The coloring of names when people speak is sometimes hard to tell apart, like Emma and Erica are both violet, so it would really be helpful to keep characters to a unique color, or with a small image of who is talking. Some of the colors can be hard to read like the green mentioned.
Conceptualness of the game sounds interesting. It is basically those battle school animes but with super powers instead. I do have to wonder what MC is going to do, having characters who can control others all the time seems like something that will need to be put into the ground.
Having different powers making different things happen sounds pretty cool.
Is it MC's fetish to want to cum on things? Seems weird to be getting a BJ and then cum on the person instead of continuing the BJ, same with the rest.
The girl placards are okay, but some choices on color and font can make them hard to read.
The character information in the side panel, the "next of kin" might want a new naming scheme, and should take on MC's last name for Serafina since she is his wife, and the same with Simone, since the Ishu name can be changed. Also put MC's name instead of Keith since that is supposed to be the default name.
First use of phone, all names are clickable except Simone's
End of the game asks if it is Erica on the left. However it looks more like that Taylor girl, also doesn't mention who pink haired was, since it was shay via the wardrobe picker.
In office clicking through the outfit cards, they can be clicked on through the chat box.
Clicking the Serafina name summons shay.
clicking sex and training with shay crashes the game.
Back and forward buttons may want to stand out a bit more and be easier to see, since most people keep their eyes towards the center instead of bottom edges.
Might also want to clean out the folder of non necessary parts. Like the cruncher and its accompanying files.
