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Liked the update (as always). The use of archaic spellings/words fits the story. Looking forward Chapter 5.
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- Jul 2, 2017
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I come home, dl the monthly patch, view the video (it wasn't necessary, but I like to hear Palanto), apply the patch, start the game and works!
It's no magic and I'm not a genious, just pay attention.
It's no magic and I'm not a genious, just pay attention.
- Oct 19, 2017
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Finished up the story so far. I enjoyed it! The nice pacing and flow between the well written story and the sexual content is different and nice, rather than just being all build up and then a sex fest which is seemingly the norm now. I'm looking forward to the future updates, I do worry about it all being a lot for you all, with all the story threads you have. Thanks!
- Jan 28, 2018
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Damn this is a dark game! I really can't wait to start getting revenge i hope one option is the MC to decide who to kill and who to save and i hope we can make some of them slaves. Yes some of you know i have a hard time with certain genres but i'm fine if the MC is the one doing the cheating and torturing some of these characters need to be punished.
A good ending would be to decide who dies, lives, is a slave and who is gonna be part of the MC's Harem. I mean think about it the MC is being cheated on and his Niece went through hell why not get revenge and also say fuck it and make a harem.
I would have the Niece, Carina, Lynara and her mother, Syrina an her mother, plus some of the slaves that are in Yomi-no-Kumi so far and maybe more.
You can guess the ones who would be killed and turned into slaves.
PS. We have have different taste and things we like and hate and things we can handle in no way am i saying this game sucks or saying anything bad about others the comment above is me just venting out what i want/hope for.
PSS. This is one of the games i look forward to the most and the creators deserve all the support they get.
A good ending would be to decide who dies, lives, is a slave and who is gonna be part of the MC's Harem. I mean think about it the MC is being cheated on and his Niece went through hell why not get revenge and also say fuck it and make a harem.
I would have the Niece, Carina, Lynara and her mother, Syrina an her mother, plus some of the slaves that are in Yomi-no-Kumi so far and maybe more.
You can guess the ones who would be killed and turned into slaves.
PS. We have have different taste and things we like and hate and things we can handle in no way am i saying this game sucks or saying anything bad about others the comment above is me just venting out what i want/hope for.
PSS. This is one of the games i look forward to the most and the creators deserve all the support they get.
While I might be able to sort of agree with that... the problem is that the vocabulary that I use in my game is the same vocabulary that I use when I talk normally, so I wouldn't even know which words to drop because to me they are common, everyday words to me.On a serious note here, with this update i had to grab the dictionary 3 times at least, i understood the general meening so it was for pure precision only...but you know even if it is an individual exemple of a non english native. It might say a few about how your style can be seen by others.
I enjoy learning new words and expand my knowledge in that matter, but may not be the case of the majority.
I think you know where i'm going at with this, and might be take under consideration, just a bit
Don't change ! i know you won't but that 's a factor of the whole impact effect.
Heck, I thought I was dumbing it down some for people already!!
It would seem I am more archaic than I ever thought I was. ensive:
- Apr 3, 2017
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Nope it was not what i meant.
In other words, let's say that non natives are learning english at school which give us the knowledge of a junior high school student, with time and if we interact with english speakers with can achieve to a senior level. And you, you are at college level and as i said i can understand the general meaning of what you said but sometimes some terms are more specific and required an extended vocabulary which we don't have at first.
It is not archaic, it is just more extend, for exemple look at American blockbusters language, it is quite basic in order to be worldwide understood. Macbeth in is original form wouldn't be a 1 billion earning success...(nowadays)
I do volontary take extreme and caricatural exemples here, and as i said it is just to put in perspective the impact of your style can have on non natives...and don't get me wrong i never said to lower it down to concerns the most, because arts are also here to pull us up.
My statement was just and merely an observation based on ONE exemple.
I wouldn't exactly say it is my "calling" yet... @Safetydummy, as it doesn't quite pay the bills yet; BUT, it is indeed a passion of mine to write, create intriguing stories, characters and situations, weaving it in a nice little package that can cause people to identify with it or get them thinking about something.At times like this, I wish there was a "really, really, like" button.
Well I, for one, am glad that you found your true "calling"- y'all have created an amazing game and I cannot wait to see which direction you take it in with future updates.
I know what you mean and if they aren't wearing it like a badge- they're hiding behind it, claiming "I'd never do [blank]/I don't do [blank]" and then you find out that they're the most flagrant of offenders- and it's usually some of the most dishonest, heinous, debauched, immoral, maligned things imaginable. I just had something like that happen in IRL- so I speak from experience.
