VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-13 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[WShatn]

Wait, what!? When do we find out that Chole is fucking beeman? I Might've skipped skimmed past it because some of the dialogues are fucking tedious to read

If you keep skipping text in visual novels, you're going to lose a lot of content, I suggest you try other types of games.

 

[LUKE “SAMURAI” ROCKHOLD]

If you keep skipping text in visual novels, you're going to lose a lot of content, I suggest you try other types of games.

I know bud, VN is new to me. But just tell when it happens because I'm dead confused rn

 

[Holy Bacchus]

The Beeman route is the only bad thing about this game.

Part of me thinks the only reason it exists is to get Chloe away from MC so he can have Nicole only.

Eventually, something will have to happen with MC being with both of them. It isn't going to be kept secret forever. Chloe being with Beeman fixes that problem, sort of. It's why I mentioned in my last post the potential of somehow managing to get both of them with their consent.

There are only a few options to resolve the issue of both Nicole and Chloe being with MC, behind Chloe's back.

- It's kept secret forever. Unlikely if not impossible.
- One of the girls leaves MC. Semi-Likely, either Nicole out of shame or Chloe because she is pissed at MC for banging her mom.
- Somehow, Chloe agrees to share him. Would need to convince Chloe to allow it. Unknown probability as of now.

I think John's shenanigan's will have a large role in the 3rd option. Perhaps Marilyn too.

Considering the fact that this game is entirely centred on the MC and Nicole developing a loving relationship, whether you treat her well or corrupt her, Beeman feels almost superfluous.

The general point of NTR is to instill jealousy and general hurt feelings in the player/reader/viewer to see a LI have sex and/or be "stolen" by someone else, but that's predicated on caring for that character and the way this game has gone so far it doesn't feel like we've been made to care as much for Chloe and we have for Nicole since Nicole is, essentially, the main goal of this game. So it does, at times, make you think, "what's the point?", when it comes to keeping Chloe when you have the Nicole and it seems to mostly come down to just keeping her away from the disgusting Beeman, which isn't really NTR and feels more like trying to protect her.

If you do keep her though, I highly doubt we'll see any kind of acceptance from her of the MC and Nicole's relationship such that there would be a sharing arrangement. Most likely I think we'd see it implode with Chloe screaming at the pair of them and bursting into tears, or something will happen with the MC and Nicole that will mean they don't end up together, but I imagine the latter would not go down well with pretty much everybody.

 

[Abhai]

Wait, what!? When do we find out that Chole is fucking beeman? I Might've skipped skimmed past it because some of the dialogues are fucking tedious to read

Spoiler: Beeman Irl

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I know bud, VN is new to me. But just tell when it happens because I'm dead confused rn

if im not mistaken, she hasnt to fuck him, if you are nice to her&keep her as your girlfriend.

 

[LUKE “SAMURAI” ROCKHOLD]

if im not mistaken, she hasnt to fuck him, if you are nice to her&keep her as your girlfriend.

Thanks, I guess I dodged an ntr moment with Beeman stealing Chloe.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Maybe there is magic involved with Beeman...

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Maybe there is magic involved with Beeman...

Dark magic.

 

[thorin0815]

Dark magic.

More like divine magic, I've always thought he/she was an asshole.

 

[Mormont]

Wait, what!? When do we find out that Chole is fucking beeman? I Might've skipped skimmed past it because some of the dialogues are fucking tedious to read

Spoiler: Beeman Irl

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Probably because that whole route is poorly done I think there should have been another option if people have no interest in Chloe and don't want to see the Beeman stuff then make her more a background character. Nice mugshot you just need the hairy shirt might also pass for some essay writers.

