VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Best of Intentions [v0.1.1] [Stickmanvn]

[fbass]

I tried the game a bit but its not my type of game. This is why:

There is not enough built-up and too many sex scenes and too soon. Personally I can't stand the characters. The girlfriend of the daugther is an asshole, i can't understand what Amelia has for her, and Amelia herself is 18 and the biggest slut in the universe. That doesn't seem so realistic or appealing to me. Aside of lewd and naughty talk there is almost non other "story". Yeah a bit is there, but its not enough to get me engaged and the over the top and too frequent sex and lewd scenes is a turn off to me. I need more built-up and writing which is non-sex related to get interested. TLDR the biggest problem there do not seem to be a built-up. Not sure if i phrased that all correctly, but that are my thoughts. Sorry to say it that harsh, but when I want sex scenes after sex scenes after sex scenes with almost non story, then I'd just watch a porn and not playing a Visual Novel. Oh and i felt like watching instead of getting engaged, because there are quasi non choises.

But the quality itself is good, despite not my cup of tea (because of story, writing, plot, lack of choises) I won't rate it. That would be like rating a RPG or RTS game when I prefer First person shooters, and that would be not fair then.

We are very early in the story, everything that's happened so far is important to the story. She loves sex but hates incest.

 

[Rico Caramba]

I tried the game a bit but its not my type of game. This is why:

There is not enough built-up and too many sex scenes and too soon. Personally I can't stand the characters. The girlfriend of the daugther is an asshole, i can't understand what Amelia has for her, and Amelia herself is 18 and the biggest slut in the universe. That doesn't seem so realistic or appealing to me. Aside of lewd and naughty talk there is almost non other "story". Yeah a bit is there, but its not enough to get me engaged and the over the top and too frequent sex and lewd scenes is a turn off to me. I need more built-up and writing which is non-sex related to get interested. TLDR the biggest problem there do not seem to be a built-up. Not sure if i phrased that all correctly, but that are my thoughts. Sorry to say it that harsh, but when I want sex scenes after sex scenes after sex scenes with almost non story, then I'd just watch a porn and not playing a Visual Novel. Oh and i felt like watching instead of getting engaged, because there are quasi non choises.

But the quality itself is good, despite not my cup of tea (because of story, writing, plot, lack of choises) I won't rate it. That would be like rating a RPG or RTS game when I prefer First person shooters, and that would be not fair then.

This is not a game yet, this is just the introduction to it. And I disagree that there is no story in this VN. It's just not the traditional story slowly building up to sex scenes, maybe after the 10th or so update. The hardcore sex is present in here, from the start.

The story is about a character you may love to hate. She can be cute, to her father, and disgusting at the same time. Personally, I like the contrast within this girl more and more.

But you can't argue about taste. Nobody is forced to like anything, and there is plenty of other stuff around you may like better. Respect for you not giving a bad rating for not liking the game. I very much agree with you that such would be unfair, and I have seen people doing otherwise many times. Personally I would only give a bad rating if I do like the game or the theme, but have major problems with the execution of it. And even then, I usually wouldn't bother. It is more fun to write a positive review about something you really like.

 

[Wicked Garden]

So she's the opposite of the other "Daughters" in this genre. Normally the goal is the deflower your virgin daughter but in this case... She apparently fucks anything that moves. She's only 18 but has a lot of milage on her pussy.

Yikes

 

[Cirro84]

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The game does remind me of a comic / AIF(?) where hubby's precious waifu is 'lent' to bad boss, only to be trained to obedience and becoming his slut pet. It got differing paths / ends(?) afaik, at one very end ex-hubby could pay a prostitute only to meet ex-waifu and she, all slut, does not recognise him (brain washed?), she can get pumped by bros (and ex hub, or not, bc drama). And little cuck is desolate bc he lost her, yada yada...

Cuck cringefest deluxe. The game might go right in this direction, who knows.

 

[LewdLaureate]

I thought it was actually kind of refreshing to just have expectations laid bare like that from the get go. It does seem to end up with a compromised narrative arc though. I don't feel like the story is actually moving even when events are happening, and development seems largely constrained to the father. Not much you can really do about that now, but it's the biggest flaw I see in the story here.

 

[User_32285]

I love the daughter character, very sexy and playful.

Also like the way father and daughter are manipulated by the girlfriend and old guy (sorry bad with names).

Best part is end (v011), I am very curious about the next part

It has been suggested before, but it would be great if you could also integrate the preceding months where both father and daughter were manipulated/hypnotized (flashbacks or a prologue).

 

[michel.gellar7]

Main problem: Lack of immersion through choices!
Even meaningless choices than actually doesn't change anything... IMMERSION!

Second problem: Make us choose for the extreme fetish parts. I almost vomit with the pee stuff!

Besides that, great concept, good writing, passable graphics...

Keep up the good work

 

[Tanwise]

Not to mention that the tags specify male domination and corruption, yet the male protaganist just let's the girl do what ever she wants and stands in the background.

I tried the game a bit but its not my type of game. This is why:

There is not enough built-up and too many sex scenes and too soon. Personally I can't stand the characters. The girlfriend of the daugther is an asshole, i can't understand what Amelia has for her, and Amelia herself is 18 and the biggest slut in the universe. That doesn't seem so realistic or appealing to me. Aside of lewd and naughty talk there is almost non other "story". Yeah a bit is there, but its not enough to get me engaged and the over the top and too frequent sex and lewd scenes is a turn off to me. I need more built-up and writing which is non-sex related to get interested. TLDR the biggest problem there do not seem to be a built-up. Not sure if i phrased that all correctly, but that are my thoughts. Sorry to say it that harsh, but when I want sex scenes after sex scenes after sex scenes with almost non story, then I'd just watch a porn and not playing a Visual Novel. Oh and i felt like watching instead of getting engaged, because there are quasi non choises.

