Been thinking about Chapter 6.
This is what I came up with.
This is what I think/want to be in Chapter 6.
(Elizabeth-Jade-Jenny Route)
(Nightmare),
The MC dreams about the kidnapping,
about Marcus, about the rescue,
Slowly his dreams drift to his date with Elizabeth>
Sitting there chatting with her, and how she saw Jill...
*Suddenly the Mc sits up, waking Elizabeth.
Telling Elizabeth it may be important.
He carefully ask her some questions.
Elizabeth says at one point she thinks she saw Jill at a table with two men
She said she did not get a good look at them but from the vague description she gives
MC thinks one could have been Marcus,
Then Elizabeth mentions that is was the same day that they were searching the collage!!
Things start to click into place,
The MC realize how the mob knew that they were staying at the hotel.
*The MC and Elizabeth go to confront Jill,
At first Jill tries to deny it,
but she soon breaks down, and tell them how she is being blackmailed by Adam
MC Tell her that Adam will never stop!,
Even after the wedding he will never let her go,
All he will see is that he will have a new lever to control his "Tool"
The MC tells her that there is really only one way for Jill to escape from Adam's control
And that is remove Adam's ability to blackmail her !
He warns her that it will be hard, could stop the marriage,
and will put her friendship with Jenny at risk,
but Jenny is stronger now,
She now has some idea Just how low Adam will go.
*Elizabeth takes them to the collage,
(On the way the MC phones Jenny saying that he need to see her in Susan's office asap!)
*Elizabeth leaves them and goes to take the class,
*Jill and MC goes to Susan's office,
*Kale is watching in the background.
*They enter Susan's office and a worried Jenny is surprised to see Jill,
Then she notices Jill's state and goes to hug her, But jill flinches at the touch.
A puzzled Jenny sits in the chair while Jill sit at the far end of the sofa.
After a long and Hard talk In which the MC had to calm things down a few times
A sad Jenny is sat in the chair holding the MC's hand,
and a dejected, shivering and weeping Jill is hunched Up at the end of the sofa.
*Jenny walks over to the sofa and sits next to Jill,
She gentility pulls Jill to her and hugs her, Jill breaks down in a flood of tears.
*MC while watching this thinks about Adam.
*Jill's phone rings and as she sees who it is begins to panic,
Jenny reaches for the phone and says
"You need to Talk, I will bring her home soon, be gentle"
*latter at Jill's house
After a long and heated talk, accompanied with vases flying to the nearest wall.
A trembling Jill is standing next to Jenny holding on to her tightly.
The MC is stiffly standing slightly forward with a grim face.
Opposite them, back hunched, hand gripping the edge of a table,
shaking with rage stands Jill's intended
With a cry of rage he flips over the heavy table.
He stands there, with his back to them taking deep breaths for a while
Taking a final deep breath he turns towards them and walk toward the MC.
He stops in front of the MC looking into the grim face,
He then looks at the still Trembling Jill and Jenny,
He looks the MC in the eyes and after a few seconds says a single word "Don't"
He walk to Jill and in a gentle voice says
"I still want to marry you, But it will have to be delayed a while"
Jill again breaks down in a flood of tiers.
*Later On.
Scenes of the girls getting ready for the party,
Scene of Jenny and a subdued Jill getting ready for the party,
Scene of MC in his room in his suit opening the draw and looking at the pistol.
Scene of Jill's intended in his suit opening a wall safe, looking inside
then reaching for the pistol inside the safe.