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Does feature a few minor story spoilers.
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However based on the feedback I am thinking a resolution to the 'MC being weak' is a potential intro skip of sought.

For all any thoughts on that possibility?
i think the game was called "Quarantined Sex"

regarding the teachers and not seeing. honestly for me its like maybe 30/70 in terms of it being ok but thats because of context. 30% i approve because i dont see it. 70% i dissaprove because i knnow it's happening and the context of that relationship is because of mind control soooo it could be suggested that they're doing it against their will(rapey vibe)
if it were just a simple case of the female teachers being married then it wouldn't matter. because, well married women have sex...sometimes:p.

honestly though i dont know how much my opinion is worth because as i mentioned i have no idea what happens after sandbox. sandbox is a game killer for me so any changes you make i might not even see.

but one suggestion that any dev could gain from is to make sex scenes optional. players appreciate the hell out of not being forced to do a sex act they dont like with someone they dont like.
 
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I can't speak for everyone but to me at least, seeing a future LI with another person is a no go for me. About the not seen scenes (skippable) know this. You either make it Avoidable (never happens) or let it the way it is, cause you will waste your time making it skippable but it will not please us who dislike it. Just not seeing isn't enough
 

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i think the game was called "Quarantined Sex"

regarding the teachers and not seeing. honestly for me its like maybe 30/70 in terms of it being ok but thats because of context. 30% i approve because i dont see it. 70% i dissaprove because i knnow it's happening and the context of that relationship is because of mind control soooo it could be suggested that they're doing it against their will(rapey vibe)
if it were just a simple case of the female teachers being married then it wouldn't matter. because, well married women have sex...sometimes:p.

honestly though i dont know how much my opinion is worth because as i mentioned i have no idea what happens after sandbox. sandbox is a game killer for me so any changes you make i might not even see.

but one suggestion that any dev could gain from is to make sex scenes optional. players appreciate the hell out of not being forced to do a sex act they dont like with someone they dont like.
Thanks for getting back to me. Yeah I had a look at the page to be honest the main feeling I get is that the creator wasn't interacting with the audience enough or atleast in detail.

In terms of your response to be open it is tricky as of course each sex scene put in the game is in relation to the story however being a fan of harem games NTR/Sharing is not the way I want it to go. At this point I'm considering leaving it in but making those two guaranteed optional additions to the harem.

I will also look into making sex scenes optional as choice remains important to me in the vision for this game.

In terms of sandbox I don't intend for it to be like most sandboxes where you keep farming for last increases etc to then move on to another scene. Its more meant to allow some interactivity allowing side stories to take place.

I appreciate this won't matter as much to you due to your views on sandbox however rest assured your feedback is still very much appreciated!

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choices for where to finish are usually good. creampie is obviously the goto for players who want to knock up their lovers even if pregnancy isnt added until the end of the game...or at all
Thanks for that definitely will look to add it. The more options the better ultimately.

I can't speak for everyone but to me at least, seeing a future LI with another person is a no go for me. About the not seen scenes (skippable) know this. You either make it Avoidable (never happens) or let it the way it is, cause you will waste your time making it skippable but it will not please us who dislike it. Just not seeing isn't enough
Thanks for confirming.

Again I really wasn't sure the best way to go about it as mentioned above I do stand by the story and so they will definitely be optional lovers and not forced into it.
 

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In terms of sandbox I don't intend for it to be like most sandboxes where you keep farming for last increases etc to then move on to another scene. Its more meant to allow some interactivity allowing side stories to take place.

I appreciate this won't matter as much to you due to your views on sandbox however rest assured your feedback is still very much appreciated!
i forgot to mention there is one game which i actually praised the sandbox in it. i think it was "corrupt island" but to save you some time. there navigation is the bubble travel. (click a room and instantly travel to it) but thats not what i liked about it though i do find it easier. what i liked about it was they added a "bell"(an indicator) on whichever bubble/room you needed to go to to continue the story so you wouldnt have to wander aimlessly. doing something like that (making navigation easier) would be my suggestion. and if theres side events available make a different colored indicator would help so players know if they're missing content.
 
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If you want another Ren'Py game which does images next to the chat, look at "Sylphine", maybe you could get the code from there.

By the placards, I meant the almost intermission showing the girl's name and some info about her. I think some repeated, but like carina the yellow font that looks kind of 3D is a bit hard on the eyes, just most of the placards are really heavy visually which makes it hard to focus the eyes.

Ouch, on using photoshop and then adding that. This is text, so why not use the game engine to do that and make less work for yourself?

The best advice I can give is to look at other games and use some of their tricks. You can always make it visually how you want, but not having to photoshop anything that may change later in the game seems like a boon.
 
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So this got tagged femdom, but I see lesbian so I'll ask as I kinda have to do: what is the femdom in this game going to be like? Are we talking involving the MC, two side characters only, if it includes the MC is it like a one time footjob? Basically, is there a route to play submissively in this that goes beyond a footjob here and there?
 

