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I respect your decision either way, that's fine, but i have to disagree with your take. At the very end of that horrible scene, Claire musters the courage to decide to break away from that fucked up situation. so, i don't think the MC is going to be under the Mother's thumb, precisely because Claire got pushed too far , and she'll flip to his side. At least, that's my take on it, but i suspect i'm not too far from the mark , here.
Nope, you aren't... Payback is coming!! :evilsmile:
 
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You are right, @Thornhill , we did, but now I am wondering if that was on the original thread and not this one... remember, we redid this so that I was the administrator of the thread instead of @Mark600601 who originally posted the game to the public, so I might need to go and check and fix that.
Yep, you're right, my bad ! For the alias of the Person of Interest ASI , i've got a crappy memory !
 
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Yep, you're right, my bad ! For the alias of the Person of Interest SAI , i've got a crappy memory !
You aren't the only one... but did add RAPE to the listed Genre on the front page now... hopefully, that will help... but man, we lost some very detailed posts by deleting that thread. :(
 
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Nope, you aren't... Payback is coming!! :evilsmile:
Sounds damn good to me! :eazyHype:

On another topic, I believe this is the first game where I need make sort of overview of who is who and how characters are related to each other. Or maybe you could provide something like that? There are a lot of characters in your story.
I hope you don't mind me saying that the story has a tiny bit of soap-opera built in. I like that very much as long as that part doesn't get dominant.
 

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Sounds damn good to me! :eazyHype:

On another topic, I believe this is the first game where I need make sort of overview of who is who and how characters are related to each other. Or maybe you could provide something like that? There are a lot of characters in your story.
I hope you don't mind me saying that the story has a tiny bit of soap-opera built in. I like that very much as long as that part doesn't get dominant.
Yeah, my friend, I kind of figured that people would start to want character cheat sheets to keep in mind those that are the main ones in the game and how thing reflect around them, which is why I've been doing the 'character wallpapers' and providing little hints and outlines about them up for people... I may need to think of a more permanent way in which to provide that information for people's fingertips without giving the farm away... got to think that one out some.

Yeah, it is going to very involved story and soap opera-ish but balanced, that is why we are doing it chapter-wise and not the classic update that you see other creators do... the story is too involved and in-depth to cut the story in the middle of a 'chapter' and leave people hanging for a month... I am already doing mini-cliff hangers at the end of each chapter, wouldn't want to cut the update off in mid-action/story sequence.

The balance that we've got right now is probably the level we are going to stick with... :)
 

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so i just want to thank @ASLPro3D for this compelling story. i will always be a fan of great stories with sexy art on top.i also appreciate your work ethic and cant wait for the next installment. gonna go back to lurking now, bye.
Thank you so much for the compliments, @Zendicar and glad that you are enjoying our work thus far! That said, feel free to pop out of 'lurk mode' any time you want or can, we enjoy the company and companionship! :D
 
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So I finally played the game in one run after having heard so much about it and I understand where all the praise is coming from. The Prolog was one of the hottest sex scenes I ever played in an adult game and chapter 2 was really intense and while it can be disturbing I think it's great that you don't shy away from difficult topics.
One suggestion, maybe I'm too critical, but imo the story would be even more interesting if you wouldn't rely so much on mere description to explain the feelings and relationships and instead use more dialogue/facial expressions/gestures. Chapter 1 with the princess and her handmaiden was basically one huge description, imo it would have been a lot more interesting to play and read if you showed their relationship by letting them interact with each other. Maybe that's nitpicking, but consider it a compliment since the game is pretty great in general.
 
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So I finally played the game in one run after having heard so much about it and I understand where all the praise is coming from. The Prolog was one of the hottest sex scenes I ever played in an adult game and chapter 2 was really intense and while it can be disturbing I think it's great that you don't shy away from difficult topics.
One suggestion, maybe I'm too critical, but imo the story would be even more interesting if you wouldn't rely so much on mere description to explain the feelings and relationships and instead use more dialogue/facial expressions/gestures. Chapter 1 with the princess and her handmaiden was basically one huge description, imo it would have been a lot more interesting to play and read if you showed their relationship by letting them interact with each other. Maybe that's nitpicking, but consider it a compliment since the game is pretty great in general.
I wouldn't call it nitpicking so much as a valid point and one that I hope to address if we can get to the stage where we can hire a programmer (and pay for the programmer's work), so that we are freed up to focus solely on story and artwork... the story is EASY for me, it is the programming and rendering of the artwork that takes up the majority of my time... personally, my wish (and this is probably an unreasonable wish, but a wish no less) would be to have a programmer, add sound effects and voice the characters and have another person helping with the artwork... that would be my wish and is a goal that I am striving towards.

