VN Ren'Py A Man for All [Ep.14] [Venus Waltz]

[Madpanda]

Dear, maker of this game, can you make meaningful moments for each girls more realistic by adding bgm to it, like in vannesa case i guess it's episode 8 when she wear off her glasses for the first time, i believe that moment was emotional and had to be special in its own way so maybe adding bgm to such emotional driving scenes will be a better idea.

And one more thing, why don't you add a load for very latest update so that we don't need to play it all the way to episode 10 or epsiode X, it's somewhat tiring to choose options again and again. It will benefit you a lot as most people don't even play all the way to the end again and again.

I don't understand why there's not a lot of emotion driving nsfw games available, like who would refuse a game with story driven theme with a lots of romances and stuff. It's not always about fking for God sakes.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

I believe the beard was shown to display a passage in time

so far i understand it you can´t joke on vanessa all the time i don´t think she has then interess in you if you don´t take it seriously for the most parts
erika you can´t flirt all the time same with kate
i could be wrong but thats my understanding

Yea you can. 95 percent of my conversation with vanessa is jokes with me only picking smooth operators when its a veiled joke.

 

[dkatryl]

I believe the beard was shown to display a passage in time

Yea you can. 95 percent of my conversation with vanessa is jokes with me only picking smooth operators when its a veiled joke.

The presence of the beard isnt the problem. It's that the dev must have picked one of the worst possible models to incorporate, both in terms of shitty quality and unrealistic design.

(facial hair just doesnt naturally grow in a shitty mutton chop style, leaving the tip of the chin bare)

The shaggy hair is fine, the beard was just a bad choice all around.

As to dialog choices, yep you can pick all of any 3 with each LI, or mix/max if you wish.

Im 100% rebel and pink choices with all of them.

 

[DanMotta]

There's not much of a difference between knight/joker/smooth dialogue options. Don't worry about missing any content with those choices specifically and just pick the choice you want.

Thanks for playing.

so far i understand it you can´t joke on vanessa all the time i don´t think she has then interess in you if you don´t take it seriously for the most parts
erika you can´t flirt all the time same with kate
i could be wrong but thats my understanding

the outcome will be the same, the only difference is the lines, but they will still like you. I've seen the dev replying to this at least twice, saying it doesn't affect your relationship with the girls.

 

[DanMotta]

The presence of the beard isnt the problem. It's that the dev must have picked one of the worst possible models to incorporate, both in terms of shitty quality and unrealistic design.

(facial hair just doesnt naturally grow in a shitty mutton chop style, leaving the tip of the chin bare)

The shaggy hair is fine, the beard was just a bad choice all around.

As to dialog choices, yep you can pick all of any 3 with each LI, or mix/max if you wish.

Im 100% rebel and pink choices with all of them.

Some vns are more about the story than the renders. There are many good VNs around here empty in story content and there others with shitty renders and nice story. Not everyone who will create a VN and write a story is good at rendering and vice-versa.
At least we understood the purpose of the beard. Despite how it looks, I understood that his beard had grown and he didn't trim or shave and it looked like shit.

 

[Psykoman1978]

the outcome will be the same, the only difference is the lines, but they will still like you. I've seen the dev replying to this at least twice, saying it doesn't affect your relationship with the girls.

yeah i remembered later in the back of my mind something like that

 

[Witocaj]

the outcome will be the same, the only difference is the lines, but they will still like you. I've seen the dev replying to this at least twice, saying it doesn't affect your relationship with the girls.

Is that actually true? I played this before and I remember distinctly not getting any of the Harlow scenes despite being the only LI I was actually trying to pursue.

 

[dkatryl]

Some vns are more about the story than the renders. There are many good VNs around here empty in story content and there others with shitty renders and nice story. Not everyone who will create a VN and write a story is good at rendering and vice-versa.
At least we understood the purpose of the beard. Despite how it looks, I understood that his beard had grown and he didn't trim or shave and it looked like shit.

While I 100% agree with this sentinent, MC looked perfectly fine for the first 9 episodes.

So this was a deliberate decision for the dev to, presumably, acquire new assets (i.e. beard), and picked one of *the* worst ones i have seen in any ren'py game to date.

Hopefully, MC cleans up for next episode. Because if Vanessa thought it was hard to take him seriously with that monkey shirt, it pales to that thing on his face.

