VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Best of Intentions [v0.1.1] [Stickmanvn]

[Walter Victor]

Review v0.1 (prologue)

This game is definately an interesting take on "the incest problem".

The difficult thing about incest in writing is to make the taboo real and the characters reluctant enough to be believable, but there must also be a driver, a reason why the characters are gravitating towards the incest.

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Renders are OK, not fantastic in my opinion but they do get the job done.

Verdict: 4/5 mainly because of the inventive plot.

Ah yes. How to show sex in near-future episodes, given the terms of the contract, and the expressed antipathy towards sex between the two participants? We may have to be satisfied with what we've been given for a while? Dream sequences? Flashbacks?

 

[215303j]

If I had've known when writing The Best of Intentions that this so called NTR tag could be so divisive amoungst the good folk here, I might have changed the story.

How do you mean? I'm obviously not the dev but I think the slutty behaviour of the daughter is quite key to the story.
This game with a D from DmD kind of character (innocent and naive) would not be believable.

We could get into a discussion (again) about the meaning of NTR but I think this game is not NTR.
I still don't really like the daughters behaviour due to personal preference, but there is nothing I / the MC can do about it, so we just have to accept it.

So in other words, just keep going. It's your story!

 

[freedom.call]

My NTR detector didn't go off. I'm quite disappointed in myself!

 

[Humphrey21]

The story is great! If I can give you some critics, I'd suggest that the working space in the kitchen should be a bit lower. It looks too big for Amelia and Stephanie.

 

[215303j]

Just started this thread as inspired by this game...

 

[Mucski]

There's too much piss and toilet talk, and best of it you can't even skip it, maybe make it skipable or tone it down a notch in the future?

 

[Moria]

Best daughter ever. Ever. Ever.

 

[StickmanVN]

There's too much piss and toilet talk, and best of it you can't even skip it, maybe make it skipable or tone it down a notch in the future?

I'll put the Skip button back in the with next update.

 

[Walter Victor]

I'll put the Skip button back in the with next update.

Thank you. Most appreciated!

 

[darlic]

I'm definitely interested in this game, and the latest reviews made this interest grow more and more. However, I'm used to playing every other update for all the games I follow (I do this mainly to extend my playthrough as much as possible).
I'll wait for v0.2 before giving it a try but as I said I'm really hyped with this game, like I've never been in a very long time.

For now, the only thing I can say is GG to the dev.

 

[StickmanVN]

I'm definitely interested in this game, and the latest reviews made this interest grow more and more. However, I'm used to playing every other update for all the games I follow (I do this mainly to extend my playthrough as much as possible).
I'll wait for v0.2 before giving it a try but as I said I'm really hyped with this game, like I've never been in a very long time.

For now, the only thing I can say is GG to the dev.

I'll do my best to keep your wait to a minimum

 

[duane71]

I like this. Please continue.

 

[steelsmiter]

I like this. Please continue.

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same

 

[Tom10]

Any chance we could get a compressed version of this ?

 

[AGoodDay2Die]

There is no "a" in "definitely". "Definite" becomes "definitely".

There is no "i" in "deluded".

No "e" on the end of "stomach".

Only 2 "a"s in "apparently".

"Gauge" not "gague".

You "accept" a proposition, you don't "except" one.

When Stephanie's riding the MC she uses his default name instead of the player's chosen name in the line "Ha! I was expecting more of a protest from you Thomas." (And there should be a comma after "you" in that sentence.)

Anyone old (like me) remember the movie "Something About Amelia" with Ted Danson, Glenn Close, and Roxana Zal?

Is it just me or does the MC look like a bit of a douche?

WARNING:
Excessive use of pet name!

Wasn't "Baby Doll," (well, OK, "Babydoll,") the delectable Emily Browning's character in "Sucker Punch"?

Why do I see a bald guy named "Mr. Magus" and read it every time as "Mr. Magoo"?

Easy to tell the dev's a Brit, using "arse" instead of "ass," "trousers" instead of "pants," and using "fanny" as a euphemism for "vagina" whereas on this side of the pond it's a more polite word for "ass".

I, for one, have no problem with the watersports as long as the MC's not on the receiving end or kissing one of the girls after she is.

Bizarre premise but certainly worth looking back in on. Graphics may not be the greatest but aren't bad and it's nice that the dev didn't just utilize the usual suspects for his models.

Good luck!

 

[Look-see]

dont like the daughters whorish ways. this the first incest game ever i prefer an uncest version lol. i will admit though the dads attitude to the revelation does seem pretty believable (not knowing what to do and drinking). i dont think i'll come back to this game. i wasnt expecting another innocent daughter but this was wayyy out of there for me. honestly not really attracted. she's like the slut/prostitute thats a side character or bit part that you have a one time thing with in any other game. gotta give it to the MC though all the shit he's gone through then finding out about his daughter ontop of it. wheres the suicide option? maybe when daughter finds out why dad killed himself she'll straighten out . but either way good luck to the developer.

 

[Rico Caramba]

I see possibilities for some very good bad endings. The daughter won’t last a day without having sex. And putting the pressure up will make her even more desperate.

 

[Deleted member 833007]

@StickmanVN Hey man ask one of the Mods to give you the Game Dev Tag..

 

[Baka!]

I liked the character of the daughter and the character of Steph, the father is quite destroyed by the fact that his daughter is a slut, although the end of the prologue suggests that the father can fuck the daughter. I have not seen any decision in this prologue, I suppose there will be decisions later, I really like the NTR and I also like the daughter to do things that embarrass the father (or even make him feel humiliated). Will there be a route where the father does not fuck with the daughter? if so, the daughter could do things like bring home a street bum to have sex, then the next day the father prepares breakfast and both appear naked

 

[hello.jpg]

To each their own, of course, but there's a billion "innocent daughter gets corrupted" games already. A new take, in which the daughter is slutting it up already and the father takes her in hand or otherwise gets into the action (lots of possibilities here) is intresting new territory.

Plus I love the dirtier fetishes, so that's great. Basically this:

Very interesting introduction. Not for everyone, this is. Not if you think that a father-daughter relation can be a vanilla romance. This game has a horny, kinky twist to it. That is sort of a relieve if you are, like me, fed up with stories about fathers corrupting their pure and innocent daughters, pretending they love them and have the best intentions with it.

For this story to work, the daughter needs to be a sex addicted slut already. She is, in spite of her innocent looks. She will do anything, and I really mean anything. That’s appealing to me, she is one hell of a sexy slut. The father needs to be a spineless dolt, which he is. You don’t have to identify with that. What remains, up to now, is that father and daughter genuinely seem to care for one another. Now throw in an indecent proposal and a new corruption game is born.

Will they break the last barrier? Of course, they will. Will they be tempted to break the contract? In very many ways, I suspect. How will it end? No Idea, but I am curious.

I am not a great fan of golden showers either, but if it works for the girl, I will just watch briefly.