VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B3] [Braindrop]

[ImperialD]

You might want to work on your presentation because quite frankly you lost me in there.

Loco tends to lose alot of people at times .. jk jk

 

[Deleted member 205327]

Ok so I am working on a fun little day by day project that I will share with you all later, but while I was doing that something caught my eye that made me go hmmm.

More random thoughts from the mind of a madman.

So on day 7 final Azel is really concerned with the cut of her dress. I thought it was cute showing herself concerned about her looks and showing off too much. Now when I went back to day one for the other project I am working on I noticed what she was wearing.

Spoiler: Azel outfits

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Now to me I find her reaction about the last dress odd after reviewing the Day 1 outfits. Look at her work outfit which is a professional setting and shows off almost as much cleavage as the final day 7 dress. Now the dress she wears to dinner with the MC the same thing this dress is a very similar cut as well. This tells me one of two things.
1. This was an after thought from day 1 to day 7 and BD just didn't put the connection together (maybe this will change in the week 1 re-work or I am just thinking about it too much)
2. Something else is going on between the MC and Azel. I know Rachael keeps teasing them both so many that is it and she wants to dial the revealing clothing back a notch. Maybe Azel is growing new feelings for the main character and is just fighting those so she is much more aware of what she is wearing and how that makes her feel.

I agree with what Geoff said.

I thought that she was more concerned in regards to her looks/impropriety etc due to the charity event being nationally televised rather than just going out for a meal/workplace etc. I can understand being in the limelight being the MC's mother etc that she would have concerns. That's how I viewed it at least.

I doubt she's very self-conscious around MC, but her cleavage being broadcast on national TV could be cause for concern.

 

[KinkierThanThou]

Duchenne muscular dystrophy (DMD) is a genetic disorder characterized by progressive muscle degeneration and weakness due to the alterations of a protein called dystrophin that helps keep muscle cells intact.
it usually always kills children before they reach 20 yrs old ....

Yeah that sounds bad. No parents should outlive their children, trust me I know.

I was inclined to make a really really bad joke though. Glad I held myself in check.

 

[The Krypt Angel]

Was Vanessa a waitress at the restaurant on the Shauna date, or am I remembering things wrong? If so, is it the same restaurant Penny works at?

yes that was Vanessa and no I don't think that was the same diner penny works at

edited: cuz I typed too fucking fast and left out words lol

 

[BeoWoolF]

Forgive me for asking but what is DMD? And belated condolences for your son.

Same from me ImperialD. cannot imagine loosing one of mine..

 

[BeoWoolF]

Maybe that was the whole point????

That is how you hunt for your food ?

 

[KinkierThanThou]

Things I look forward to in Week 2, (not just day 8 and 9) Teaser:

Spoiler: They say the eyes are the window to the soul

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[The Krypt Angel]

Ok new crazy theory for me now. Special thanks to pictures55 for sparking this one.

Ok so Damien and Jasmine the odd couple for sure. Now we know they have a long history together and it seemed like they had plans until the MC showed up. We don't know for sure that Damien is gay or bi or whatever. So I am not going to take that into consideration for the moment.

Now hear me out this is one of my crazier ones. What if someone got wind of what Damien is doing for Ryker. That person offered Damien an out for information as to what is going on with Ryker and his crew. Ok with me still I hope so. Now most of the people here have made it clear that they do not trust Damien at all and he does not deserve another chance and I would be on board with that except for a few things that may have swayed my decision another direction.

Forewarning I am not 100% sold on this since I need to collect more details, but I have enough to get this one out there.

Here is what we know for sure

• Damien is working for Ryker
• Damien has a sick parent who has someone else paying for the treatment. Ryker indicates there is a "We" not a him on this point.
• Damien has a rocky relationship with Jasmine and she asks right away if Damien was faithful since she thinks he might be cheating on her again. (more on this in a minute)
• Damien is spying on the MC to what extent we are not super clear, he does indicate he is giving Ryker as little information as possible as well.
• Not once have we seen Damien do anything that would be considered breaking the law.
• Jasmine makes it clear she is sick of hearing only about Damien when people talk about her.
• Jasmine left the crazy person note on her desk in class
• Jasmine has a heart shaped birthmark on her face (wait what?)

