VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B3] [Braindrop]

[Jace325]

I feel so heartbroken! MC, you need to stay strong. And you, Gorg, you let me down man. All that talk hyping you up to be a potential good guy, wasted.

I feel that, I might have to change my profile pic now

 

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Actual Spoilers for WVM Day 1-7 0.7.7 update

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[Jace325]

Damn, what and update, and that crazy ending outa nowhere. So hype for day 8 now.

also fuck da police

 

[Dripping]

It's awesome how Braindrop still maintains that tension between Azel and MC, even if nothing is going to happen between them. I hope he's at least looking into some kind of content with her (and Willow and Wendy as well, for that matter), even if it's without MC.
IF someone mods such content into the game, then I hope that person manages to at least do it in a way that makes sense with the rest of the game. But we'll probably have to wait for the game to be completed (also meaning we'd have to start a new game from scratch) before such a thing could be done properly, without needing constant updates to the patch every time a new version of the game gets released.

 

[Sourav093]

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Guy's can anyone tell me this profile pic from which game?

 

[UrsusDerpus]

Man, there really was no way for Kenji to not be a jackass. I was rooting for him to turn out alright. I also wish Gorg was chill.
At least we now know who our ride-or-die's are.

 

[Naxos]

My top picks are as follows:

1. Willow (ok maybe not but I would like more with her after this update)
2. Stacy (probably not but hey I love me some Stacy)
3. Mackenzie (She is already in charge of your online social media so why not)
4. Jasmine (Seems like a good fit for someone interested in managing sports clients)
5. Long shot but hey I can dream right Alexis

Azel. She's not working now and it gives her a nice reason to be around even more other than being his Mom.

The thing that annoyed me the most with the whole fight at the end is the MC stopping for a 5 min chat with his mom after she rammed the car instead of dealing with the threat, Ryker. Put him down, then they can chat all they want. Aslo after that there is no way Kenji and Damian can be on the team anymore. Damian might not have taken part, but he didn't do anything to stop it either.

A small error with script.
When you go straight into the BJ at the start of the 4some instead of asking Bailey & Zoe to kiss, the MC still says they kissed without hesitation even though there was no kiss.

I'm going to get crucified for this, but I'm probably the only one that didn't like the Jamie & Shauna kiss and was bummed the MC was joking about them doing it it more. I know it was an accident and wouldn't be upset over it, but the joking and being ok with them doing it for real does bug me. I don't like les content in male mc games & i don't share for shit.

i've seen more that want it than don't. but yeah, i think those who are saying ''no '' to an option that people want should be ignored-because they can just not chose the options so those who do-gets screwed for no reason.

Probably because those who say the don't want it or dislike it end up having their comments deleted or given warnings etc. Not neccessarily in this thread but in general. Or attacked and called all sorts of things. I dislike it, but that's me. If someone else likes it good for them.

 

[Zireael_]

Cool update welcome back BD. Btw I hope we'll see more Harper content in the future.

 

[TundraLupus]

Azel. She's not working now and it gives her a nice reason to be around even more other than being his Mom.

I'm going to get crucified for this, but I'm probably the only one that didn't like the Jamie & Shauna kiss and was bummed the MC was joking about them doing it it more. I know it was an accident and wouldn't be upset over it, but the joking and being ok with them doing it for real does bug me. I don't like les content in male mc games & i don't share for shit.

Had not thought about Azel, she would be good too, or she could assist Harper.

I'm not gonna crucify you but I thought it was funny that we had the opposite opinion of it my problem is that the mc keeps repeating the "friendly" part over and over, when in my playthrough he is okay with Bailey being with Rain.

 

[Ghostface Reborn]

Had not thought about Azel, she would be good too, or she could assist Harper.

I'm not gonna crucify you but I thought it was funny that we had the opposite opinion of it my problem is that the mc keeps repeating the "friendly" part over and over, when in my playthrough he is okay with Bailey being with Rain.

agreed.

 

[andresblinky]

 

[AlexTorch]

Really hope Ryker dies. Also am I the only one who wants Kenji to be beaten up

Death is a easy way out....he need to suffer...he is a complete bitch, he is only man when he have those guys to do his dirty work, when the mc grabbed him, he almost shit his pants.

