This might be an unpopulair opinion, but I wouldn't mind it all if the characters would shut the fuck up during the sex scenes. It's too much. Both daughters were virgins but, even during their first time, they talk and behave like porn stars. And MC is no different.
"You're so hard, daddy, I can't wait to have you inside of me."
"I can't wait to be inside you, Petal. Lie down."
"Put it in, daddy, I want it so bad."
"It's so tight, your pussy is so tight."
"It's tight for you, daddy. I want to pleasure you with my vagina. Fuck me."
"You like my dick going in and out, don't you, Petal."
"Yes, daddy, I love it, slam it inside. I want to feel every inch of you."
"Say no more."
"It feels so good having you all the way inside of me, daddy. I want you to fuck me every day, exactly like this."
"Whenever you want, Petal, I'll fuck your brains out. I'll penetrate that cunt with everything I have."
"Yes, daddy, penetrate me. Harder, faster, I'm so close."
"I'm close too, let's cum together."
"Yes daddy, I'm cumming."
"Me too, Petal, I'm spraying my cum inside your tight pussy."
"I can feel it, daddy, fill my cunt."
"There's more coming, Petal, a lot more, I haven't finished cumming just yet. Prepare for the motherload."
"Daddy, you're filling me up so good."
FUUUUUCK. And every scene is like this. And Bliss is exactly the same. JUST. SHUT. THE. FUCK. UP.