- Nov 15, 2017
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Just finished and unlike others I didn't think it was too short...I think I last played 0.4, downloaded 0.5 but never got round to it....
TLDR - I enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!! And thank you so much for sharing with us.
File size - I've mentioned it, freaking awesome reduction, it really is a shining example to other devs. Personally I didn't see the reduction in picture quality, but a) I've not done a side by side and b) my eyes are shot. For the amount of content to this point, it would not be, IMO, unacceptable to have a 250MB D/L especially if that helps improve the quality for people who can appreciate it.
Maybe start a separate thread in the dev section explaining the process you went through to reduce it all that might help others.
Renders - bearing in mind my eyes, I think they are really nice and all the models are beautiful on their own and compared with each other, except Gabriel (sorry, Gabe) thou from the personality I got from his section he'd be a hell of a big brother/drinking buddy.
Story - I wondered how you would reconcile certain things. I liked that Rebb pulled MC on it and still a little far fetched (cos the whole family tradition isn't....), it worked for me.
Like others have said, there needs to be more work done on the sex scenes, more pictures/angles would be good, animation would be fantastic, but there really must be more dialogue - both narration and talk, even the quickie was too quick. I'm also a serious sucker for after care.
As far as the final choice, given what happened in the morning, I really can't see how the twins was an option. More discussion with Aunt about what happened and how to fix it would have worked better - maybe with a return home option of who to speak to first then depending how you wanted it, the 1st or 2nd being the choice. Maybe have a cut away of the mum speaking with the girls and having MC coming back to the end of that talk.
The girls virginity has been mentioned, I get the twins due to the family and I get Susie's after her conversation with MC. But I think Rebb, given her age would have bulked about MC going away by sleeping with the 1st person she could out of anger at her confidante and secret love leaving her. So maybe a bit more about that would be good.
I know I've put loads down and if I was that good I'd be writing my own, but I tend to get carried away when it's something I like and can see ways I might do things differently. At the same time I fully respect that it's your story and none of what I have written might fit, the last thing I would want is for you to force anything into your game that doesn't work.
ETA - Rebb's my favourite, I think I may be developing an older sister thing....
TLDR - I enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!! And thank you so much for sharing with us.
File size - I've mentioned it, freaking awesome reduction, it really is a shining example to other devs. Personally I didn't see the reduction in picture quality, but a) I've not done a side by side and b) my eyes are shot. For the amount of content to this point, it would not be, IMO, unacceptable to have a 250MB D/L especially if that helps improve the quality for people who can appreciate it.
Maybe start a separate thread in the dev section explaining the process you went through to reduce it all that might help others.
Renders - bearing in mind my eyes, I think they are really nice and all the models are beautiful on their own and compared with each other, except Gabriel (sorry, Gabe) thou from the personality I got from his section he'd be a hell of a big brother/drinking buddy.
Story - I wondered how you would reconcile certain things. I liked that Rebb pulled MC on it and still a little far fetched (cos the whole family tradition isn't....), it worked for me.
Like others have said, there needs to be more work done on the sex scenes, more pictures/angles would be good, animation would be fantastic, but there really must be more dialogue - both narration and talk, even the quickie was too quick. I'm also a serious sucker for after care.
As far as the final choice, given what happened in the morning, I really can't see how the twins was an option. More discussion with Aunt about what happened and how to fix it would have worked better - maybe with a return home option of who to speak to first then depending how you wanted it, the 1st or 2nd being the choice. Maybe have a cut away of the mum speaking with the girls and having MC coming back to the end of that talk.
The girls virginity has been mentioned, I get the twins due to the family and I get Susie's after her conversation with MC. But I think Rebb, given her age would have bulked about MC going away by sleeping with the 1st person she could out of anger at her confidante and secret love leaving her. So maybe a bit more about that would be good.
I know I've put loads down and if I was that good I'd be writing my own, but I tend to get carried away when it's something I like and can see ways I might do things differently. At the same time I fully respect that it's your story and none of what I have written might fit, the last thing I would want is for you to force anything into your game that doesn't work.
ETA - Rebb's my favourite, I think I may be developing an older sister thing....
