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Btw it's mods deleting comments, not the dev.. i also just got mine deleted by them too.
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Well, actually all the details about the "update" have already been said, so here's my conclusion about it:
Prologue to v0.1.5: the buried desires for the game have been awakened
v0.2.0 (beta): the desires for the game have been buried.
Prologue to v0.1.5: the buried desires for the game have been awakened
v0.2.0 (beta): the desires for the game have been buried.
- Jan 31, 2019
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actually, mods only interject when someone reports your post. Mostly the dev kuz they're butthurt their shitty story is tanking.
- Oct 9, 2017
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So that whole time spent on the last update was an experiment on what he wants to do? If so does that mean 1- it was a massive waste of time and 2 - There is still hope that he will do away with this abomination of a kinetic train wreck and get back to the good roots.
- Feb 2, 2021
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This updates looks like some kind of quick test to implement some fuck scenes that the dev had done.
There are two scenes that are totally awkward, the first in the parking lot with the random girl you follow in the toilets and fuck.
Then another one in the motel where you enter a room, chat with a junky, fuck a girl on the bed and you go back to your room and between this you just have some car chat.
It seems to me that the dev works backwards, i mean that he builds some sex scenes then he tries to insert them in a little story that doesn't match with the prologue.
It looks more like some kind of fan service, where the dev gives us some quick fap material to keep the player attention as the main story stays in just teasing and talking.
It was almost the same in another game named Something Special, where there was a good start and the last update was completely fucked up, just as if the dev was bored and wanted to change his story or just throw it in the ditch.
I agree, The Guardian is next level. I think this games needs to stay with the devs beginning concept. But, hey..... I'm not the dev.
lol, Staff/Moderators delete posts, has nothing to do with the dev, but believe what you want, conspiracies are fun too
- Feb 2, 2021
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Promoting his own game in someone else game thread is not really the right thing to do, so it was certainly removed by a mod.lol, Staff/Moderators delete posts, has nothing to do with the dev, but believe what you want, conspiracies are fun too
But when a mod does this it would be better to send a quick message to explain why, it would avoid those stupid conspiracies theories!
After the 1.5 update (the side story) was disappointed by the way the creator when with the game. Why go on a side story when you haven't even finished introducing the story at all? With the this update, I don't expect anything from him anymore.
He has no idea on the direction he wants to take the game and just go into this weird story.
To bad those early renders went to waste.
He has no idea on the direction he wants to take the game and just go into this weird story.
To bad those early renders went to waste.
Ah, i didn't see the post promoting their own game in this thread, so yeah, understandable it was removed by staff, sprouting jealously was amusing though and blaming the dev for it, funny thing is i've never heard of the OP and probably never heard of or seen their game, so the Ego is quite high in that respect, but whateverPromoting his own game in someone else game thread is not really the right thing to do, so it was certainly removed by a mod.
But when a mod does this it would be better to send a quick message to explain why, it would avoid those stupid conspiracies theories!
If you're a dev and go around trash talking some other dev, especially on a site like this with the sheer number of people here, then that says more about them than it does about the dev they are trashing, lol
Oh my god. LOL What is going on with this game? Did it always have such absurd dialogues and situations that make absolutely no sense? LOL. The "Hit me!" convo with Luna is the most unintentionally(?) hilarious shit I've ever seen in a porn game.
I do agree with everyone that the plot is going off the rails big time, but that's not the biggest problem. The writing is just so atrocious. Like the characters are all schizophrenic crackheads going through manic and depressive episodes.
I do agree with everyone that the plot is going off the rails big time, but that's not the biggest problem. The writing is just so atrocious. Like the characters are all schizophrenic crackheads going through manic and depressive episodes.
I'm sure it ties in to the story somehow, just don't know how at this point, just have to wait and see where it leads i guess.
- Oct 9, 2017
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All we can do is wait and see. I have to say though, I'm not very hopeful right now. If he doesn't go back to the school and if he continues to take choices away from the player the banner and description need to be changed because right now that's not at all what this game is about.
- Feb 2, 2021
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I would say that even at the end of the previous version, with that bat hit on the MC's head from Luna, i was "WHAT!!" i was puzzled and trying to find a reason for this, i was thinking of something like the good uncle having been a litttle too touchy with Luna in the past maybe. That event seemed forced to make a cliffhanger.