 

[Naxos]

I loved how cuddly he was with Harper throughout this update.

Oh and Rachel looks like she needs a serious hug at when she's introducing Tali.

 

[Naxos]

Ryker

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And maybe you need a hug, way too much ranting and anger going on there.

 

[TundraLupus]

Ryker should be actually dead, any notion he isn't is ridiculous, when the final punch the MC punched him with he punched him straight in the nose with all out force, considering he is an athlete, its lethal, the nose would have been broken and it would have went straight into the brain killing him. Frankly the end of the chapter has been seriously hurting any potential sense of disbelief I might still have, all of it was non-sense.

The attack on the MC is entirely insane, what is even the point? Why does Ryker stubbornly believe that somehow the MC know where his uncle is gone to? Not only that but then proceed to attack him, unless he intended to kill him he'd be screwed afterward, its assault, he was going with his buddies to prison. Next how is he even supposed to be as powerful as he is seemingly portrayed being? He is an orphan, raised by his uncle, even if he got some money how would he supposedly be able to mastermind some crazy plot and even have corrupted cops working for him? Its insane, we are talking organized crime of the highest level here, like the Mafia or the Cartels, not some gang formed by some random somewhat wealthy kid, to be able to corrupt a whole bunch of cops he'd need to have been very rich to begin with, which make the whole plot about bets and making them fail a college basketball game to supposedly make a bunch of money completely unfit.

Its like the Dev has been watching Gotham and decided that what his feel good porn story needed was some sort of crappy version of that, WTF?! What fucking city in any somewhat realistic setting has an a seemingly mostly corrupt police department? None. What city you can have a somewhat wealthy kid somehow become some sort of small Kingpin in a realistic setting? None. What organized crime group waste so much efforts and resources to pull some scam with bets over a bloody college sport? None. Its all non-sense.

That is also adding to how god awful that whole fight was, I can't believe a adult male would be that utterly incompetent at basic fighting. Ryker wasn't an athlete, the MC could have straight up caught the bat and ripped it out of his hands or dodging the baseball bat coming at him from the front in clear sight, so the entire first part of that fight is non-sense, sure afterward I guess it could be justified due to the daze that he would make mistake but the beating that led to that shouldn't have happened. Also how come Ayden came out alone? Where was the rest of the team? What about everybody else? This was happening JUST out of the fucking club, people would have clearly heard it, also how come the bouncer was in Ryker's pocket? Wouldn't Belle have someone she control there? Also how come a supposed secret group of people running the place are somehow so badly equipped to deal with Ryker? He is a kid with delusion of adequacy and some wealth, he isn't a rich criminal mastermind, he is some entitled prick, nothing more.

In this modern world a whole crowd of people would have came out and many with their cellphones pointing their camera at the action, effectively making the entire affair a slam dunk in favor of the MC with any legal issues he might have possibly have had.

Seriously at this point the only reason I follow this story is for the feel good story and the porn, the fact that whatever braindead idiot writing the story for this game is so obsessed into making this Gotham Jr is really getting close to driving me away, their is only so much non-sense and bullshit I can tolerate before I have to call quit and this chapter really is pushing close to my break point for enduring stupidity.

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[Lord Soth]

I get people are going to have some issues with plot semantics in games like this but if we are going down the "realism" road, how many guys are going to have huge harems of girlfriends (in a Western nation) and girls swooning over them at every turn? end of the day, it`s a fantasy VN and more importantly, a feel good one at that (For the most part...ouch MC ).

 

[Teal80]

Awesome update. Great story and some excellent character writing.
Tender, emotional moments and adrenalin filled action, plot reveals and new layers to be unraveled.
If you have not played this update stop reading now and go play - do NOT read the comments until you've played.

I think I'm in love with Harper...

 

[RainMaker323]

Yeah I'm not buying that ending but I'm getting a bit jaded on this game anyway, all this goody-goody is going on my nerves. All the crying also.

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end of the day, it`s a fantasy VN and more importantly, a feel good one at that (For the most part...ouch MC ).

Fantasy? Have I missed swords and dragons?

 

[Lord Soth]

Yeah I'm not buying that ending but I'm getting a bit jaded on this game anyway, all this goody-goody is going on my nerves. All the crying also.