It's good to shake people up, every now and again, and make them take a couple of steps back and possibly re-think everything that they believe in or know. Tbh, this would make one kick-ass movie- of course, I'm sure some people would have the cross they're going to nail you to available right after the premiere... or at least a stake and couple of torches.
Again, though, that's the thing that makes your story so scary and compelling- what if? Most of us know after the Council of Trent- a sanitization of sorts took place, not to mention the evidence that exists and is tangible- that a w-h-o-o-o-o-l-e lot of other stuff happened well before we started recording it.
Nail on the head about all that you said beyond that though, from the manner in which most "righteous" individuals behave, offering two sides... a side they show everyone versus the side of whom they really are, but put everyone on blast because they think they are better than everyone else...
...right up to the Council of Trent.
Don't get me wrong, even though I didn't complete my training to become a priest, I still DO believe in God... however, my 'walk with Him' is not a public one, a private one not for show, nor do I let it be influenced or directed by the words and the desires of man... and, whether I was right/wrong in the path that I choose will be determined when it comes my time to be 'judged'.
When it DOES come to that time, when I skid across the finish line and through the pearly gates, with my ass on fire and my hair standing up and me screaming: "Whew, what a RIDE!!" and I get taken to stand before Him... I will be alone... I won't have a pastor there, a pope, a bishop, minister or priest... just me.
And... when He asks me: "Why did you do such-and-such?"
I doubt seriously that He is going to take: "Well... because so-and-so told me, I was supposed to do it that way."
Putting your faith in man to tell you what God wants from YOU, to me, is asking for trouble.
Man is greedy, driven by their own passions and 99% out of the time out only for themselves... they (or at least some of them) may mean well, but they are prone to mistakes and will ALWAYS interpret something to fit their needs, passions, wants and desires... and quite fallible.
A book written by man (or men), during a great length of time and through a period when the world was a tumultuous mess of one conflict after another, after another and after another, as well as, transcribed and rewritten over and over again by men who had passions, intentions and motives of their own and believing that none of those fallible intentions never made it between the covers is foolhardy... at least to me.
I mean, we are talking about a book that has been used to start wars and conflicts, that was used to torture and lash people to be burned at the stake... a book of ideals, written or transcribed by man, that's message even conflicts with what is written in it so that it goes from "An eye for an eye" of revenge to "Love thy enemy as you love yourself" of forgiveness...
So either God is seriously Bi-Polar... going from a Vengeful and Wrathful God of fire and brimstone to a God of love, peace and forgiveness... or man greatly influenced that book to use it as a tool to justify their actions or try to bring about a change that they hoped to see from mankind.
And if the latter is true (which is most likely), then why couldn't it have been a published manifesto contrived by an alien race with the purpose of manipulating mankind into helping them to accomplish their own goals, while also allow man to use it for their own selfish desires?
Which, just by those very thoughts by me... would, by every definition make me (and any that agreed with them) the antichrist... so it was that thought and the basis for the creation of this story and game. :angel:
ROFL!!! That is quite a funny image and wouldn't be far from the truth knowing me!!
Oh... I can't lie, I would've made a terrible priest and I would've likely have used my station of power improperly, knowing the sort of person that I am.
My desire to become a priest was born out of a desire to take comfort in God to ease the hurt and pain that I felt I was suffering inside of myself... to find and have a purpose, beyond one of pain, emptiness and suffering.
I eventually found the balance inside myself that I desperately needed and wanted while growing up, thankfully, but had I been in a position of 'power' over others when I found that balance, I would've likely taken advantage of it... as many other priests have done themselves (though I wouldn't have descended so low as to playing with little boys)... and, as such, would've been furthest from the goals and desires that I had for myself.
Yeah, I'd have failed miserably as a priest... some things are, thankfully, not meant to be... me being a priest was certainly one of them!
I can certainly understand that wish and desire @rogosh and you will certainly be getting it with Chapter 5 and Chapter 6, however, like any novel, Chapter 4... for as long as it was and took to complete... was Lynara's chapter and backstory.
More???
GOOD GOD MAN, ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!?!
Holy crap, that was over 16,000 words and almost 350 renders!! All from a couple of guys who is doing this only part time right now because they can't seem to make it past $1,100 a month in support!!
Honestly, there was a time when I considered that I would've done all of Chapter 4 in one month's time... no kidding!! Man, was I EVER stupid to THINK THAT!!! LOL
But, yeah, I am glad that you liked it bud and enjoyed it as a whole!
As for "nadu", truly was wondering if anyone would notice my addition of that in there... being a fan of Gor, myself, what better way to describe a submissive posture for a character than to use a term or set of them that has become a staple in BDSM...
