- Apr 25, 2020
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I like the art a lot, great camera positioning, the girls are gorgeous (my top 3 is Jenny, Sung-Ji and Ashley). Though there was quite a lot of clipping on the renders in the last chapter, making small holes in shirts, feet going through the ground, seeing hair roots on foreheads, etc.
But I'm not as keen on the story. My main gripe is that the MC is a little of a pushover, he's a spectator of the events and is not very proactive. What did he do to deserve the love of the girls? Just being good looking and not much else (maybe except with Ashley but we didn't see their relationship before when the game starts). The mafia story is ok but could be better handled. Character interactions are good too but some of the dialogues are poorly written, and the MC is not very talkative (could be ok if he was doing more in the story).
I think the renders are carrying the game, though the story is not that awful and could be very good with a better writer
But I'm not as keen on the story. My main gripe is that the MC is a little of a pushover, he's a spectator of the events and is not very proactive. What did he do to deserve the love of the girls? Just being good looking and not much else (maybe except with Ashley but we didn't see their relationship before when the game starts). The mafia story is ok but could be better handled. Character interactions are good too but some of the dialogues are poorly written, and the MC is not very talkative (could be ok if he was doing more in the story).
I think the renders are carrying the game, though the story is not that awful and could be very good with a better writer