Kudos on this game, it is everything I ever hoped to play as soon as I finished my first Slave Management game (Free cities)
Sincere thank you for all the many, many, MANY hours you have spent on coding this and then offering the full version to us poor folk for free.
Alas I can't afford to become a patreon at this moment so I decided to thank you by providing feedback and suggestions.
As a coder I understand that typo's are less important than getting the mechanics to work as intended but I made a list to help you. I added some suggestions to the english version of the game. I hope you understand that I'm not doing this to be pedantic but as help.
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version : 90ss_v0786_x64
win 7.1
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typo/ weird phrasing :
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-buy beer -> bootle should be bottle
-advertising bar -> income ( end of day ) : adversiting should be advertising
-sick :
taked meds -> medicine taken or took meds ( see no use in meds because Nurse solves illness and meds alone do nothing as far as I can see)
because of hunger and poor sanitation, your slave NAME get ill -> because of hunger and poor sanitation, your slave NAME got ill
-shackles was removed -> shackles were removed ( shackles are still on in gfx )
-slave : yes master my ass at your disposal -> Yes master my ass is at your disposal
-sex trainer : How much are your services costs -> correct but odd -> How much do your services cost ?
-nurse : "Good day, sir. I'm ready for sevice" -> "Good day, sir. I'm ready for service"
-psychologist : "I'm professional psychologist" -> "I'm a professional psychologist"
-builder is cleaning garbage -> Builder is clearing debris/rubble
-Psychologist 1lvl : Reveals exact values of the some slave characteristics -> Psychologist lvl 1 : Reveals exact values of some slave characteristics.
-Psychologist 2lvl : Allows you to see the exact values of the slave all characteristics -> Psychologist lvl 2 : Reveals exact values of all slave characteristics.
-Potion of Sanity : "Rasise slave mind level" -> "Raises slave mind level"
-"your slave was selled on auction ..." -> "Your slave was sold at/by auction"
- I think it would be better if you changed "trade" in the shop to "buy supplies at shop" because trade usually means to exchange goods for goods. It confused me and I had to look online to see where I could find raw food. Same could be said for the bar, "trade" should be changed into "buy alcohol" to avoid confusion.
- "Dwelled by" is technically correct but old english and comes across as very odd imho. Maybe try "Occupied", "Used by", "Inhabited by" or simply "Assigned to". I'm guessing you are a Francophone because as soon as I started thinking in French the confusion cleared up.
- "Dirty kitchen, some food has rotten" -> "Dirty kitchen, some food has rotted/spoilt"
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bug :
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training room :
- washing ends up in loop without getting clean and unusable for rest of day
- Tears ends up in loop without a new menu, sometimes when you leave room and enter again you break the loop. Maybe it's intentional but for a new player like me it feels like you are stuck.
- anal hook : option 1,2 & 3 have no mouse over text ( tool tip )
- Horse : blowjob increases pussy skill (oral skills already @ 10 ) : is that intentionally or a bug ?
- slave passes out during training, says she is returned to cell but she ends up on carpet in bedroom ( see bedroom bug ).
Bathroom / Mistress :
- those rooms never get dirty.
Bedroom :
Assigning slave to carpet in bedroom also assigns slave to left cell
Stats screen : Sometimes the exact percentages don't show up in the bar, restarted and they show again. Haven't figured out how to cause missing percentages to reproduce it yet.
Bar : When buying alcohol it says vodka 5, when I click it I get the vodka and the price is deducted but the stock in the bar remains at 5 but I can't keep buying booze.
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suggestions :
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- second street is not that easy to find, with 30 years of gaming experience it took me 6 hours to stumble upon it. Don't know if the sign vend street / devoir street is hardcoded in the gfx but maybe change it in the english version so it is more clear . Maybe Hospital / Business center ?
- income from bar service and dancing should show up in daily results
- income from servants should show up in daily results
- income from working from home ( master ) should show up in daily results
- speech is way too fast ! turning speed to turtle and then back gets old real fast.
- Upgrading cell reduces mind penalty but it would be nice if a mouse over tool tip could explain that in builder menu.
- When the nurse or psychologist has finished they wait for further orders but the builder always goes away after one job. When you sell a lot, and you have money to spend, it's very tedious having to call the builder for every job.
- If the master has to eat just like his slaves, I think the Master should also need to take a bath. Could be an option to join slave in bath and let her wash you, maybe even with happy ending.
- Baton is something riot police use. Maybe add a sex shop where you can buy feather (tickle), paddle (spanking), whip, vibrator, buttplug (tail), lube (less penalty for anal training), nippleclamps (bonus on pain-> tears), shackles (special with boosts), collar, gimp mask
- Move NPC nurse to hospital and let her sell medicine (and birth control?) instead of shop. Might even allow for fun with nurse sidequest.
- Instead of having the Psychologist show up in your home, let the master take her to sessions on top floor of hospital ? Might even allow for fun with shrink sidequest.
- R&R room on top level of the house. Mat for yoga ( artistry skills ), watch TV business channel ( enterprise skill ) , use computer to play 90SS ( laptop - easily overheating, regular pc - limited time, game pc - unlimited time )
- R&R in park ( tree and benches to the left of gloryhole ) with your slave ( not servant on her own )
- Let the drugdealer sell :
* stimulants to boost stamina at a higher risk of getting sick.
* pot brownies/poppers to reduce pain during training but at extra stamina cost
* LSD to boost submission at high mind penalties
- Let the shop sell condoms, energy drinks (boost stamina today but lowers max stamina tomorrow), cookies (treat for being a good girl), business suit master ( slave working with you receive enterprise bonus ) , joker suit ( convince sympathy boost ), leather suit ( convince intimidation boost ), Priest suit ( convince mind recover boost )
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- Please put up a wiki and let volunteers fill it. keep admin rights so you can check and correct wrong info.
- PLEASE DO NOT MAKE THIS GAME TIME LIMITED
I intended to only post this after I unlocked everything to get you a complete list but since washing my slaves always cures the mind and the other way of cleaning them is bugged I'm facing one hell of a grind to destroy their mind.
If you could give me a complete list of texts used I could proofread it for you and as an extra I'll make a dutch translation for you. Seems like the least I can do to contribute.