Well,
I wanted to comment this chapter 2 with Style, so i delayed for days, i wanted to use the perfects terms and some nice sentences to deliver it. Coz you know, i wanted to be a "hommage" to it, i even thought using a translation software for, but you know what fuck it....as usual i might be grammar impair/english disabled but at least it would be my own words !
Then after few days, here i'm:
Jack i hate you !
Being not an expert in adult games and despite i tried a few i'm far from an educated one. And you ruined 90% of them for me. The pace, the characters building, the writing, the twists...and so on and on, i couldn't repeat myself enough when it comes to describe your work. I won't say you are genius, even if it might make your ego glorified, but you are brilliant. You aimed and hit my search and expectations in an adult novel with a diabolical precision.
I hated the first sequence so much as it was so well writen and the diffrents angles is superb. I hate the situation, the subject and the result but i understand the purpuse and it fit the story so far, it gives some depth to the characters so that's fine.
Jack i love to hate you.
What more to say, i enjoyed everything so far, i'm proud to be one of your patrons and i really hope that you gain more and more. This is not a brainless fapping materials with candy eyes animations, you have to use your mind as a great book or a good movie. You dive in a universe (if it make sense in english)
My friend, thank you.
NB:
@Thornhill i didn't forget you, i will reply to you in PM soon...hahaha, cheers mate.[/QUOA bient