 

[Ranting Old Man]

There is no justification for Beeman at all, I would have rather had another guy our age show interest in Chole or hell even Marilyn developing feelings for Chole and making moves against you would have been a better more desirable and realistic NTR story. There should have been build up and it should have been something that we wouldn't completely cringe at. Instead what we got was this,

Chole: Hey MC pay attention to me

MC: No

Chole: Hey MC pay attention to me

MC: No

Chole: Fine! I know I'm always saying how in love I am with you and how I'm not ready to go all the way, but you know our old disgusting looking history teacher. I'm going to go all the way with him over and over again becoming his personal cum dumpster and whore. And no one is going to miraculously notice! And you won't do anything about it because your literally a Beta Cuck on the one thing you could easily destroy your enemy against indefinitely!

Yeah great story telling there, very believable.

Sorry if I'm beating you to death with this opinion, I just keep getting glimpses of people trying to justify it's horribleness (at least that's how it looks to me) and I just can't accept it. Don't get me wrong I love this game and I DO want consequences for dating both Chole and Nicole. That makes sense, that's immersive. What isn't immersive and don't make sense is Chole X Beeman it isn't justifiable.

Maybe if the Beeman MC dynamic was different and Chole expressed alot more interest in Beeman than just he's our teacher and maybe if Chole held Beeman to the same fucking standards as MC as in I'm not ready. And maybe is Nicole noticed and treated the situation seriously I would have a significantly different opinion on that arc, but as it stands the only justification I can tell is, "I want NTR players to donate." Which fine, but I only donate to GOOD NTR stories, so yeah...

 

[jackkane]

You do realize this is a porn game, right? Realism isn't exactly par for the course. That said, it's often true that the more realistic the game is, the more enjoyable it is as well. (It depends on the game, though.) You already start off with an unrealistic premise: Nicole wants the MC out of Chloe's life, but she agrees to "payments" to keep him away from her daughter. What mother would actually agree to this IRL? Really, all for the sake of her daughter getting into a great school? That's more unrealistic, I think, than the transition into a love story.

And oh, what a beautiful and heartbreaking love story it is! Nicole loves her husband deeply, but he doesn't love her back, and even insults her often. Meanwhile, if you've kept Chloe as a girlfriend, there's the added guilt for both Nicole and the MC of the cheating they are doing, stabbing her in the back. Even if you corrupt Nicole and don't go with romance as much, there still is the pain she feels over the loss of John's love. (And what's worse, the player knows that John may never have loved Nicole; if he ever did, it's been a very long time.)

Combine this with other characters and their own struggles, and you have a pretty interesting VN: Nessa forced to pleasure clients for her future with Natiya; Abigail in a loveless marriage with a manipulative ass for a husband; some secret Hal and Jenny are keeping from the MC that apparently will devastate him; etc.

I bet john's really the mc's dad.

 

[Abhai]

I bet john's really the mc's dad.

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So, you mean, we cant fuck John..like...ever never ever...?

 

[Holy Bacchus]

So, you mean, we cant fuck John..like...ever never ever...?

Well, never say never, but I was thinking more about the fact that this would make Chloe his sister which is not going to happen.

 

[Mormont]

So, you mean, we cant fuck John..like...ever never ever...?

Who knows maybe John is his type

 

[Abhai]

Well, never say never, but I was thinking more about the fact that this would make Chloe his sister which is not going to happen.

Chloe is adopted. She looks nothing like Nicole, nor John, one problem less...a few more to go.
Now, gimme us John to fuck him (up)!

Who knows maybe John is his type

yep, just imagine him with a few plastic surgeries, hormone therapy and all that stuff..and glasses ofc.

Spoiler: too hot to look at it....

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[Ara-sH]

Maybe a silly question, is there going to be any scene with MC's mom? shes so hot and sexy.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Maybe a silly question, is there going to be any scene with MC's mom? shes so hot and sexy.

I'd say we're looking at a 0% of that.

 

[Richard Perkins]

maybe the mc was really adopted and he's mrs heavens child

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

And here we go again with the incest nonsense...

 

[thorin0815]

maybe the mc was really adopted and he's mrs heavens child

Yes, exactly and for 9 months she didn't notice anything about the pregnancy and the subsequent birth. Her husband then secretly gave the newborn up for adoption. After all, something like this happens every day, so it could be possible.