...though in my opinion, Tarl Cabot wasn't really a DOM in the series.
Thank you for the feedback and praise @potplant and I agree!!!!
Or worse... an endlessly, drawn out process of waiting over a year or more just to get a blowjob from a character (Dating my Daughter, Big Brother and too many more to list here)...
Really glad to hear that you are enjoying the balance that we are trying to employ in our title and yes, there are a lot of story threads, but don't worry, they will be closed over time... you think there are a lot of them in this story, you should've seen all of the story threads that I had in my Novel "Ebon Knights: Knight's Fall", that one had almost double the threads that you see in "Wicked Choices"!
I think @Wyrme and @Palanto Games can tell you (having read my novel) that with the exception of the main thread which will be continued in the sequel or game we do, that I closed all of them off and tied them up with a neat little bow *wink* so, you can expect that I will do the same with this one as well!
Yes, this game can be pretty dark... each character in it has their own little backstory, interests and desires which are clearly demonstrated by their actions and helps to drive home the importance of the mission that you, as the MC, has had thrust upon you.
Some will call for revenge, some will call for temperance and some will require a little of both to make it to the end... how and what level of each is going to be up to you as the player to determine... some you may enjoy, some you many not and some may come with repercussions just like they would in life.
I try to tell people to think of this as a VERY MATURE and ADULT STYLE 'Mass Effect' where your decisions are going to matter more than just some altered colored, predetermined ending by the creators... but my warning remains for everyone, while this is a fantasy story, the decisions you make will have realistic outcomes bound in real world consequences...
...for example, you may want to kill William... and he might actually deserve it... but killing someone comes with consequences... attracting the attention of authorities, prison, the death penalty... and, ultimately, would keep you from being able to accomplish the goals and mission.
So, to be brutally honest, I won't be putting that option in the game for dealing with William... instead, there will be other ways in which to deal with him. It may not be as immediately satisfying to ones that want instant revenge, but for the sake of the story and its direction, instant revenge is detrimental... one needs to be creative in their revenge and in the handling of situations.
You will have the ability for a harem, you can be the ruler of it all (if you so decide), you will have your revenge... but to have all of those things, you are going to have to be clever... think ahead... and plot your way through decisions that you may not see the outcome of them for several releases...
One example would be the relationship between Carina and Lynara... only now, several months later after your previous choices determined the outcome of this chapter... and the choices made in this one will still be felt in coming chapters... if you choose wrong, you aren't going to know it till it bites you in the ass and you'll have to contend with those choices, just like you would in life...
...in short... this isn't going to be a little slice of porn heaven, this is going to take planning, thought, strategy and the ability to keep your emotions in check if you want to truly succeed.
Good points!! :eazyHype::eazyHype::eazyHype:
Thank you, my friend!!! :happyblush:happyblush:happyblush:happyblush:happyblush:happyblush:happyblush
- Dec 17, 2017
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"Revenge is a dish best served cold."
Justice can be swift and be effective.
Revenge, proper revenge, requires time to simmer. It can be more effective to let the target go on for a while knowing and waiting for the hammer to drop, not knowing when or where it will happen.
Or so I have been told. :angel::evilsmile:
Justice can be swift and be effective.
Revenge, proper revenge, requires time to simmer. It can be more effective to let the target go on for a while knowing and waiting for the hammer to drop, not knowing when or where it will happen.
Or so I have been told. :angel::evilsmile:
Well spoken and quite right!
Um... not that I would, you know, uh... have experience in performing revenge at all...
I'm... ahem... innocent of such things!
- Dec 17, 2017
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It is not you performing revenge if the target gets to a point mentally/physically to where they do it for you.
In...theory. Yeah, in theory.
In...theory. Yeah, in theory.
- Jan 18, 2018
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I wouldn't exactly say it is my "calling" yet... @Safetydummy, as it doesn't quite pay the bills yet; BUT, it is indeed a passion of mine to write, create intriguing stories, characters and situations, weaving it in a nice little package that can cause people to identify with it or get them thinking about something.
Nail on the head about all that you said beyond that though, from the manner in which most "righteous" individuals behave, offering two sides... a side they show everyone versus the side of whom they really are, but put everyone on blast because they think they are better than everyone else...
...right up to the Council of Trent.
Don't get me wrong, even though I didn't complete my training to become a priest, I still DO believe in God... however, my 'walk with Him' is not a public one, a private one not for show, nor do I let it be influenced or directed by the words and the desires of man... and, whether I was right/wrong in the path that I choose will be determined when it comes my time to be 'judged'.
