here or a 'YOU CAN HAVE IT ALL' game...

...no...

This is game is my statement about mankind, about religion, about morals and viewpoints.... all of which you can choose from and decide the type of person you'd be if you were that person's shoes... and you'll also have to live with those decisions and the type of person you find yourself to be on your first playthrough...

...what you decide to do after learning and discovering that will be up to you... you can replay it and try different things or you can set it down and accept it for what it is... but this will be no fantasy fairy tale where everything comes up smelling like roses... and not every player is going to get their way...

...life rarely works like that... so too shall this game.

*insert evil laugh*

A harem is not slavery so no you don't need to include yourself in the hit list, i would not force anyone to be in a harem.
I get some are gonna die i really hope the ones i said make it though the only ones i mentioned that i kinda would be fine with dying are the Mothers of Lynara and Syrina.
The ending i hope for is everyone i said making it alive if not then at least the Niece, Carina, Syrina, Lynara making it and of course one of them futa girls need one in the harem.
The daughter of the MC also since she does not seem to be bad but i think Carina is gonna die and that is gonna suck but from what you have said there is gonna be a few endings so maybe one ending all the ones i named survive.
It sucks that the Angles seem to not want to end this with peace because i would do it that way and after peace only a few would be killed since they can't be trusted and are pure evil.

 

[the66]

but this will be no fantasy fairy tale where everything comes up smelling like roses

wait, what? no ?
i'm outta here..

 

[ASLPro3D]

A harem is not slavery so no you don't need to include yourself in the hit list, i would not force anyone to be in a harem.
I get some are gonna die i really hope the ones i said make it though the only ones i mentioned that i kinda would be fine with dying are the Mothers of Lynara and Syrina.
The ending i hope for is everyone i said making it alive if not then at least the Niece, Carina, Syrina, Lynara making it and of course one of them futa girls need one in the harem.
The daughter of the MC also since she does not seem to be bad but i think Carina is gonna die and that is gonna suck but from what you have said there is gonna be a few endings so maybe one ending all the ones i named survive.
It sucks that the Angles seem to not want to end this with peace because i would do it that way and after peace only a few would be killed since they can't be trusted and are pure evil.

Ugh... you are not going to be happy then, because some of the ones that you say you'd like to see make it, may not... and some you don't think will, will survive... again, a lot of it is going to depend on the choices you make or don't make... some choices may not even matter.

I get what you want and you think it would be cool... but what I can tell you is that not everything you want is going to happen... as for what will happen and what won't... well, I guess you're just going to have to stick around and see.

 

[ASLPro3D]

wait, what? no View attachment 102058 ?
i'm outta here..

OH SWEET MOTHER OF GOD, MY EYES..DAMN MY EYES!!!

That's it!! Now everyone must DIE!!! UGH!!! Where's the bleach!!

 

[ASLPro3D]

PS: @Catwashere, not to be a further pain-in-the-rump than I've already been... but have you ever tried to get 3 women (let alone two) to agree on being willing to share a man?? Because, I can tell you... you'd be hitting the lottery if you could (or they were planning on being such just to get their hands on your money).

No, to find women that would be willing to share you with others, to not be the central focus of your attention and affection, they have to have a good amount of submissiveness in them and a willingness to share...

...either that or part of some screwed up cult!

 

[Catwashere]

Ugh... you are not going to be happy then, because some of the ones that you say you'd like to see make it, may not... and some you don't think will, will survive... again, a lot of it is going to depend on the choices you make or don't make... some choices may not even matter.

I get what you want and you think it would be cool... but what I can tell you is that not everything you want is going to happen... as for what will happen and what won't... well, I guess you're just going to have to stick around and see.

You can't kill Lynara and Syrina you just can't they are freaking awesome and the niece needs a good life after that crazy shit that happened, we must have a way to make sure they survive i mean if they have to die than i want the option to just kill everyone and go pure evil and destroy all life, "i'll be a destroyer" life would be stupid if the best 2 characters die and someone who deserves peace like the niece.
Carina i can understand dying though she is freaking awesome! I get it is gonna be crazy with death but there has to be a way to save them since they would be great leaders and could bring peace.
We need more than one ending we need like 5 endings based on the choices we make.

 

[Catwashere]

PS: @Catwashere, not to be a further pain-in-the-rump than I've already been... but have you ever tried to get 3 women (let alone two) to agree on being willing to share a man?? Because, I can tell you... you'd be hitting the lottery if you could (or they were planning on being such just to get their hands on your money).

No, to find women that would be willing to share you with others, to not be the central focus of your attention and affection, they have to have a good amount of submissiveness in them and a willingness to share...

...either that or part of some screwed up cult!

