- Mar 13, 2019
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I don't see any other option - Adam has to die. Motherfucker.I figured on Jenny or Valery's path I would've gotten the Sung Li scene, I was certain I chose her path but oh well. I finally got through chapter 5 and there was things I liked and some things I didn't like. Regrading the storyline:
* I don't get how one minute we went from the Dalias Cartel offering to get rid of Adam for Jenny, then that turns into Kale suggesting that the MC does it himself. Are they not in the Cartel with plenty of foot soldiers and shooters that could easily do the job themselves? But of course, the good ole farm boy has to potentially jeopardize his future by offing this stain on society Adam himself. It's definitely not the worst idea but I hope there's an intervention of some kind. But at the same time this Adam problem isn't going anywhere, he's hell bent on ruining Jenny and humiliating her and the people she cares about. He wants to degrade her for everyone to see at this party, so him being killed would pretty much solve everyone's problems.
* Even if Jenny and the girls were to leave with new identities, what's to stop Valery's pursuers from finding them again? Going on the run and leaving AOA seems like the worse case scenario at least until her pursuers are completely dealt with, so Adam getting killed kinda seems like a must.
* I thought this Finn guy was going to help or bring something to the table but it turns out that's he's just another gas bag taking up space. I'm glad the MC was there to get Rebecca away from that prick, if he was this obsessive about Rebecca's mom, I'm sure he now has his sights set on what's left of her, her legacy. He went total creep mode in the dean's office and is most likely gonna come back at some point in the story.
* I starting to like Jade more and more, didn't see it happening but she's cool. There still need to be other things that she and the MC can build on other than just fucking, this is what? The 4th sex scene with her already? I wanna more from her other than just her spreading her legs.
* Valery and the MC moving at a slow pace is what's best for both parties involved, she's going to have to learn to enjoy the whole experience of sex all over again and it's a difficult predicament to be in.
Speaking of pace, I wasn't expecting this many sex scenes in this one update. Some felt a tad bit rushed to me, that's just my opinion. I enjoyed Jenny's scene overall, even though my knees ached just thinking about that hardwood floor. I thought the scene with Elizabeth was sexy, both parties knew what they wanted and got down to it. The Aurora scene was disappointing though, she's one of my favorites but it just felt like a cheap hookup, not to mention there wasn't any angles or POV's. It felt very softcore to me, like a Cinemax adult movie sex scene.
But overall, I enjoyed this chapter 5. The father just passed so we'll see where this goes, hopefully, Adam gets poisoned, or trample by a bunch of cast members from My 600lb Life, or hit by speeding bus. All of the above would definitely please me.
But the fact that the MC is supposed to do it? I don't see it well..
Why should an MC spoil his future? additionally .. MC has never had any contact with violence, weapons .. so we do not know if he would have succeeded.
Honestly, I haven't finished ch.5 yet. I'm after that scene with that creep Finn in the dean's office.
But from the very things Adam does, I want to kill him... He will not stop at anything. Greedy bastard.
Running away is not the solution.