VN Ren'Py Color of My Sound [Ch.2 Final v7] [Gallant Trombe]

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monk_56

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No animations. I don't have the hardware/time to do them.
More time to focus on narrative then ^_^. Love how you've given each of the female characters their own set of hidden motivations ect. So often women in porn games just get sublimated by the MC or NPCs and used as kink dumps rather than being treated like autonomous individuals with their own plots or sub-plots.

The potential cat-fighting / intrigue of it all is so delicious.
 

-CookieMonster666-

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I like the call to Naughty America on the roll-up door while the MC is tracking Grace. (BTW, it's a shame about her, of course.) I assume there are other Easter eggs like that here and there that I've missed. Anyway, I really enjoy the plot of the game and the characters so far. I also like the world building you've done. Very creative and well set up. It will be interesting to learn, over time, the hows and whys of everything.
 
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Gallant Trombe

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We're doing another poll for "Best Girl". Lana won last month so she's not included. I'll be making a 4K wallpaper of the winner :)



If you don't recognize two of the options, don't worry about them. I added them for my own amusement.
 

monk_56

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We're doing another poll for "Best Girl". Lana won last month so she's not included. I'll be making a 4K wallpaper of the winner :)



If you don't recognize two of the options, don't worry about them. I added them for my own amusement.
Fun! Blanche has my vote. I like quirky girls / kind characters. Only way another character could compete is if you threw a shy freckled redhead nerd into the mix :p.

Blanche had some really sweetheart moments this release. She also looks so heckin cool with her golden arm- that bling will look ballin in 4k.
 

matschbirne

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puhh, i dit it to the end of the chapter.
and I liked what I've seen so far,I am very curious what to expect in the future.:unsure:
 

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This music fits perfectly with the game's atmosphere
since there was no background sound I used it while playing and it immersed me greatly
Not sure if it will cause copyright issues if added but I'm just leaving it here for other players to try while there is still no official sound
 
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Look-see

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hmmm didnt have alot of time to know grace. but sucks that she's dead. wish it was a male comrade instead. now she's become a girl who i want but can never have. but in general i never really liked it when female characters die for that exact reason.

i think i'll leave this game behind for now. might come back later but eh idk. forced sex scenes are one thing. but dead hot girls has always been a bane of mine:LOL:
 

-CookieMonster666-

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hmmm didnt have alot of time to know grace. but sucks that she's dead. wish it was a male comrade instead. now she's become a girl who i want but can never have. but in general i never really liked it when female characters die for that exact reason.

i think i'll leave this game behind for now. might come back later but eh idk. forced sex scenes are one thing. but dead hot girls has always been a bane of mine:LOL:
Never play Depraved Awakening, then. :ROFLMAO:
 
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1337Bob

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Really enjoyed this and am looking forward to where the story goes. Definitely on its way to one of the best AVNs around.

The setting and story are all favourites for me (sci-fi intrigue/thriller doesn't get nearly enough love, nor does space neo-feudalism). The writing is quite good and there seems to be a clear and well-thought out plot for the game. The characters seems well defined and have clear personalities and motivations. The renders and the girls are all great too, needless to say.

My only major pieces of criticism at this stage is that some of the early dialogue is a bit clunky, and it definitely improves at the VN progresses. I would probably chalk it up the exposition dump early, which could probably have been handled slightly better. The other criticism is the choice of 'name' change. I thought it weirdly out of place in the story. It doesn't make sense in the context of the story why a prominent war hero, who is using that fame as a part of a cover, would change their name. The justification of for personal/psychological reasons just doesn't cut it, especially in a situation where you're simply an officer following orders. It would make more sense if the name change occurred when the Officer applied for the academy, to demarcate the transition from budding musician to cold military man, but alas it is not something we experience first-hand in the story. Alternatively, if the name change was done specifically for the media campaign to make him a hero, they wanted him to adopt a more aesthetic 'heroic' name to aid in propaganda before he became known to the public.

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Gallant Trombe

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Really enjoyed this and am looking forward to where the story goes. Definitely on its way to one of the best AVNs around.

The setting and story are all favourites for me (sci-fi intrigue/thriller doesn't get nearly enough love, nor does space neo-feudalism). The writing is quite good and there seems to be a clear and well-thought out plot for the game. The characters seems well defined and have clear personalities and motivations. The renders and the girls are all great too, needless to say.

My only major pieces of criticism at this stage is that some of the early dialogue is a bit clunky, and it definitely improves at the VN progresses. I would probably chalk it up the exposition dump early, which could probably have been handled slightly better. The other criticism is the choice of 'name' change. I thought it weirdly out of place in the story. It doesn't make sense in the context of the story why a prominent war hero, who is using that fame as a part of a cover, would change their name. The justification of for personal/psychological reasons just doesn't cut it, especially in a situation where you're simply an officer following orders. It would make more sense if the name change occurred when the Officer applied for the academy, to demarcate the transition from budding musician to cold military man, but alas it is not something we experience first-hand in the story. Alternatively, if the name change was done specifically for the media campaign to make him a hero, they wanted him to adopt a more aesthetic 'heroic' name to aid in propaganda before he became known to the public.

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4.30 star(s) 68 Votes