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A quick note about Chapter 8:
While I did manage to proofread/edit Chapter 8 for JJsworld , as for the previous chapters (pre-Chapter 7), there's still a lot of editing that hasn't been done yet. At some point towards the end of Chapter 1 is where my editing currently leaves off.
I've been focused on other things ATM (my help here is a volunteer effort), but at some point I will get back to editing the rest of the previous chapters for JJsworld , adding fade transitions where appropriate as well as tackling typos, etc..
Once that editing is complete, the 'full story' download will likely be updated with the new code. Please be patient!
So if you already have read the previous chapters, all you need to do is grab Chapter 8 and add it to your A New Beginning folder. Readme instructions contained within the download. And no need to re-read the previous chapters, the story hasn't changed, just spelling corrections, some fade transitions added, that sort of thing.
While I did manage to proofread/edit Chapter 8 for JJsworld , as for the previous chapters (pre-Chapter 7), there's still a lot of editing that hasn't been done yet. At some point towards the end of Chapter 1 is where my editing currently leaves off.
I've been focused on other things ATM (my help here is a volunteer effort), but at some point I will get back to editing the rest of the previous chapters for JJsworld , adding fade transitions where appropriate as well as tackling typos, etc..
Once that editing is complete, the 'full story' download will likely be updated with the new code. Please be patient!
So if you already have read the previous chapters, all you need to do is grab Chapter 8 and add it to your A New Beginning folder. Readme instructions contained within the download. And no need to re-read the previous chapters, the story hasn't changed, just spelling corrections, some fade transitions added, that sort of thing.
I just get this error
Code:
I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.
File "game/chapter8.rpy", line 665: expected statement.
(Perhaps you left out a " at the end of the first line.)
"[i]In another part of the world[/i]...
scene ch8pic79
l "Zhan. Are you really that crazy?"
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z "You know I never say anything if it is not true."
z "I know I am better. I am the best!"
l "Look. There is no way that he will come all this way just to fight."
l "I have told you for many years. He works for my father."
z "We will find a way."
l "I came here to keep things the way it should be. My uncle's passing was unexpected."
z "Yes. He made sure I had all the great Masters as teachers."
z "They always said I was the best. Till you came a few years ago."
z "As they came back from the west. All I hear is how Brian is a true prodigy."
scene ch8pic80
l "I did train with him for a few years."
z "So you have seen his technique first hand."
l "Yes. But which do you refer to?"
z "Huh?"
l "My father had him taught in five different martial arts styles."
z "Five. That makes me want the fight even more."
l "Both of you are technically employed by my father."
l "You know he lives mainly by the code."
scene ch8pic81
l "He will not permit fighting among the ranks."
z "I do respect your father."
z "I will not live in this man's shadow much longer."
l "Zhan. He is halfway around the world."
z "It doesn't matter!"
z "All the Masters boast about his abilities."
l "Can we just drop it?"
z "No! From this day forward I do not work for your family."
z "I am going to start my own organization. Some of the others may even join up."
l "Zhan. You can't mean this."
z "My new organization will not move on you until the Eliminator is dealt with."
z "Good bye and hope you can stay in power after this is over."
scene black
with fade
"[i]Back in the Western World...[/i]
Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Sun Mar 07 18:13:47 2021In the file chapter8.rpy, add double quote at the end of line 665 and 701
Edit : Here's the corrected file
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here is my unofficial android port of A New Beginning Chapters1-10.
from now on my android ports of Ren'Py games have a 2nd, persistent save location like windows. if you uninstall an app, the save files and persistent data remain intact.
therefore the app needs the permission to access the public external storage (or a new one on Android 11), because it has to read and write outside its own external storage directories.
you have to grant the permission or the app is shut down.
have fun and please report problems (you can reach me
updated: 07.09.2021 (Chapter10)
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from now on my android ports of Ren'Py games have a 2nd, persistent save location like windows. if you uninstall an app, the save files and persistent data remain intact.
therefore the app needs the permission to access the public external storage (or a new one on Android 11
), because it has to read and write outside its own external storage directories.you have to grant the permission or the app is shut down.
have fun and please report problems (you can reach me
You must be registered to see the links
).updated: 07.09.2021 (Chapter10)
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for people that cant be bothered use the attachment of the corrected file copy everything on it
go into the game file and open chapter 8 delete everything then paste the copied part then close save and then open game it has worked for me
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Use Notepad++. It's freeware and it shows the line numbers. Very nice text editor.