If it came to making peace and saving the world i think Lynara and Syrina would do it and Carina would do what Lynara wanted as for the niece if you saved her from her family she would also and as for the futa race i don't know enough about them yet to say.
There are men that do have more than one woman but yes it is hard but like i said in this type of world that you made it would be easy if it was for peace and if the MC truly treated them all good and was a decent person it could work.
If i was the MC i would treat them all good and would not treat any of them worse than the others and by being with them it would make peace easier seeing how the princess's/now queens are in a relationship.

Disclaimer i got kicked out of school so my grammar sucks since i never learned it at least my spelling is good.
I just hope people when reading my comments can understand what i'm saying.

 

[El bacca Del Chew]

but have you ever tried to get 3 women (let alone two) to agree on being willing to share a man??

Mormon fondamendalist.

EDIT: thinking about, this is the ultimate goal of many users around, see in many threads, the harem's fans who wish to be the only male in every story.
Omg, this forum is a mormon church !! hahahaha
@ASLPro3D there's an idea of game here

 

[ASLPro3D]

Well have to wait to see what we see when we see it...

As I am sure many will tell you... I am not going to reveal things, until it is time to do so. :evilsmile:

 

[Tenn2017]

I played the first one there wasn't a problem this one the latest I get a execption error when ignoring it it repays ignoring then game over. Not sure why as I said the first worked. Any ideas how to fix this?

 

[Palanto]

I played the first one there wasn't a problem this one the latest I get a execption error when ignoring it it repays ignoring then game over. Not sure why as I said the first worked. Any ideas how to fix this?

Posting the exception error would help. But what do you mean with first and then the latest? You need to download the FULL GAME version 0.4.4.1 and extract it somewhere, then go to the same place and extract the v0.4.5.0 at the exact same location. It will ask you to overwrite all the older files. then you can start the game in the latest version.... Please check the Install Instructions / How to Update video in the OP. (Turn the volume of your speakers / headphones up if you want to watch the video )

 

[Catwashere]

I played the first one there wasn't a problem this one the latest I get a execption error when ignoring it it repays ignoring then game over. Not sure why as I said the first worked. Any ideas how to fix this?

The video below shows how to update to newer version this is fast and easy.
Warning though my voice sucks so you have to hear it for like 25 seconds! XD

PS. The OP has Installation Tutorial: click on that and it has a longer version of how to update the game to the newer version my video is shorter.

 

[Safetydummy]

I have a quick question/issue- hopefully somebody knows the answer to and would be willing to share
my game has No Music whatsoever. There's supposed to be music, right? Are there supposed to be sound effects as well?
If so, I don't have those either...

I was contemplating waiting on an updated walkthrough (after 4.2.1), but something that @ASLPro3D said kinda resonated with me- he said that the choices you make decide the type of person you will become (in game, but I guess that's also true for real life), so here I go blindly without a safety-net into the great unknown (hopefully I don't bugger the entire fate of all involved...).

 

[Palanto]

I have a quick question/issue- hopefully somebody knows the answer to and would be willing to share
my game has No Music whatsoever. There's supposed to be music, right? Are there supposed to be sound effects as well?
If so, I don't have those either...

I was contemplating waiting on an updated walkthrough (after 4.2.1), but something that @ASLPro3D said kinda resonated with me- he said that the choices you make decide the type of person you will become (in game, but I guess that's also true for real life), so here I go blindly without a safety-net into the great unknown (hopefully I don't bugger the entire fate of all involved...).

Well to answer your question: There isn't yet, except for one part near the end of the game (chapter four part four). I tried adding music and sfx and ambient sounds, but I didn't get very far yet, I'm still at the prologue with those additions.
Sorry about that, but I'll try to add music and sfx in due time. And the next game will definitely have sounds and music (so will Book II of Wicked Choices ) right from the get go

About the walkthrough, as we already said some many pages back. We only did it as a one time thing for free since it was my fault that everyone had to start all over again. If a fan wants to do a seperate Walkthrough we don't mind adding it to the OP but the one we do won't be available for free, sorry.

 

[ASLPro3D]

I have a quick question/issue- hopefully somebody knows the answer to and would be willing to share
my game has No Music whatsoever. There's supposed to be music, right? Are there supposed to be sound effects as well?
If so, I don't have those either...

I was contemplating waiting on an updated walkthrough (after 4.2.1), but something that @ASLPro3D said kinda resonated with me- he said that the choices you make decide the type of person you will become (in game, but I guess that's also true for real life), so here I go blindly without a safety-net into the great unknown (hopefully I don't bugger the entire fate of all involved...).

@Safetydummy there is only two places where there is music/sound in the game... the main menu opening and with the asteroid.

@Palanto Games and I had discussed injecting more into the game, even using our support money and buying memberships to music and sound effect places to begin the task of injecting those things into the game... but, while doing so, we discovered that in some crucial areas of the game, where the storyline is thickest, the music and sound effects ran so long it became annoying and would force people to skip through the text... keeping them from getting the information that they will need to make the critical judgements that they will need to make in future releases.

So there is nothing wrong with your system...