Ren'Py A Heartfelt Visit [Ch. 2] [Secret Arcade]

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Ramagar

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Well talk about an abrupt ending. no warning, no nothing. Just doing the story and then end to update.
 

Tauro Thurius

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I love the premise of the game, netori aspect and the perfect models. The MC is not a dumbfuck like they are in other titles. Keep up the good work, pal.
 
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f9z5

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I went to talk to the right most lady at the pool, and invited her to a camping trip? First time I read anyting about a camping trip.

Then it soft crashed and I hit ignore. Now the quest is talk to Nina after finished all the quests, but I can't find her.

Redid it without talking to the pool lady, found Nina.
 

Tauro Thurius

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I reckon he just needs to scratch the whole "came out of state to visit my best friend" arc and go for selling his house in the city, and moving to the small town where his bestfriend lives because it's more affordable. The story is all over the place at the moment.

As I said before, the premise is great; and you don't need supernatural, mind-control stuff to make a believable naughty story. The Free World is already liberated when it comes to sex so I love all this down to earth story about a young man looking to hit every ass possible.

My humble advice to the dev would be to review the intro of the story, make sure it's all chronological because some things don't make much sense right now ( e.g. the MC stated that he wants to stay as long as possible for some reason and decided to leave after two days, finding his flight is cancelled, returning back to Chloe talking about the advice he gave "the other night" which is wrong... It must have been a while, no? ).
 
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Dorf56

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Game initially ended for me when Kate turned on the car radio to make the rest of the drive to the hotel enjoyable. I checked the script and found there is an additional scene with Kate and the MC at the hotel. I fixed the script (attached) so the last scene plays out, then get the abrupt ending. Hope it helps.
 

YeetTheFeet

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Game initially ended for me when Kate turned on the car radio to make the rest of the drive to the hotel enjoyable. I checked the script and found there is an additional scene with Kate and the MC at the hotel. I fixed the script (attached) so the last scene plays out, then get the abrupt ending. Hope it helps.
LFG! Kate is THE MILF
 
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Joc

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When I'm at the hotel with Kate, a while passes a mouse, she gets scared and the game crashes again. Some help please.
 

Vortex@

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When I'm at the hotel with Kate, a while passes a mouse, she gets scared and the game crashes again. Some help please.
it doesn't crash. That is the end. The dev didn't include a save here screen before ending. Reload a auto save before that and save there for next update
 
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th3n

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You saying no ntr means very little when you dont consider scenes like this as NTR. Sure it might not exactly fit the definition but it is still a scene only a ntr fan would enjoy
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So no ntr but we can expect the LIs getting fucked and groped by several male NPCs, but of course, in a "technically not ntr" way :cool:.
That's all i needed to know, thanks mate. Im out.
 
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Vortex@

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You have the image Literally there, you can't tell me no dude.
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From the Dev:

I mentioned before that the scenes with Kate and the doctor (ex husband) will never be in the game. The first version of this game looked completely different and those images are leftovers.

If I were to write / implement an NTR game, I wouldn't have created five love interests that the MC just met, but one love interest that the MC has a well-established relationship with.

As I said, I don't want to explain myself, but I clarified this aspect for you, Vortex, because you have been active here since I launched this game.
 
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