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Safetydummy

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90 new images.
4 Animations.
Spelling errors changed.
A few minor code changes.

Um, quick question, could some tell me what the 90 new images and 4 animations consist of? I just re-DL'd the crunched version from the OP (that says it's 1.1), but my game still ends before they return to give "Mr. Chairman" their answer.

Any info is appreciated. :)
 

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Time for opinions!!! Note opinions are opinions. Others will disagree with me and that's fine. Take what I say with a grain of salt.

  • Player named characters. Generally this leads to generic characters... Personally I am not a fan since I'm looking for a narrative.
  • Daughter looks 20ish, could be 18 if she aged early... I can believe this.
  • MC looks 25, maybe 30 is you push it... That is a problem since it immediately breaks my immersion that she is his daughter. Did he have her when he was 5?
  • Female bodies are the same shape. While I really like the shape, the breast size is realistic and the upper size for a petite body like that, but why not have different sizes so people who love big boobs on a thick frame get some lovin too? Normally I am saying this to games with ONLY big boobs, feels weird to be asking for big boobs someone on this site, since they are everywhere...
  • Images aren't bad, but need some work. They need to be zoomed out a little so we can see the penetration. It's blocked by the text box since it's to zoomed it. I know I can hide the box, but I shouldn't have to.
  • 3 frame animation. I fucking hate it. Do a fluid animation or do more single still pictures.
  • The dialogue is ok at best. The after the first sex scene conversation feels fake. People don't talk like that. Both him and her were odd.
  • So the daughters best friend sex animation is fluid. That is how it's done. All animations should be like this or don't do them at all. Still its zoomed in to much so the penetration is hard to see.
  • Women apologizing for cumming so fast??? Makes me think the creators doesn't know how sex really works. I guess this could be a parody but doesn't feel right to me.
  • Guessing all the guys in this have HUGE dicks. /yahn. I'm cool with the main character with one, but why have the random dude at the bar with a huge dick? Feels lazy to me.
  • Plot is acceptable. Not amazing but it makes sense and that makes it better than 80% of all he games here.
  • Few spelling errors but not many.

I think I'm at a 3/5 currently. I like the story, but the dialogue itself needs work. The 3 frame animations IMO need to go, better use more stills or upgrade to more fluid animations. Fix these things and this could easily move up to a 4/5.
 
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StickmanVN

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90 new images.
4 Animations.
Spelling errors changed.
A few minor code changes.

Um, quick question, could some tell me what the 90 new images and 4 animations consist of? I just re-DL'd the crunched version from the OP (that says it's 1.1), but my game still ends before they return to give "Mr. Chairman" their answer.

Any info is appreciated. :)
Hi.

This is the last image of ver 0.1.

screenshot0001.png

And this is the last image of ver 0.1.1

screenshot0002.png

So all the new images etc are between the two. At the start of the next ver they give thier answer to the charman
 

Safetydummy

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It all comes after. Any saves you have from ver 0.1 will work.
So all the new images etc are between the two. At the start of the next ver they give thier answer to the charman
Okay, I'm a tad confused. I thought you said that the added stuff came after where 1.0 ended. So the images in question are when the "D" and MC ask for a secluded place to consider their options? Also, the four animations must be the meeting/non-meeting with "Muffin" in the bathroom and the "D"'s solo scene in the bathroom? Am I correct in thinking this? :)

Did he have her when he was 5?
Men can't have babies. Lol He could have been a young-er buck and knocked up a more mature MILF. Upon learning that she was pregnant- he decided to do right by her. :) Just a thought.
 
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XJ347

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Men can't have babies. Lol He could have been a young-er buck and knocked up a more mature MILF. Upon learning that she was pregnant- he decided to do right by her. :) Just a thought.
Well males can't reproduce until puberty, which is around 13, though there are outliers that are earlier. So, does he look 13 years older than her? Personally I think she looks about 5 years younger than him IMO. Realistically he should look 40. Does he look 40? Not even close for me.

I know others doen't care about this stuff, but for me it matters.
 
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Okay, I'm a tad confused. I thought you said that the added stuff came after where 1.0 ended. So the images in question are when the "D" and MC ask for a secluded place to consider their options? Also, the four animations must be the meeting/non-meeting with "Muffin" in the bathroom and the "D"'s solo scene in the bathroom? Am I correct in thinking this? :)
Yup (y)
 
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Well males can't reproduce until puberty, which is around 13, though there are outliers that are earlier. So, does he look 13 years older than her? Personally I think she looks about 5 years younger than him IMO. Realistically he should look 40. Does he look 40? Not even close for me.

I know others doen't care about this stuff, but for me it matters.
Check the family holiday flashback images, he erm... ages well :D
 

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Well males can't reproduce until puberty, which is around 13, though there are outliers that are earlier. So, does he look 13 years older than her? Personally I think she looks about 5 years younger than him IMO. Realistically he should look 40. Does he look 40? Not even close for me.

I know others doen't care about this stuff, but for me it matters.
Well, I like suspend belief for some things. Lol The "trinkling" (drinking tinkle) and semen receptacle thing bothers me a tad more tbth, but I still like the game. :)
 

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So is daughter the town bike because of the "counseling" mentioned in the intro, or was she a natural slut to begin with?
 

RustyV

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Without the shackles of Patreon it will be interesting (or scary) where the dev can take his game.
Understandably doing a game part time seems to be the norm for most devs. I do hope this is not another case where an interesting game gets abandoned.
I don't understand the money problem for the father/daughter. The daughter is practically a prostitute. She could make them financially solvent by taking the next logical step and turn her hobby into a career.

With as sexually active as she is sonner or later the daughter will have to resort to "visiting" the ponies in the estate's stables. lol
Horses piss a lot. (Yuck)
 

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That's what I got from it too tbh. Which makes me think how much better this would be if it started earlier and actually showed all that process, with the "counselor" as the MC. I'd even settle for playing as the rich old perv now, it's not like you get invested in playing as the father. All we had to do in this "game" playing as him was that one choice in the end.
 
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RustyV

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With the lack of any meanigful choices to make so far players seem more like an audience.
 
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I tried the game a bit but its not my type of game. This is why:

There is not enough built-up and too many sex scenes and too soon. Personally I can't stand the characters. The girlfriend of the daugther is an asshole, i can't understand what Amelia has for her, and Amelia herself is 18 and the biggest slut in the universe. That doesn't seem so realistic or appealing to me. Aside of lewd and naughty talk there is almost non other "story". Yeah a bit is there, but its not enough to get me engaged and the over the top and too frequent sex and lewd scenes is a turn off to me. I need more built-up and writing which is non-sex related to get interested. TLDR the biggest problem there do not seem to be a built-up. Not sure if i phrased that all correctly, but that are my thoughts. Sorry to say it that harsh, but when I want sex scenes after sex scenes after sex scenes with almost non story, then I'd just watch a porn and not playing a Visual Novel. Oh and i felt like watching instead of getting engaged, because there are quasi non choises.

But the quality itself is good, despite not my cup of tea (because of story, writing, plot, lack of choises) I won't rate it. That would be like rating a RPG or RTS game when I prefer First person shooters, and that would be not fair then.
 
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