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van321

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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
 
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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
Yes, just stop making this game because I don't like it! I don't want anyone else to enjoy it! Nuh uh. *throws toys out pram*

*sigh*
 
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Streetcarbon

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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
A truly sad comment where Rex assumes he speaks for everyone. I really wonder what got him so triggered, and even more so. Why he is so angry over a game, let alone a porn game.
Things didn't work out with his favorite character?
Maybe stick to Fortnite or some shit.
 
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A truly sad comment where Rex assumes he speaks for everyone. I really wonder what got him so triggered, and even more so. Why he is so angry over a game, let alone a porn game.
Things didn't work out with his favorite character?
Maybe stick to Fortnite or some shit.
adult visual novels can be more than just - fucking
like dis one I've been crying out for a visual novel with a beautiful love story and I finally got one

the story in this game is absolutely beautiful it should be cherished
 
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Journey95

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I prefer Jenny over Ashley honestly. She has a more interesting story so far (sad too) and her relationship with the MC has more build up (her design is more unique and hotter too..). With Ashley it seemed like she loves the MC already from the beginning.

But overall I like all the girls (from the "side" girls I think Vicky is the best), the lack of lewd content so far doesn't bother me.
 

Aristos

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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
Seriously, ICSTOR, you must rethink your strategy.
 

Journey95

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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
Everyone has their opinion but to demand that the dev should stop making the game just because you dislike it is ridiculous. I'm no fan of some games I have played here either, that just means you drop the game and find something else instead of acting like a brat!
 

Streetcarbon

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adult visual novels can be more than just - fucking
like dis one I've been crying out for a visual novel with a beautiful love story and I finally got one

the story in this game is absolutely beautiful it should be cherished
Aye, the writing is of the better quality and the renders are beautiful. Normally this is not my type of game. Mostly because the story writing tends to be the same and not thought out. AoA is an rare exception on that and has captured me.
Which makes me wonder why Rex is being a sad pile of shit in his comment and gives the indication that the majority wouldn't like this game. A trruly sad and pathetic display of a single individual.

To the Dev making this game, keep up the good work. As this is for me personally, a top rated game.
 

Mibuwolf

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So, I don't really want spoilers, per se, but I was already caught completely off-guard by the severity of the violence in a previous VN I'd played, in which one character was brutally assaulted and another committed suicide out of guilt (don't want to say what game as it'd be a huge spoiler for one path at least), and I'd just as soon not have a similar experience. So I guess my real question is, is the "graphic violence" tag for something potentially avoidable, or at least with adequate warning that won't seem out of left field if and when it happens?
Not sure if anyone replied to you, but so far what graphic violence there is unskippable. However, it is also mostly implied instead of explicitly displayed. You will, however, get no warning, and there's a specific scene that's essentially a jumpscare.
 

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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
so stop playing it. Don't assume that you know what's the best. Everyone has their opinion but we respect each other so we don't go and tell somebody to drop their work just because we don't like it, in this case TLG Games. But if you can't do something as simple as that, then you're just a spoiled brat and should get the heck out of here
 

Mibuwolf

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Quote; "It's pretty much done, but I'm currently waiting on the renders for the animations and some other fixes on previous scenes. I can't exactly put an ETA on it (it depends on some variables) but it will definitely release by the end of the week. "
I'm so hyped for this. Your game and Leap of Faith are to me by far the best VNs in existence. Thank you for your work.
 
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Dragon59

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Do not bother making any more of this crap game! The story is boring and a mishmash of cutaways and jumps to people you never knew why you should give a toss what they say or do. You are basically forced in to relationships you never choose or wanted and why the he** should I Care about some Witt less protection bitch? None of this makes a good adult/erotic novel/game. Just STOP making more of it, you obviously do not know how to do it!!!
This almost sounds like a threat. You have a nice family. It would be a shame if you continued making the game and something happened to them.
 
