This is 90s Telenovela at its best. "Reich und Schön" ("The Bold and The Beautiful").
kartolas,
Mortarion and
Mamonetti I agree. Something has to happen.
It seems that most of the Decisions are a check if you like to see the CGs or not. Example Bathroom scene, Rachel did act as if something has happened this night regardless of my decision.
The only difference I am aware off is If I am on the Mia route. The Computer repair scene is with her. Else it is with Rachel.
Rachel has Zero points from me and send me a nude. It dose not make sense.
The Bathroom scene. Why did I go in? How is knock and yell: "Rachel, Breakfast is ready."
As I said a few days ago in this very thread, something Fishy goes on. I don't believe that anything regarding Rachel happen at random.
Even the scene with Ash. When did she have the Time to remove her Panties. Sorry, I believe the car accident was arranged. Maybe Ash is sent by Rachel, or she wants to get in a better position. Every thing screams for me that it was planned.
His broken pipe in the Bathroom. Exactly after she wasn't able to deliver his new suite personally. And of course, he can stay the weekend. Again, she has zero points in my walkthrough. The game don't care.
Carmine scene with Tiara. I think it was meant to show us she isn't that bad of a mother. For me, it doesn't deliver on that. At the end, it was two women jogging. As I said, Carmine has a Mountain to climb, and I am not even sure if she made the first step. Honestly, this scene gives me nothing. I am a bit disappointed.
The decision.
SinAppeal I knew critique is hard to chew. But why? Why should the MC like Carmine at this point. Maybe after the talk with her. Big Maybe from me.
At this point and I am sorry. This Story is missing a plot. The Story is there to deliver us beautiful renders of beautiful girls. But I don't get where this is going at. And that is my Problem. It is a VN. If I want Porn, I watch Porn.
What is Rachel's motive? Why did Mia leave the East Coast? What is the MCs place in all that? Where does he want to go? Sorry, but the MCs is a side character at the moment.
Rachel: "Come with me, carry some files!"
MC: "Ok"
Rachel: "I buy you a new and expensive suite!"
MC: "OK"
Carmine and Rachel: "No, stay here, my BELOVED daughter has no problem with you seeing her and embarrassing herself for the fun of us two old ladies! And we love how awkward it feels for you!"
MC: "OK"
Rachel: "You Stay here this weekend!"
MC: "OK"
Ash: "Let's go to the Café"
MC: "OK"
It seems unbelievable hard to write a relatable MC. For a lot of devs.
There is no Story Arc visible.
The shopping scene is a side story arc, or could be. Perhaps evolve on that and bring it to an end. So we could understand Carmine and Tiaras Relationship better. But this jogging scene was not enough.
Bring in arcs, concentrate on them and bring them to an end. And motivation for the characters.
Otherwise, Rachel has no Personality but just an agenda. I want him. Period. Why? Because I want him.
I like the character of the young women, and ladies look beautiful.
Sorry If that what I said sounded too harsh. I will still follow you because I love this thread and see the potential in the game. You have it in your own hand to convince people like me in the future.
It seems that you are trustworthy and deliver on constant updates with good amount of content.
So don't take it personally, I wouldn't have written so much If I'm hating your game.