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I'm glad to hear it, I was extremely anxious adding a sandbox element especially as I know this is a heated debate in the community but I do aim to do it right. Of course I guess thats what most creators feel. :p

Thanks for those QoL ideas definitely some sort of indicator instead of wandering aimlessly will be implemented.

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Thanks for the tip definitely will take a look already got an idea in my head on how i want to do it just mechanically it may help some reference.

Thanks for advising on the placards again I feel with my obsession of giving people different colours that is what caused the problems visually. Will see what I can do on those.

As for photoshop it is true it is just text on those parts. The reason this has happened is cause originally the MC couldn't be named and so these are sorta a remnant of before. I will be looking to ensure the details are accurately reflected but I must admit I do enjoy incorporating photoshop so dont worry about the workload haha.

Agreed though photoshopping changing elements would be a pain hence why I didn't do it with the stats just need to to do the same with the info pages.
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The game currently sits as a redemption story with the MC having no control of the world around them. They need to try and regain control, there are various femdom scenes and can assure you its not just one or two scenes. In terms of playing submissively as this game is still in its early days impactful options are still improving.

Hope that helps if you have any more questions please do let me know.

To everyone thanks for the continuing feedback and questions keep it coming as its all proving very helpful.
 

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The game currently sits as a redemption story with the MC having no control of the world around them. They need to try and regain control, there are various femdom scenes and can assure you its not just one or two scenes. In terms of playing submissively as this game is still in its early days impactful options are still improving.

Hope that helps if you have any more questions please do let me know.

To everyone thanks for the continuing feedback and questions keep it coming as its all proving very helpful.
Thank you for the answer, I'll check this out! It's a bit frustrating to get 2-3 hours into a game to find out "femdom" was just a single 30 second footjob scene. (This site desperately needs lezdom and submissive MC tags), I for one (and probably not the only one) would be greatly interested in a submissive play/route, so I'll definitely see how this goes! Thanks for letting me know
 

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Thank you for the answer, I'll check this out! It's a bit frustrating to get 2-3 hours into a game to find out "femdom" was just a single 30 second footjob scene. (This site desperately needs lezdom and submissive MC tags), I for one (and probably not the only one) would be greatly interested in a submissive play/route, so I'll definitely see how this goes! Thanks for letting me know
I can understand that especially when that's the only reason you download too. Admittedly seeing you mention 2-3 hrs i don't believe the game is around the length of time unless you read everything and take your time.

But still as I said it is still being worked on so of course will become a lengthy experience ultimately. Either way I hope you enjoy it and do hope you can provide some feedback if possible if not no worries. :)
 

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I can understand that especially when that's the only reason you download too. Admittedly seeing you mention 2-3 hrs i don't believe the game is around the length of time unless you read everything and take your time.

But still as I said it is still being worked on so of course will become a lengthy experience ultimately. Either way I hope you enjoy it and do hope you can provide some feedback if possible if not no worries. :)
Okay, since you asked, here is some honest feedback/things I noticed/things I liked/things I didn't, in the order I encountered it (spoilers involved for those that haven't played):

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Edit: all in all, I really enjoyed the game. I get I have unique tastes, and I don't want you to change your vision and how you do things, so on that note, even with my inclinations, I found your game so far enjoyable. I really will keep an eye on this and think its a pretty interesting story. Again, there is some sex scenes that are really forced feelings/don't seem plausible or natural, but then again, I'm not one to turn down smut in a porn game.
 
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Figured it's easier to address each individually. My replies are in italics but I must stress thank you very much for this in depth feedback you've provided and most of all for just playing the game :D

Okay, since you asked, here is some honest feedback/things I noticed/things I liked/things I didn't, in the order I encountered it (spoilers involved for those that haven't played:

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Edit: all in all, I really enjoyed the game. I get I have unique tastes, and I don't want you to change your vision and how you do things, so on that note, even with my inclinations, I found your game so far enjoyable. I really will keep an eye on this and think its a pretty interesting story. Again, there is some sex scenes that are really forced feelings/don't seem plausible or natural, but then again, I'm not one to turn down smut in a porn game.
Thank you very much for the feedback glad you overall enjoyed it. I hope you continue to enjoy it and do hope you enjoy the improvements.
 