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My personal problems with this version:
The choices or lack thereof and a lack of the consequences thereof: As I wrote before, at least in Pen&Paper, one of the sins the DM can commit is to take away the player's autotomy over their own character and their choices. In small portions it CAN be okay narratively, but you shouldn't overdo it. I'm not one to condemn linear games, on the contrary, I think linear games are more enjoyable because it's easier to follow a thread (both as a player and as a developer). A no go is the Railroad storyline, where there is effectively no decision and the player is just a mute spectator and doesn't make any decision that is somehow relevant. For a scenario that deals with events that happened in the past and that are unknown to the MC and the player it is fine, however that is not the case here. The last version did a relatively good job with the twins' subplot, though I think at least the twins' encounter with the MC could have been inserted into the main game. With the escalation in the current version, it seems more like "what would have happened if we had stuck with the actual plot?" alternate version to me.
From a teacher who felt guilty because a student killed herself and could professionally turn down advances, we are now at an MC who is still a teacher, but mounts almost everything that is not on the trees by three. I don't know if the baseball bat caused a concussion that shifted his moral compass south but this is more of a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde scenario of character development.
My thoughts on how to save this version, which is already a train wreck:
1. give the player choices that carry weight. At the gas station alone, the whole guessing game is rather a waste of time when it comes to the scene in the restroom. Just as well the scene could have gone like this, " She: Sex? MC: LUL, k." and it wouldn't have changed anything about the course of events. Giving the player the option to say no would therefore have been a neat option.
2. the scene at the motel: instead of an unknown girl, for example, the MC could have happened to hear the voice of one of his students. Since we already know that the twins' parents are dubious, that wouldn't have been so surprising. Again, if then with optional sex.
3. the fist punch against the niece. If I remember correctly, the MC said something like "Don't worry, I know how to deal with little monsters" in an earlier version. So now we know what he meant by that. Seriously, if he has such a fragile ego as a teacher that such silly insults from his niece (!), who either has emotional problems or feelings for her uncle, make him lose control like that, then he is absolutely unfit for his profession and should think about another professional career. The scene, and there I join others is absolutely unnecessary. And if it should be a little more violent, then the niece simply spanked. Freely according to the motto: Beware of what you wish. It could come true, but differently than you think.
I don't know if and how the dev can save this update, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
Edit: Small update to make my sentence structure in the third point make more sense.
The choices or lack thereof and a lack of the consequences thereof: As I wrote before, at least in Pen&Paper, one of the sins the DM can commit is to take away the player's autotomy over their own character and their choices. In small portions it CAN be okay narratively, but you shouldn't overdo it. I'm not one to condemn linear games, on the contrary, I think linear games are more enjoyable because it's easier to follow a thread (both as a player and as a developer). A no go is the Railroad storyline, where there is effectively no decision and the player is just a mute spectator and doesn't make any decision that is somehow relevant. For a scenario that deals with events that happened in the past and that are unknown to the MC and the player it is fine, however that is not the case here. The last version did a relatively good job with the twins' subplot, though I think at least the twins' encounter with the MC could have been inserted into the main game. With the escalation in the current version, it seems more like "what would have happened if we had stuck with the actual plot?" alternate version to me.
From a teacher who felt guilty because a student killed herself and could professionally turn down advances, we are now at an MC who is still a teacher, but mounts almost everything that is not on the trees by three. I don't know if the baseball bat caused a concussion that shifted his moral compass south but this is more of a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde scenario of character development.
My thoughts on how to save this version, which is already a train wreck:
1. give the player choices that carry weight. At the gas station alone, the whole guessing game is rather a waste of time when it comes to the scene in the restroom. Just as well the scene could have gone like this, " She: Sex? MC: LUL, k." and it wouldn't have changed anything about the course of events. Giving the player the option to say no would therefore have been a neat option.
2. the scene at the motel: instead of an unknown girl, for example, the MC could have happened to hear the voice of one of his students. Since we already know that the twins' parents are dubious, that wouldn't have been so surprising. Again, if then with optional sex.
3. the fist punch against the niece. If I remember correctly, the MC said something like "Don't worry, I know how to deal with little monsters" in an earlier version. So now we know what he meant by that. Seriously, if he has such a fragile ego as a teacher that such silly insults from his niece (!), who either has emotional problems or feelings for her uncle, make him lose control like that, then he is absolutely unfit for his profession and should think about another professional career. The scene, and there I join others is absolutely unnecessary. And if it should be a little more violent, then the niece simply spanked. Freely according to the motto: Beware of what you wish. It could come true, but differently than you think.
I don't know if and how the dev can save this update, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
Edit: Small update to make my sentence structure in the third point make more sense.
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