Not a bad start. As someone who likes futa, but is rather apprehensive about femdom, I don't know how much I'll end up enjoying this, but I'll keep an eye on it for now.
There are a few wrong uses of your<>you're and its<>it's, a few typos like "Here me out" and "suite yourself", and "women" where it should say "woman". A few missing periods, a couple of times where sentences just drone on without a much-needed comma. "Idk" should probably be written out.
Finally, I wonder if there's a reason the MC's name is fixed, or if the dev merely forgot to let the player rename him...
(version 0.1, SI-9)