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If you post your possible ideas to mod Milky Touch and set some support milestones, I think that will help drive this forward.With more support and the continued interest, never say 'never'
If you post your possible ideas to mod Milky Touch and set some support milestones, I think that will help drive this forward.With more support and the continued interest, never say 'never'
I made it a little smootherAs a game-ending gift, I edited a 30-second sprint, creampie Riley animation.
Since I'm not a MILF fan, I'm only a fan of Riley in this game.
FHD, the quality of the game itself.
Mega:44MB
Octavia's bad ending...My most favourite character of that game... providing extras/VIP services at the strip club
we need more!My most favourite character of that game... providing extras/VIP services at the strip club
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Octavia's "good ending" should really be the bad ending, how f-ing sad it was. The bad ending (bathroom scene) would be a great lead-in to the corruption path.Octavia's bad ending...
I'd say in an ideal world it would be the neutral ending. Actually, in an ideal world, the ideal MT would have four endings for Octavia, all depending on MC's actions and decisions:Octavia's "good ending" should really be the bad ending, how f-ing sad it was.
Yep! I always felt that the second "Mask" scene (the one with anal sex) is way too hasty like we've skipped some scenes between the first scene and that one. It's like in the first scene she's reluctant and shy but in the next scene she's already completely corrupted and is a perfect sex slave already. And the entire corruption happened somewhere behind the scenes by the hands of some "Maria" we didn't even happen to see. It's like ordering yourself a pizza delivered to home instead of making something by yourself for yourself. I mean, the whole fun (however questionable it might be) of corruption routes is that you gradually make a sex slave or a slut out of a nice girl, not just wait a few days while other people do it.The bad ending (bathroom scene) would be a great lead-in to the corruption path.
I do not think that she leaves in the "good" ending because she does not love the MC. More like she does not love herself, quite the contrary in fact. She is broken. It is indeed far from a good ending. But still better than the other outcome in my book.I'd say in an ideal world it would be the neutral ending. Actually, in an ideal world, the ideal MT would have four endings for Octavia, all depending on MC's actions and decisions:
A) Bad ending with Octavia becoming MC's slave
B) Bad ending with Octavia ending up as just another girl satisfying customers at "Mask"; if MC was willing but failed to help her
C) Neutral ending with Octavia out of "Mask" thanks to MC but she's not really in love with him, all she feels is gratitude; so she leaves him because she thinks it would be the best both for her and for him
D) Good ending where she stays with MC
Well, she certainly feels something for MC, but she's not head over heels passionate about him, so she's able to make a very rational decision to leave the town and MC. You make it sound almost like she punishes herself by leaving MC, but I chose to interpret her ending like that - she's scarred but not completely broken, and so she wisely chooses to leave the whole ordeal behind and start a new page in life. "Time will heal" and all that. As for MC, IIRC she once said to him something along the lines of "I'm too old for you, you should have your freedom and get a lot of different girlfriends and fun" etc., so I think her rationalization of leaving MC is giving him freedom to live his life to the fullest (which failed, as we can see, since he still can't forget her even after several relationships). And so she leaves, but have one last passionate lovemaking before that - to end the relationship on an upbeat note, so to say, so that both of them would have something wonderful to remember.I do not think that she leaves in the "good" ending because she does not love the MC. More like she does not love herself, quite the contrary in fact. She is broken. It is indeed far from a good ending. But still better than the other outcome in my book.
Teach me the ways, masterOK, so the Octavia "good ending" gnawed at me and I found the script and edited it to create a truly good ending. I feel so much better now! Still wishing for some expanded scenes, but at least all endings now make me feel better.
Go to the game folder and find two files (script_day22.rpy & script_day22_OctaviaVanilla.rpy). This is only for the final Octavia good ending. The Day22 file, line 1631 is the start of the in car dialog then cuts to the final scene. Octavia Vanilla file is the scene after she drops you off at the house. Just note, I ran into problems when I entered new dialog because I used the tab key. I got it to work, but I'm a noob at this. I suggest you just replace the dialog you don't like & not try to enter new ones; of course, save these originals files somewhere in case you need to start over. Good luck!Teach me the ways, master
No pregnancy tag, that should give you an idea. (To be clear, answer is no unfortunately)
Can any/all of the women be impregnated in the game? (I couldn't tell in the search)
I wrote this draft after finally completing Octavia's LOVE route yesterday.
(You guys made me unable to sleep until 3 AM because I keep getting this bitter feeling, thanks guys).
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EDIT: I feel like there was another route planned for Octavia but was scrapped from the white board because of funds.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Thanks for your kind words, I'm definitely not better than Milky Touch's writer though. English isn't my native language so I only know basic vocabularies and some, whereas in Milky Touch there are lot of words used to narrate that I found very "poetic" and "novel", with elements of theatricality. Words that you'd expect to be found in professional literature and not in normal conversations, but the writers didn't abuse them to flex their vocab skills and made a sentence or paragraph overly complicated for the average readers like some writers I've seen and it's perfect.I clicked on your version of 'ending' but was turned off by the massive wall of text, but just the same, slowly read my way through, as I find your narrative style intriguing enough. Damn bro! What you've just written was on par (if not BETTER, than the author's)! You should consider writing as a career. You're definitely good at this. That was just beautiful writing.
Superb ending too, for Octavia lovers!