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van321

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There are too many simps in this post. too many. :mad: If no one critiques the content of the game. Maybe by the last chapter we can fuck some pussy, or even worse






Maybe jenny becomes jenny in Forrest Gump:HideThePain:
I have plenty I can critique this game on from a story and character perspective, although three chapters is a bit too early to jump the gun for me to do so. I can do the same for other great AVNs.

Whining is not critique. And simping would be knee-jerk defending obvious well-articulated flaws. Care to begin?
 
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Journey95

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There are too many simps in this post. too many. :mad: If no one critiques the content of the game. Maybe by the last chapter we can fuck some pussy, or even worse






Maybe jenny becomes jenny in Forrest Gump:HideThePain:
Constructive criticism is fine (the game is not perfect, for an example I think you have to pick between Jenny and Ashley too fast). But the other user just posted a mindless rant and basically wants the dev to stop making the game because he doesn't like it. That's silly
 
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Constructive criticism is fine (the game is not perfect, for an example I think you have to pick between Jenny and Ashley too fast). But the other user just posted a mindless rant and basically wants the dev to stop making the game because he doesn't like it. That's silly
am i the only one who likes that we have to choose between Jenny and Ashley early in the game i don't want to wait until the end of the game

for me and Jenny to be in a relationship

I want Jenny to be my girlfriend while I'm playing the game I just hope Jenny doesn't come and ask for a open relationship

that would absolutely kill me and break my heart
 

duolaamm

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Constructive criticism is fine (the game is not perfect, for an example I think you have to pick between Jenny and Ashley too fast). But the other user just posted a mindless rant and basically wants the dev to stop making the game because he doesn't like it. That's silly
Apparently people can tell who the bad guys are. For those who are troublemakers, there is absolutely no need to pay attention to them.

A lot of people want more sexy content. This is really crucial for many people, many people want anal sex content, and threesome,Foursome, how can vn be so lacking in sexy scenes.
This game even eliminates the harem tag, I am completely confused!!!!
 

Journey95

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am i the only one who likes that we have to choose between Jenny and Ashley early in the game i don't want to wait until the end of the game

for me and Jenny to be in a relationship

I want Jenny to be my girlfriend while I'm playing the game I just hope Jenny doesn't come and ask for a open relationship

that would absolutely kill me and break my heart
I like Jenny the most too (main reason why I play this game, her romance with the MC is well done) but I would prefer if we didn't have to pick so fast. Now because I picked Jenny Ashley gets almost no scenes. In general this game has a problem with closing off content from many girls for no good reason imho. Up to a point you should be able to experience all the girls paths like in other games.
 

van321

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Apparently people can tell who the bad guys are. For those who are troublemakers, there is absolutely no need to pay attention to them.

A lot of people want more sexy content. This is really crucial for many people, many people want anal sex content, and threesome,Foursome, how can vn be so lacking in sexy scenes.
This game even eliminates the harem tag, I am completely confused!!!!
There are many "slow burn" VNs that make you wait for the lewd scenes with some of the main LIs (Summer's Gone, DeLuca Family, Jill path of Being a DIK). If those aren't for you, that's fine. What helps many of those VNs succeed are lewd scenes with side characters, which is one flaw I will say this VN has in that there aren't really any.

Part of the "problem" is the MC isn't a promiscuous individual, but college corrupting him and pushing him farther from being the person that Ashley crushed on would be an interesting consequence of player action. If you want to jump into lewdness right away, you can also pursue Jade, but it makes sense for her character: she is emotionally stunted and uses sex to fill that void.

Many VNs have different paths, like a romance path and a corruption or lust path. This one opts to focus on the former and not offer the latter. If that's not for you, nor is this VN, and that's fine.
 
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I like Jenny the most too (main reason why I play this game, her romance with the MC is well done) but I would prefer if we didn't have to pick so fast. Now because I picked Jenny Ashley gets almost no scenes. In general this game has a problem with closing off content from many girls for no good reason imho. Up to a point you should be able to experience all the girls paths like in other games.
I understand what you're saying but I'm different because I don't care about the other girls I'm a one-woman kind of man

I know it's stupid and ridiculous and it makes no sense but I love monogamy

for me it makes the relationship a hundred times more special and intimate
 
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