When it DOES come to that time, when I skid across the finish line and through the pearly gates, with my ass on fire and my hair standing up and me screaming: "Whew, what a RIDE!!" and I get taken to stand before Him... I will be alone... I won't have a pastor there, a pope, a bishop, minister or priest... just me.
And... when He asks me: "Why did you do such-and-such?"
I doubt seriously that He is going to take: "Well... because so-and-so told me, I was supposed to do it that way."
Putting your faith in man to tell you what God wants from YOU, to me, is asking for trouble.
Man is greedy, driven by their own passions and 99% out of the time out only for themselves... they (or at least some of them) may mean well, but they are prone to mistakes and will ALWAYS interpret something to fit their needs, passions, wants and desires... and quite fallible.
A book written by man (or men), during a great length of time and through a period when the world was a tumultuous mess of one conflict after another, after another and after another, as well as, transcribed and rewritten over and over again by men who had passions, intentions and motives of their own and believing that none of those fallible intentions never made it between the covers is foolhardy... at least to me.
I mean, we are talking about a book that has been used to start wars and conflicts, that was used to torture and lash people to be burned at the stake... a book of ideals, written or transcribed by man, that's message even conflicts with what is written in it so that it goes from "An eye for an eye" of revenge to "Love thy enemy as you love yourself" of forgiveness...
So either God is seriously Bi-Polar... going from a Vengeful and Wrathful God of fire and brimstone to a God of love, peace and forgiveness... or man greatly influenced that book to use it as a tool to justify their actions or try to bring about a change that they hoped to see from mankind.
And if the latter is true (which is most likely), then why couldn't it have been a published manifesto contrived by an alien race with the purpose of manipulating mankind into helping them to accomplish their own goals, while also allow man to use it for their own selfish desires?
Which, just by those very thoughts by me... would, by every definition make me (and any that agreed with them) the antichrist... so it was that thought and the basis for the creation of this story and game. :angel:
THIS has to be the most well-thought out and intelligent thing written on the internet- in the history of ever.
Yes, it seems the most pious are the worst bastards (it's directly proportional).
Agreed The Bible was written by man, to be used by man, to control and dominate other men. It was a scare tactic pure and simple and also why the Church (Popes, Bishops, Cardinals, Abbotts, etc.,.) were always advisors to kings and rulers and in many cases had more power over them. The Church always made sure that they were involved somehow and when an opportunity arose for them spread their "influence" to get more power, wealth, disciples- it was God's Will for that siege, raid, crusade, war, ad infinitum ad nausea. The Church was/is/will always be a self-serving institution built upon the 7 Deadly Sins (the irony is palpable) and will do whatever it takes to further its own goals, ambitions, desires, ends. Just as Monty Python once said, "Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!"- and I'm sure the people that did, were none to thrilled about it- and even though it was isolated (occurring mainly in Spain, I believe)- you know similar things happened in other regions as well, that were just as bad if not worse. Religious persecution is pretty much faith racism.
The Bible, The Fall, The 10 Commandments, Free-will, Religion is filled with contradiction after contradiction with even more contradictions. I'm sure we could both carry this conversation out well into the next decade, until both of our poor little fingers are nothing but bony nubs, we're exhausted, dehydrated, and malnourished from doing nothing but typing- suffice it to say, I agree with your points 100%. You could not be more right with all of the instances that you cited. Also, you speak from a platform with much more experience than I. (Sorry if my thoughts appear scattered- it's not often that I get to have an intelligent conversation, so my brain is still re-booting.)
I, also, have my own personal way of dealing with "Him", my walk isn't public, I don't tell people about it, nor do I try to force it down their throats if they have a differing viewpoint or none whatsoever. It's something very private and you should do what feels right for you- not congregate in large building with all of the back-stabbers, liars, thieves, cheats, (basically sinners, is what I'm going for here)- it should be personal and mean something you alone.
Anyway, that was incredibly deep and I appreciate you taking your time to respond with that much information. It's interesting to learn this much about you on a personal level- you are a fascinating individual. I mean that with the utmost respect and admiration.
All that being said, I now have to set some time aside and re-play your wonderful game- it's raining outside and I need a palette cleanser after playing that awful dung-heap that was "Dark Neighborhood" game. Don't ask. Don't play it. Don't even think about it. Thank me later.
P.S. I still think that this game would make for a fantastic movie, hard R-Rated movie at best- but at least the rest of the world would get to experience your genius. (and throw you in an Iron Maiden, shortly thereafter, but hey- eggs and omelettes, right?)