Finally started a new game over with this version. Noted a few mistakes in the intro scene, thought I'd come and report them before I forget:
1. The Peddler start option is misspelled "Pedler".
2. When you try and fight off the assassin who tries to kill you in front of your father's corpse, one of Yaichi's lines is missing- instead, he repeats the next line the assassin says in response to what he should have said ("Sounds appealing, but I prefer to keep my own head on my neck. Knowing him, he would go after me next if I were to accept your proposal.") From context, Yaichi presumably tried to bribe the assassin to spare him.
3. The way Saka says you "had a nasty poisoning" is very ungrammatical. It should be more like "he was badly poisoned" or something, which still isn't great, but is better. Also when you say that Tomomitsu killed your father, Yura answers "Unfortunetly yes." which should be "Unfortunately".
4. Umezou greets you after you wake up with "Finally awake so I can see." ...wut? Just make it "Finally awake, I see."
I'll probably put up any more errors when I stumble across them.