Ok with the facts out of the way

• Damien is a spy but he is working for two teams team A and Team Ryker (wait who is team A? Just wait I'll get there at some point)
• Damien is feeding information to two teams again Team A and Team Ryker (again who is team A?, not yet we are not ready for it)
• Damien is trying to figure out who else is on Team Ryker, and by doing so he gets himself in some odd situations like in the locker room (wait are you trying to tell me he is not gay come on Loco the writing is on the walls. Sorry I don't read walls.)
• Damien has clearly figured out who is on Team Ryker (but have you figure them all out yet, I bet you missed at least one) and Team MC within the basketball group. (wait is team A now Team MC. No shut-up inner voice I am not ready for Team A yet)
• Ok so if Damien is working for two teams why is he doing that? Glad you asked the right question for a change. Team A are the good guys who are trying to take down Team Ryker who is actually higher than just Ryker and his pointless thugs. Team A is building a case against team Ryker and need to find all the key players. Right now they just know the minor ones Ryker, Gorg, Kenji, the bouncer. They need to know if the originally informant is giving the right information.
• What original informant? Yeah I mean Vanessa's Ex-husband.
• Wait what does he have to do with Damien and Jasmine. Really nothing but a replacement inside man.
• Ok this is getting to be too much for me now I think I feel into another Loco Black hole. Your right you sure did but wait there is more. I didn't tell you who team A is yet.
• Finally who is team A? Well that is where I am torn team A is one of two people/groups. The hearts for Hope group which Jasmine is a member by the way, or a Detective working on Vanessa's ex husbands case, hell it could be both.
• Once all is said and done Damien gets his redemption win, and he is back on the team. The MC forgives him to an extent.

Ok I am sure I will get backlash for this one but it would be a fun I told you so.

you might not read walls...but sometimes I suspect you may have eaten paint chips off them....

 

[BeoWoolF]

you might not read walls...but sometimes I suspect you may have eaten paint chips off them....

Most likely the olden paint that was mixed with excessive amounts of lead ?

 

[ImperialD]

Same from me ImperialD. cannot imagine loosing one of mine..

i'm not gonna lie .. i was devastated .. it ripped a hole thru me ... but sad thing was i knew it would happen the hospital had told us years before that he would pass away before he hit 20 .. and i follow the signs they told me to watch for ... thats how i knew his time was close ... he and i had a long talk before he died . mostly about what he and i tought about what happens after you die .. and made promises to each other .. which he actually fulfilled .. he came back and showed me he was still around .. even tho his body wasn't anymore ..

 

[KinkierThanThou]

Most likely the olden paint that was mixed with excessive amounts of lead ?

It's an acquired taste, but you get used to it after a while when paired with enough alcohol. Also the dancing camels and unicycling elephants are a nice bonus. Cheaper than a Netflix subscription, yet hours of entertainment.

 

[ImperialD]

yes that was Vanessa and no I don't think that was the same diner penny works at

edited: cuz I typed too fucking fast and left out words lol

now whos the slow one

 

[Uncle Loco]

I tired to paint the picture as it was in my mind. I even added my arguments with myself in there. Sorry I was trying to be funny with that one. I do like the idea of the heart shaped birthmark having a hidden meaning though. I also really do think Damien is working for two teams as well.

No I didn't eat paint chips as a child or live under powerlines either.

 

[ImperialD]

and yeah speaking of Vanessa ... she don't ask to sit with you this update .. makes the whole scene more believable ..

 

[KinkierThanThou]

i'm not gonna lie .. i was devastated .. it ripped a hole thru me ... but sad thing was i knew it would happen the hospital had told us years before that he would pass away before he hit 20 .. and i follow the signs they told me to watch for ... thats how i knew his time was close ... he and i had a long talk before he died . mostly about what he and i tought about what happens after you die .. and made promises to each other .. which he actually fulfilled .. he came back and showed me he was still around .. even tho his body wasn't anymore ..

It's good you had closure. I wish I could have had a long talk with my brother before he passed, but alas, his body gave out the night before the day I was going to visit. My sister-in-law told me he really wanted to see me just one more time, but the body gave up on his heart's desire. I'm glad my parents at least got to see him one more time, as did my cousins on the day he died. For me I was just 24 hours too late.

 

[The Krypt Angel]

and yeah speaking of Vanessa ... she don't ask to sit with you this update .. makes the whole scene more believable ..

DOn't think that it felt unbelievable with the original it just felt kind of invasive

 

[BeoWoolF]

i'm not gonna lie .. i was devastated .. it ripped a hole thru me ... but sad thing was i knew it would happen the hospital had told us years before that he would pass away before he hit 20 .. and i follow the signs they told me to watch for ... thats how i knew his time was close ... he and i had a long talk before he died . mostly about what he and i tought about what happens after you die .. and made promises to each other .. which he actually fulfilled .. he came back and showed me he was still around .. even tho his body wasn't anymore ..

