Just played this game once for the first time, here is my analysis of it.
The Renders: I can't complain, they are rather good. Well done.
The Code: It's not buggy as far as I noticed. Good job there.
Production Rate: Good job there. 2,324 renders in 7 months is a good job a few hundred renders a month.
The Story + Writing: This is the area I think that could use the most improvement otherwise it's a really great game. I'll elaborate on the writing.
I'm going to go into depth, and try to help you see how it could be written better. Not trying to be a dick, and I wish you luck this is just some feedback to try to help you improve. You do have some clear talents, but to be fair writing aint your strong suit.
From the OP and start of the game I'm thinking this game has 3 protagonists. So I'd be expecting choices for all 3, and interactions all based on how others made choices too to build the story that way, and it could be great! It's mostly just the wife getting choices, and I thought it would be a bit more of a balance, but the other 2 main characters do get the occasional choice.
Right off the bat a prime opportunity for some taboo action was missed. The new man that lives in the house could have easily been a nephew of the bald man, or perhaps an estranged son from a previous relationship. Maybe even the wife's little brother that just graduated from college and has no place else to stay as their parents are dead. This would require patching of course for patreon compliance.
The Wife (Lucrezia): I think the game would be far better if more control was given over her actions. Some simple things like giving the boy a hug or not when meeting him. As at the start it's a major choice less drought, and a minor choice like that could be done in 1 or 2 extra renders. A dozen more little choices like the example here given sprinkled in none of which having major path changes would make it much more enjoyable. Another of my gripes is that her sexual actions are often times not very optional. Husband wants a blowjob... Then she sucks his dick no option. Why no "I have a head ache" or "spit/swallow" option after. No option to be faithful is a big drawback. Without the boring option in play the fun option is less fun. She is not malleable enough.
The Husband (Augusto): A very boring guy. Like super boring, and annoying too. A bit more humor should have been added to him, maybe make his character feel more like a "Sugar Daddy" type or possibly even a big fat party animal like "Chris Farley". Look at her, then look at him... It's money it's obvious as the guy doesn't really have any redeeming qualities.. If you are going to give him choices spy on the wife or not is kinda boring it would be better to be able to buy her things at various poiints, maybe take her out on a date or two something... It's like they got no chemistry there. They have sex scenes... but why? There is no real romance there. If she is going to be cheating on the guy, I want it so he puts some more effort in to it. Cheating on a lazy slob is not as fun as cheating on the guy if he were trying to get back in shape, and got a wig for his head, maybe try to take better care of himself and the relationship. He isn't charming enough, nor does he spoil the wife enough to really add the "guilt factor" to make cheating feel guilty. Maybe even toss in some funny slap stick stuff with the guy. The guy starts off too cucky. "Here smell wife's perfume!" The fuck guy? Really... Who the fuck says shit like that!? It would be fine if he had that as an option I guess if you want to go straight up cuck, but him being forced to act like a cuck no choice is so lame. That's just so unlikable. Way too cucky of a guy. It would be better if his perosnality could be swung to act more and less like a cuck. Give the guy at least half a back bone I mean come on...
The Lover (Cristian): As previously mentioned taboo opportunities lost. This guy is missing prime choices for real. There is a point where the husband and wife with the wife's back to him are hugging and husband is playing grab ass with her and her ass is hanging out a bit in panties. Why can't this guy try to get a little sneaky squeezy squeeze of his own in there? I'm talking sneaky like maybe she thinks it's the hubby. The husband is such a cuck though that the guy just goes ahead and grabs that ass anyways sniffing her perfume and husband don't do shit. The husband is so cucky that it makes it not even fun to be bull / guy to swing in there. The husbands behavior basically spoon feeds this guy the wife's pussy. This guy is really unlikeeable too.
A Few Odd spots as an example:
There is this plumber guy: They got fucked up pipes or whatever fair enough, and the guy goes from normal plumber talk to rapey in like 3 seconds. Wife gets all mad, but undresses for him and he cums on her tits, but that sex scene is like totally missing, and no options. I replay this part a couple of times and it's like what happened here? Did they just say "Fuck it lets skip the sex scene and do a real quick before and after no choices..." If so... Come on guy... Don't do that! Where is the missing scene? You can't tell me that's the whole scene I don't believe it.
WTF office blowjob: So Cristian works at the office. And there is this girl that works there that says something like: "I'm thirsty." Then Cristian is all like. You are a slave now. Come suck my dick with a real angry face. She's like "Sure!" and that happens. This happens like right in the middle of the office too with at least 2 other people in ear shot. That's just brute force no finess putting a blowjob in there. It's just weird. It's not like these 2 are shown having any prior interactions or anything. Then there is no real follow up or explanation for it at all after.
Park Rapists: So... the wife figures the husband is a cuck. They come up with a plan for the wife to be in the park in ripped up clothes and come across some guys, but the husband is like watching from the woods jerking off. Then the wife is supposed to flirt with the guys or whatever then run away or something... I don't even know. I'm guessing this was supposed to be some sort of exhibitionism or sharing or something I just don't know. It's just so random and doesn't really make any sense at all.
To cuck or not to cuck that is the question: So we got this guy who is like push the wife into other dudes arms. There you go sniff her I'm gonna jerk off in the forest while she nearly gets raped and runs away level of cuck... Then this same mega cuck guy also lets the wife sit on a dudes lap and get dick out and not really fuck him or anything, but they fool around a little then husband drags her off to fuck her himself depriving the bull? Shit or get off the pot cuck! The guy is such a big cuck that he cucks himself out of being cucked! It's like cuckception... a cuck within a cuck... The guy cucked himself out of being a cuck! You can't make it so the guy is soooooo much of a cuck like that then do a total 180 that chickens out real quick and just want to not share her. No... just no. This sort of inconsistancy bugs the shit out of me. If you are gonna let the wife give some other dude a lap dance and whip his dick out... Let her fuck him too cuck, the fuck is wrong with this guy? Wife is obviously unsatisfied by his dick, but oh well... Cucking is not something you can do "halfway" it's all in or all out shit or get off the pot when making a character a cuck. Cuckoldry is not for the fickle flip floppers. That bull should have followed that couple to the bedroom and said "That's my pussy tonight cuck do you want to fight about it? I got this you can watch if you want, or get the fuck out but I'm gonna hit that!" to the husband and just fucked the shit out of the wife if he stayed and watched or not. So a mutual cuck fail, and bull fail. Cuck is not cuck enough, and bull is not bull enough. Also, wife has no option to be like "Fuck you, I'm fucking whoever the fuck I want or nobody tonight my pussy my choiuce..." so cheating wife aint cheating enough... nor is she faithful enough if trying to be faithful... She don't get to pick what dick she wants that night or any time really...
How to improve:
When writing a scene I think it's important to make characters more relatable, and to some degree realistic of course as it's an adult game / fiction it's okay to push a little beyond the norms, but if you push really far out there it loses something. It's okay to allow for a little build up, and tension. You don't need people to fuck right away or get sexual right away. Some foreshadowing would be a big plus. Some humor or drama would be great. You don't need to throw in a sex scene with every other first interaction. Let the characters develop a little first. A range of emotions is important to show. You want likeable characters not ones that people hate. A bit more day to day stuff and character building would also go a long way. Flexibility and choices is also a big thing. You don't need to just tell it one way. More choices to act certain ways would be great.
That's my 2 cents, good luck with your game, and you have some definite talent there. If you put a little more effort into that writing then this game would be spectacular.