 

[VenusWaltz]

So this was a deliberate decision for the dev to, presumably, acquire new assets (i.e. beard), and picked one of *the* worst ones i have seen in any ren'py game to date.

Hopefully, MC cleans up for next episode. Because if Vanessa thought it was hard to take him seriously with that monkey shirt, it pales to that thing on his face.

Sorry. I'll fix it.

 

[NewTricks]

Sorry. I'll fix it.

Aw, I like the chin spinach. I thought that it was intentionally looking terrible. Not every dude can grow a decent beard, especially if they are just doing it because they don't feel like shaving.

 

[VenusWaltz]

Aw, I like the chin spinach. I thought that it was intentionally looking terrible. Not every dude can grow a decent beard, especially if they are just doing it because they don't feel like shaving.

In terms of design, the beard doesn't look good and there are better options I should've looked into. That's my fault.

In terms of the story, I tried to make him look as sloppy as possible. The MC's appearance was never going to be static and it will continue to change over the course of the story.

 

[dkatryl]

In terms of design, the beard doesn't look good and there are better options I should've looked into. That's my fault.

In terms of the story, I tried to make him look as sloppy as possible. The MC's appearance was never going to be static and it will continue to change over the course of the story.

Yep, my complaint was purely design, to which you acknowledged.

In terms of story and having MC scruffy cuz he's too busy to bother? No complaints.

 

[Tinytank]

fix the beard it looks like a scrawny Wolverine at least give him a full shadow or go back to the way he was

 

[Cigzag]

Just got started on the update and I gotta say...
Please, PLEASE keep the MC's new look. He looks so much better with the new hairstyle and beard, his old look was so...punchable. Dude looks like a stud now.

 

[Vualen]

Very nice, with a lot of content and animated scenes. I liked also sounds added during animations. Still some more master work on animations would make this game this game more adictive

 

[Doputgun]

It seems like the story starts off boring, does it get more interesting later on?
Edit: I just realised my comment might have came out a little rude. It was not my intention.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

It seems like the story starts off boring, does it get more interesting later on?

Define "interesting", since you clearly have different tastes than I do. I have enjoyed the game throughout all the chapters so far.

 

[Doputgun]

Define "interesting", since you clearly have different tastes than I do. I have enjoyed the game throughout all the chapters so far.

I don't know exactly. It might have something to do with the way choices are presented at the start of the game. I think whatever I choose the dialoge came to the same point. They seem insignificant and inconsequential at the start of the game. Now I don't know if it goes on like that but I got that expression at the start. (This comes from a guy that doesn't like a lot of choices in his games btw. It kinda makes me feel like why put choices when they come to the same point.)

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

I don't know exactly. It might have something to do with the way choices are presented at the start of the game. I think whatever I choose the dialoge came to the same point. They seem insignificant and inconsequential at the start of the game. Now I don't know if it goes on like that but I got that expression at the start. (This comes from a guy that doesn't like a lot of choices in his games btw. It kinda makes me feel like why put choices when they come to the same point.)

Magenta / Blue / Green choices are just for flavor text; the character will progress with the MC the same no matter the choice. I think Gold and Red are the same thing generally (just a different way to respond in a situation but don't really affect the course of events in the game). At least, I think that's right for Gold and Red. The really important choices are in white, where often you decide whether to pursue a girl or not.

 

[botc76]

Not gonna lie, Vanessa is beginning to get on my nerves.
All this time I figured, right, she's just this cold and unapproachable now, but she'll warm up to the MC at some point:
Honestly, we are now past the point where this should have happened, IN MY OPINION.

I last played chapter 8, and now playing the latest two chapters, I was really fed up with it. She's a frigid bitch for just too long by now.
What I mean by this is, I don't know what the plans here are, but I always imagined, since she is one of the followed LIs, that she is supposed to be a romantic option, if she is, you shouldn't make her completely unlikeable and annoying, it's just been too much, again, this is my opinion, I am talking about how it is for me, I don't see how I would even be interested in her anymore.
The parts with her are occasionally a bit funny, due to the MC's goofiness, but outside of that, it feels like a chore.
She's all about being professional, and you have a contract ladida, but she just comes off as rude and completely unlikeable.
If that's the intention, fine, but if you want her to be a sympathetic character at some point, don't take it too far.