Dammit imperial, as I said, I only can imagine, and I do have a vivid imagination.

Looks like you got some kind of closure. Should you feel to talk about some day, you know my corner. DM me if you want.

 

[The Krypt Angel]

I tired to paint the picture as it was in my mind. I even added my arguments with myself in there. Sorry I was trying to be funny with that one. I do like the idea of the heart shaped birthmark having a hidden meaning though. I also really do think Damien is working for two teams as well.

No I didn't eat paint chips as a child or live under powerlines either.

nah you didn't fail at anything I was just teasing you cuz I saw an opening

 

[Deleted member 205327]

Ok new crazy theory for me now. Special thanks to pictures55 for sparking this one.

Ok so Damien and Jasmine the odd couple for sure. Now we know they have a long history together and it seemed like they had plans until the MC showed up. We don't know for sure that Damien is gay or bi or whatever. So I am not going to take that into consideration for the moment.

Now hear me out this is one of my crazier ones. What if someone got wind of what Damien is doing for Ryker. That person offered Damien an out for information as to what is going on with Ryker and his crew. Ok with me still I hope so. Now most of the people here have made it clear that they do not trust Damien at all and he does not deserve another chance and I would be on board with that except for a few things that may have swayed my decision another direction.

Forewarning I am not 100% sold on this since I need to collect more details, but I have enough to get this one out there.

Here is what we know for sure

• Damien is working for Ryker
• Damien has a sick parent who has someone else paying for the treatment. Ryker indicates there is a "We" not a him on this point.
• Damien has a rocky relationship with Jasmine and she asks right away if Damien was faithful since she thinks he might be cheating on her again. (more on this in a minute)
• Damien is spying on the MC to what extent we are not super clear, he does indicate he is giving Ryker as little information as possible as well.
• Not once have we seen Damien do anything that would be considered breaking the law.
• Jasmine makes it clear she is sick of hearing only about Damien when people talk about her.
• Jasmine left the crazy person note on her desk in class
• Jasmine has a heart shaped birthmark on her face (wait what?)

Ok with the facts out of the way

• Damien is a spy but he is working for two teams team A and Team Ryker (wait who is team A? Just wait I'll get there at some point)
• Damien is feeding information to two teams again Team A and Team Ryker (again who is team A?, not yet we are not ready for it)
• Damien is trying to figure out who else is on Team Ryker, and by doing so he gets himself in some odd situations like in the locker room (wait are you trying to tell me he is not gay come on Loco the writing is on the walls. Sorry I don't read walls.)
• Damien has clearly figured out who is on Team Ryker (but have you figure them all out yet, I bet you missed at least one) and Team MC within the basketball group. (wait is team A now Team MC. No shut-up inner voice I am not ready for Team A yet)
• Ok so if Damien is working for two teams why is he doing that? Glad you asked the right question for a change. Team A are the good guys who are trying to take down Team Ryker who is actually higher than just Ryker and his pointless thugs. Team A is building a case against team Ryker and need to find all the key players. Right now they just know the minor ones Ryker, Gorg, Kenji, the bouncer. They need to know if the originally informant is giving the right information.
• What original informant? Yeah I mean Vanessa's Ex-husband.
• Wait what does he have to do with Damien and Jasmine. Really nothing but a replacement inside man.
• Ok this is getting to be too much for me now I think I feel into another Loco Black hole. Your right you sure did but wait there is more. I didn't tell you who team A is yet.
• Finally who is team A? Well that is where I am torn team A is one of two people/groups. The hearts for Hope group which Jasmine is a member by the way, or a Detective working on Vanessa's ex husbands case, hell it could be both.
• Once all is said and done Damien gets his redemption win, and he is back on the team. The MC forgives him to an extent.

Ok I am sure I will get backlash for this one but it would be a fun I told you so.

"Now, let's talk about Damien. Can we talk about Damien please, Krypt Angel? I've been dying to talk to you about Damien all damn day!"

Edit: For what it's worth, I think there is some plausibility to the theory, I just couldn't resist, especially with this meme being so fresh in my mind after the most recent Critical Role.

 

[Uncle Loco]

"Now, let's talk about Damien. Can we talk about Damien please, Krypt Angel? I've been dying to talk to you about Damien all damn day!"

I just wrote a 10 page essay on him there that you quoted what else did you want to discuss?