But the quality itself is good, despite not my cup of tea (because of story, writing, plot, lack of choises) I won't rate it. That would be like rating a RPG or RTS game when I prefer First person shooters, and that would be not fair then.

 

[RedPillBlues]

Wow after playing this, I think it might top my list as one of my most hated games. The daughter is the worst female character on this site.

 

[ThunderRob]

Wow after playing this, I think it might top my list as one of my most hated games. The daughter is the worst female character on this site.

that might be the point actually..the dev is blazing a new path for porn by starting out with an utterly unredeemable dame...and i think ..may be wrong of course..you can save her..lol

 

[RedPillBlues]

i think ..may be wrong of course..you can save her..lol

What has been seen, cannot be unseen, and her actions cant be undone. She is far beyond the point of redemption in my opinion. Even if you could I wouldn't want to, my only desire as a player is to cut off all communications and never see her again.

 

[magus448]

that might be the point actually..the dev is blazing a new path for porn by starting out with an utterly unredeemable dame...and i think ..may be wrong of course..you can save her..lol

Well there is also Nicole from The Tyrant.

 

[User_32285]

I really don't get all the hate for the daughter.

She is an adolescent who has been (sexually) manipulated and hypnotized by her psychologist for months.

Add to that financial difficulties, the trauma of just having lost her mother (survivors guilt) and being manipulated by her best friend (who is in collaboration with the chairman and the psychologist).

 

[ThunderRob]

Well there is also Nicole from The Tyrant.

Nicole was a victim of a husband she trusted and loved going off the "legal book" putting his family in harms way during a police thang(illegal EVERYWHERE gimme your badge and gun you are off the force) thinking she was doing good..Nicole is the definition of "needs saving"

 

[magus448]

Nicole was a victim of a husband she trusted and loved going off the "legal book" putting his family in harms way during a police thang(illegal EVERYWHERE gimme your badge and gun you are off the force) thinking she was doing good..Nicole is the definition of "needs saving"

Sure but, she loses some points being the town bicycle and liking it while lying to the MC's face saying one instance she was raped in the bathroom stall while actually enjoying it.

Though to be fair, you don't see it on other paths. Some scenes her behavior is inconsistent. One scene she's ashamed MC sees her (in the basement) with Davide while another she does it unashamedly and is angry at him afterwards (kitchen).

Guess she needs saving from herself as well as the gang.

 

[ThunderRob]

Sure but, she loses some points being the town bicycle and liking it while lying to the MC's face saying one instance she was raped in the bathroom stall while actually enjoying it.

Though to be fair, you don't see it on other paths. Some scenes her behavior is inconsistent. One scene she's ashamed MC sees her (basement) and Davide while another she does it unashamedly and is angry at him after wards (kitchen).

Guess she needs saving from herself as well as the gang.

it is a reallllly bad game..lol..at least this game..so far..is well written even if the content is not to many's liking..give @StickmanVN props for striking a chord here...that is a success.

 

[TheKryptonian]

it is a reallllly bad game..lol..at least this game..so far..is well written even if the content is not to many's liking..give @StickmanVN props for striking a chord here...that is a success.

I get even bad pub is good pub but from the responses from most its just all bad in this case. Dev just went way to far off the cliff on the daughter that people dont want to "save" her and dont care if she was manipulated in whatever way, she is just to nasty even for the biggest pervs among us pirates.

Disgusting is just disgusting

 

[ThunderRob]

I get even bad pub is good pub but from the responses from most its just all bad in this case. Dev just went way to far off the cliff on the daughter that people dont want to "save" her and dont care if she was manipulated in whatever way, she is just to nasty even for the biggest pervs among us pirates.

Disgusting is just disgusting

i will still play it because i'm a sucker for a potential "redemption" story..even if you hafta walk through some filth to get there ...of course..if there is NO redemption..i'll come back and burn all my comments..HAHAAA!!!

 

[Rico Caramba]

I stil don’t understand what is so shockingly disgusting about her. OK, the piss drinking. But further she does exactly the same as what most male MC’s do, fuck around a lot. When guys do it, it is OK. But when a girl fucks around, she is disgusting?
IRL, at this age, many girls are not monogamous. I dare say this daughter is closer to reality than all this clueless, inocent, virgin girls that sooner or later change into insaturable love godesses, but only to the MC, even if he is a cheating bastard.

 

[Penfold Mole]

I stil don’t understand what is so shockingly disgusting about her. OK, the piss drinking. But further she does exactly the same as what most male MC’s do, fuck around a lot. When guys do it, it is OK. But when a girl fucks around, she is disgusting?
IRL, at this age, many girls are not monogamous. I dare say this daughter is closer to reality than all this clueless, inocent, virgin girls that sooner or later change into insaturable love godesses, but only to the MC, even if he is a cheating bastard.

Thank you for bringing a bit of reality and logic into the discussion where a lot of guys seem to wish that games should all be something like a muslim suicide bomber's paradise, filled with slutty and sexually skilled virgins at his personal disposal