Nice story, i really like the first a petal among thorns.
Now that it's said, I'm a little disappointed with the start of A Moment of Bliss (which is supposed to be longer than the first one), it s too fast between the mc and bliss. I understand the grils have a plan for her father and the girls just move in the next step, it s the secret... but the father don t be aware of it (if all of this become a shit storm, we have each other), and crossing the line once does not mean becoming full open, love don t work like this... even if petal prepare the ground.... in the first player have choice to resist petal, i feel it lacks that to calm biss and put it at the daughter place in the first stage of this game. After all he said again and again this is a week and we finish when we come back even if he can t with petal because in love. For one year he could had a lots of women but no, he need to be romantically involve and this part sorely lacking with biss even if she and he (now) be more open to it, for me bliss had to welcome him has father first and try to puch in lover way, it will be faster ok but here it s daughter to lover in one day and he care about petal. He is near submitted to bliss for make him dom wtf... Same for rose he put a plan to help her not to be with her again, and it is not to bliss to put this nose in all of this even if she can push it but not this way, again the mc is too sub (children who talk about their parents sex live wtf a way too cocky), looking a picture of biss without she know is bad but not this, he don t really know if rose is open with this ? Again this is too fast for this it lack of rose scene to this for convince the mc he still love rose, for now he love romantically petal only... it feel like it s not the same mc from the first game who come in the second.
well it s just the first chapter i hop it get better. i can t wait to read the next.