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Figured it's easier to address each individually. My replies are in italics but I must stress thank you very much for this in depth feedback you've provided and most of all for just playing the game :D


Thank you very much for the feedback glad you overall enjoyed it. I hope you continue to enjoy it and do hope you enjoy the improvements.
Never noticed the wet shine before to be honest maybe this is something translating from screen capture and so will see if it can be improved hopefully I'm not limited by the engine.
It might be something to do with my screen. I'll screen capture it in a minute and attatch (either to this post or a new post in a moment)

Even though as you've mentioned these are your preferences its still appreciated as the main thing I want this game to feature other than h-scenes is choices so definitely this gives me stuff to consider such as the negative implications of submission
If I might ask, please don't make it a gameover only condition (seems to be popular thing to do). Honestly, I dunno how far you have the story planned, but I personally see lots of interesting twists. For example, his wife could be more involved on what's going on with the school than the MC is aware. As he becomes more submissive, rather than the super principal that saves the school, he becomes a tool for each faction to manipulate into their desired outcome. The MC is obviously able to become powerful on this premise and grow, with a submissive path, he'd be toyed around with and manipulated into fufilling the agenda of whoever has the most control over him (willingly, not with a super power. sure they can "cheat" and control him like empress, but ultimately him growing powerful is something that whoever manipulates will use to their advantage, and they can see its best for that to be done willingly)

Glad you like majority of the models sorry you don't like those two but completely appreciate your preferences any particular faves?
The MC is only disliked because his looks seem to not fit with everyone elses'. Juniper's face is a little...I'm not sure how to explain it. But I really like the Wife, Simone, Carnia and the Red Head (yet to be named)'s designs. I'm actually big on older/mature models, but yeah, those ones are beautiful.

I'm afraid I didn't change the office maybe the colour affected it? If you have a specific scene you can point to that would be great.
Maybe I'm misremembering, with the wet example, I'll make a screen shot of what I mean. I think the thing that makes me think that the most, is when the girls are searching through the office, there is a lot more furniture there, like looking through the files, the cabinets, the safe, there didn't appear to be a huge window that gave all sorts of light. I'll see if that's the case when I go back through it.

Glad you liked them but can you confirm what ones felt super forced potentially will help for future writing
The ones that stood out to me are the palace and the simone exhibition. Thinking about the palace, her having him eat her out and stuff makes sense, I understand that as a way to exemplify her control and dominance, what is weird is her having him splooge on the others, or why she'd even care about his gratification at all in that circumstance. That said, re-thinking it all, I guess that scene isn't so bad, its not super forced, but it does seem a bit over the top given the control and abilities she has, she's really sexed up and lusted, I doubt her seeing to his feelings and cumming is something she cares or is keen on.

The second, and one that I do feel is forced:
The blindfolded fashion show with simone and carnia. As I said, in my game I gave the relationship of "daughter" but no matter the relationship, them just keeping him there blindfolded makes zero sense. I understand also the little go between carnia and simone is probably hinting/foreshadowing simone's powers, with how comfortable everyone is with her/likes her, but at the same time, again, just throwing a blindfold on a guy and doing all that stuff (and him not hearing it) is definitely pushing the bounds of realism. That said, its a game about super powers and we don't play games for realism. The scene is absolutely hot, just not in the slightest bit believable. (for that matter, he has a good cock, lore wise, as in his wife seems to be interested in his body and the sex somewhat she just doesn't like his attitude. As such, its weird shes so cold when she wants him but also pushes him away for being assertive. Like, its a bit difficult to explain, but it looks like she only dislikes him for the sake of a subplot that is he's eventually to make her love him all over again. As of now, I don't really buy into her cold attitude and her pushing him away. There is no real good reason to, shes sexually frustrated, and hes obviously good in bed, so something else has to be going on there, again, I submit she has a higher more interesting role than revealed (perhaps shes that redhead?))

Thanks for taking the time to answer and read my feedback. I'll get those screen shots and attach them

EDIT: I was mistaken about the office. The sky is just so blue/apparent later, that it really felt like a different office. The furniture and everything lines up, its just the first scene the window was very grey. So that was my bad (BTW, side note: I truly did read everything. It does take a couple hours when you really follow the story. So when I say I like it, its cus I didn't skim or anything, or just get to the good bits, I am enjoying it. Somewhat reminds me of "Sky High" but with an obvious adult twist)
 
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Not sure if you see what I see, maybe its quality of computer differences, but for me, the skins look almost metallic and have a shine. This only applies to wet/when covered with tons of bodily fluid. The skin/appearance looks fine most the time, just not in situations like this
 
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after the convo with the secretary and carina the screen goes to mc at his desk and i dont see any obvious ways to advance
 

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after the convo with the secretary and carina the screen goes to mc at his desk and i dont see any obvious ways to advance
Are you at the point that it gave a tutorial about the phone/stats/abilities? if so, there it says there are hidden photos you can find, its encouraging you to find one before proceeding (its a little thing sticking out under the chair)
 
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holy balls, thats quite a hidden one...WHY FORCE ME TO FIND IT, i had no clue what it meant seeing as the last thing i saw was an arrow to a menu that disappeared on me.
I suspect its to let you know just how much of a sharp eye you need to keep up to find them. It wasn't so bad, but yeah, if you skim you might get lost on what to do
 
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