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Fantasy? Have I missed swords and dragons?

Yep! MC swings his +5 rod of lewdness at any girl needing some special healing

When I say Fantasy, I just mean in general terms...not high fantasy as in dragons and bushy eyebrowed wizards.

 

[thataboo]

Ryker should be actually dead, any notion he isn't is ridiculous, when the final punch the MC punched him with he punched him straight in the nose with all out force, considering he is an athlete, its lethal, the nose would have been broken and it would have went straight into the brain killing him. Frankly the end of the chapter has been seriously hurting any potential sense of disbelief I might still have, all of it was non-sense.

So if you punch someone on the nose, it depends on the angle if the bone (if any) of the nose goes up to the brain. So it's not really leathal (and no I'm not talking about movie fighting, but real fighting), it can be, but it doesn't have to be. Cleary BD didn't write that it was in this case.

The attack on the MC is entirely insane, what is even the point? Why does Ryker stubbornly believe that somehow the MC know where his uncle is gone to? Not only that but then proceed to attack him, unless he intended to kill him he'd be screwed afterward, its assault, he was going with his buddies to prison. Next how is he even supposed to be as powerful as he is seemingly portrayed being? He is an orphan, raised by his uncle, even if he got some money how would he supposedly be able to mastermind some crazy plot and even have corrupted cops working for him? Its insane, we are talking organized crime of the highest level here, like the Mafia or the Cartels, not some gang formed by some random somewhat wealthy kid, to be able to corrupt a whole bunch of cops he'd need to have been very rich to begin with, which make the whole plot about bets and making them fail a college basketball game to supposedly make a bunch of money completely unfit.

Its like the Dev has been watching Gotham and decided that what his feel good porn story needed was some sort of crappy version of that, WTF?! What fucking city in any somewhat realistic setting has an a seemingly mostly corrupt police department? None. What city you can have a somewhat wealthy kid somehow become some sort of small Kingpin in a realistic setting? None. What organized crime group waste so much efforts and resources to pull some scam with bets over a bloody college sport? None. Its all non-sense.

So you don't know where the story is going, so that is a downside? No, we don't have all the cards on the table, but that is (atleast for me) why I keep watching the story. You don't know that maybe there is a cartel behind it, I know of a couple of stories in Europe where criminals placed high bets on amateur indoor soccer to launder there money. Sounds weird, but is very real.

That is also adding to how god awful that whole fight was, I can't believe a adult male would be that utterly incompetent at basic fighting. Ryker wasn't an athlete, the MC could have straight up caught the bat and ripped it out of his hands or dodging the baseball bat coming at him from the front in clear sight, so the entire first part of that fight is non-sense, sure afterward I guess it could be justified due to the daze that he would make mistake but the beating that led to that shouldn't have happened. Also how come Ayden came out alone? Where was the rest of the team? What about everybody else? This was happening JUST out of the fucking club, people would have clearly heard it, also how come the bouncer was in Ryker's pocket? Wouldn't Belle have someone she control there? Also how come a supposed secret group of people running the place are somehow so badly equipped to deal with Ryker? He is a kid with delusion of adequacy and some wealth, he isn't a rich criminal mastermind, he is some entitled prick, nothing more.

In this modern world a whole crowd of people would have came out and many with their cellphones pointing their camera at the action, effectively making the entire affair a slam dunk in favor of the MC with any legal issues he might have possibly have had, also its in the US, if someone is assaulted like that using lethal force to defend yourself is perfectly legitimate.

It seems you are forgetting here that there is corruption going on in the police department, so the "also its in the US," doesn't really matter with corruption.

Seriously at this point the only reason I follow this story is for the feel good story and the porn, the fact that whatever braindead idiot writing the story for this game is so obsessed into making this Gotham Jr is really getting close to driving me away, their is only so much non-sense and bullshit I can tolerate before I have to call quit and this chapter really is pushing close to my break point for enduring stupidity.

Personaly I'd say, stop, stop right now. A lot of people seem to like this story and where it's going, it will not change because you didn't like it. Plus I would stop calling people names, fine if you don't like the writing, you don't have to insult people for it.
And again please just go to another game.