Long-term plan/goal/wish is to make enough (like the kind of money SimBro or Redamz makes a month), hire a game production studio whose owner I am friends with (a South Korean game studio that is housed in Delain, China) to handle the programing, artwork and rendering assets, while I focus on writing/story, marketing and voice actors... that is the goal and wish of mine... and going to do what I can to try and get to that point, as... honestly... "Wicked Choices" really isn't my best story... just one in which to showcase my talents as a writer, test the waters of being a game creator and see if I would be able to get interest in my stuff in a field I only have experience in as a gamer... not as a designer.

Would be nice and it is a dream right now... but we can't achieve our potentials or desires if we don't have goals set for ourselves to reach... but right now, just damn happy that people like the work we've done thus far and are willing to support us, not just financially, but also with constructive criticism, advice and positive reinforcement! :D
 

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I wouldn't call it nitpicking so much as a valid point and one that I hope to address if we can get to the stage where we can hire a programmer (and pay for the programmer's work), so that we are freed up to focus solely on story and artwork... the story is EASY for me, it is the programming and rendering of the artwork that takes up the majority of my time... personally, my wish (and this is probably an unreasonable wish, but a wish no less) would be to have a programmer, add sound effects and voice the characters and have another person helping with the artwork... that would be my wish and is a goal that I am striving towards.

Long-term plan/goal/wish is to make enough (like the kind of money SimBro or Redamz makes a month), hire a game production studio whose owner I am friends with (a South Korean game studio that is housed in Delain, China) to handle the programing, artwork and rendering assets, while I focus on writing/story, marketing and voice actors... that is the goal and wish of mine... and going to do what I can to try and get to that point, as... honestly... "Wicked Choices" really isn't my best story... just one in which to showcase my talents as a writer, test the waters of being a game creator and see if I would be able to get interest in my stuff in a field I only have experience in as a gamer... not as a designer.

Would be nice and it is a dream right now... but we can't achieve our potentials or desires if we don't have goals set for ourselves to reach... but right now, just damn happy that people like the work we've done thus far and are willing to support us, not just financially, but also with constructive criticism, advice and positive reinforcement! :D
That sounds very ambitious. I wish you much success with your plans, the game so far is definitely promissing and already more intriguing than almost any other adult game. :D
 

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I'm wondering what kind of problems you have with the programming? So far it all works like a charm, I don't see you having much problems. Only if you wanted the game to have branches or if you wanted to make a single game with each chapter as an update instead of a new game. But if that's all not the case then where's the problem? :) Didn't catch any bugs so far.


p.S.: Changed my name from Maggotcorps to Palanto Games because that's the name I use for my game later ;)
 
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ASLPro3D on Patreon said:
this is the goal that we believe we need to reach to hire a freelance programmer help to make our game even better. This would include carrying over “points” gathered from the previous “chapter” to the next and add some other tweaks we’d like to see added to the game.
Ah so you do want to have points in the other chapters... maybe even a single game with multiple chapters instead of one chapter per game? :)
 
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I'm wondering what kind of problems you have with the programming? So far it all works like a charm, I don't see you having much problems. Only if you wanted the game to have branches or if you wanted to make a single game with each chapter as an update instead of a new game. But if that's all not the case then where's the problem? :) Didn't catch any bugs so far.

p.S.: Changed my name from Maggotcorps to Palanto Games because that's the name I use for my game later ;)
Ah so you do want to have points in the other chapters... maybe even a single game with multiple chapters instead of one chapter per game? :)
I like the chapter breaks as I have it now, it establishes to the player that scene has changed as has the topic some... almost a passage of time that a player wouldn't sense as much if it was compressed into one large file...

However, I would really like to be able to add a point system for choices like I did in Chapter One where if you lost points by your decisions it would change the outcome of what happens... I needed so much beta testing for Chapter One and need programming help to get that to work the way it did and can't replicate it again... I've, unsuccessfully, tried... so just do the branches old fashioned for right now (by conscious choice by the player).

Not sure what to call it (as I am NOT a programmer) but, I would also like to create a packet or database of information that could be generated based on choices entitled (GOOD/EVIL/NEUTRAL) where points would be assigned to one of those fields if the player makes a choice that would determine their alignment through the use of their decisions and powers, that is stored on the player's system and accessed/updated at the start and during each game and where I could, at a pre-determined point allocation by the player, unlock particular bonus scenes only available to that alignment score... if that makes sense.
 

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Hey, thank you for the new chapter, I have some questions if you don't mind. From what I've seen so far, will all sex scenes be implied? I suppose it's caused by the lack of genitals you deem fit for the job. If so, am I right in assuming you were trying to avoid licensing fee and chosen your friend's genital props (forgive me if the name slipped my mind) instead of Ero ones or are you trying to somehow maintain movie industry standard?

As for the chapters themselves, I'll be honest. You were kind enough to provide them for free, I enjoyed the writhing and definitely think it can make or break a VN. I also like that your models have realistic proportions but I don't see myself chipping in for a 2005 soft porn 3D experience.
 
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***snip*** "Wicked Choices" really isn't my best story... ***snip***
Wait... what? :eek: I consider it awesome and you say this isn't even your best? If there is more of your work out there, can you point me into the direction?
 
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Hey, thank you for the new chapter, I have some questions if you don't mind. From what I've seen so far, will all sex scenes be implied? I suppose it's caused by the lack of genitals you deem fit for the job. If so, am I right in assuming you were trying to avoid licensing fee and chosen your friend's genital props (forgive me if the name slipped my mind) instead of Ero ones or are you trying to somehow maintain movie industry standard?

As for the chapters themselves, I'll be honest. You were kind enough to provide them for free, I enjoyed the writhing and definitely think it can make or break a VN. I also like that your models have realistic proportions but I don't see myself chipping in for a 2005 soft porn 3D experience.
To be honest, I will render it the way that the scene calls for it when I can... as a player of other games, I really get tired of same the same pussies over and over... unfortunately, even using Karina's new figure's pussy, while much more advanced than those that, say Erogenesis has done, it still has limitations and requires (like Erogenesis' pussy) a shit ton of post work (particularly if a cock is inserted into it) to even get it to look somewhat realistic... never mind the fact that many of the pussy props out there aren't even in the proper location on the female in some cases.

While Daz Studio (and to some degree Poser now) allows collision so that when the cock slides in that the pussy reacts and spreads open (a great example of this effect by Daz Studio can be seen in "The Dirty Gynodoctor's Fertilization Clinic" by Gyno Games) but again... every pussy looks the same and I hate redundancy.

So I choose to stimulate primarily through text and make it a cerebral experience where the player has to use a little bit of their imagination, rather than the "smack in your face, same old weathered looking cunt" graphics and props commonly used in other games... and saves me a crapload of frustration and the limitations I am forced to be confined in while using strictly Poser.

Serious, I don't expect everyone to get into my game and I am sure not going to please everyone... that is just the way it is and I am OK with that and only ask people to support me and my project if they get into it, like it and can afford to. But I know what my limitations are, know where I want to go with it while faced with those limitations and am pretty satisfied with the outcome... sometimes you don't have it all up in your face to bust a nut or enjoy yourself. ;)
 

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Wait... what? :eek: I consider it awesome and you say this isn't even your best? If there is more of your work out there, can you point me into the direction?
Nope, honestly, it isn't really my best... I didn't want to be an M. Night Shyamalan and put my most amazing work first while still getting the ground beneath my feet.

Don't get me wrong, I think it is a fairly decent story, but no... certainly not nearly as developed or as good as the other ones that I have planned once I can obtain my goals and be let loose on the gaming community.

As for a good example, I posted a link to my Novel a couple of threads back... that is some of my much better and more developed work... can also find it on Amazon by searching "Ebon Knights: Knights' Fall". :D
 

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You know, not to be a complete dick or asshole, was sharing the post with the wife and she had a pretty good point... isn't ANYTHING done in 3D considered "simulated"??? You know, she's right... even if it is in your face, it's still simulated. :D

Leave it to a woman to set me straight on the reality of things!! LOL
 
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