VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

[mma456]

anyone knows if he will make solo route for the other girl like Elizabeth,Aurora or are they can only be included in harem route ?

We can have solo route for all the main LI's. So you can be sure that Aurora and Elizabeth have a solo route. It's the harem that's tricky, it will mostly be in pair of 2-3 girls and some girls look like they won't be happy sharing.

 

[mma456]

I agree, characters need to have some depth and not just good looking models. And I'm really looking forward to Rebecca and Vicky's backstory because they are my No. 1 and 2 girls respectively, Sung Ji being the 3rd.

I am eagerly waiting for their episodic turn. Hope to see Rebecca be the next LI who will be the focus of the episode, as we already got a man from her past introduced last update.

 

[Aristos]

I agree, characters need to have some depth and not just good looking models. And I'm really looking forward to Rebecca and Vicky's backstory because they are my No. 1 and 2 girls respectively, Sung Ji being the 3rd.

I am eagerly waiting for their episodic turn. Hope to see Rebecca be the next LI who will be the focus of the episode, as we already got a man from her past introduced last update.

Rebecca's sweet personality and enticing curves need some tender love

 

[mma456]

Rebecca's sweet personality and enticing curves need some tender love

I really liked Rebecca and her sweet personality the first time I saw her but I was unsure whether she was my top girl, but after the Christmas special, the deal was sealed.

The way she looked and acted when the MC confessed to her, I just couldn't say no to her. I didn't choose her, she choose me

 

[EreKuri]

I know Jenny is like the main girl and possibly the dev's favourite. But could it get anymore 'in-your-face' especially in that movie, it was a romeo-juliet theme where the heroine is a rich blondie who was adopted with a 'superior' brother. Like c'mon it's so blatantly obvious the game is telling you she's the one.

I just hope she's not forced onto players too much going forward, cuz I'm getting that vibe even on a non-Jenny route. Don't get me wrong; I love Jenny, she's my 2nd favourite after Ashley. I just felt the need to express this.

 

[JC23]

i really don't think that matters, it's not as if BaD is gonna abandon the strippers & the prostitutes now that Hell week is over.

The number of lis stayed constant in that game, while the sluts keep piling on even after mc joined DIKs, it added madame, Nora, Becky, Sandy & I bet you more will come.

I'm not saying it's a bad thing, but that game ain't gonna start focusing more on romance, that's for certain.

I agree, that it won't abandon it. I meant the relationship with the Lis is gonna be more prominent. At least that was what the last episode set-up on pretty much all of the main routes, as far as I can tell.

The final set-up will be the next episode for sure, and season 3 will be the "serious or kinda serious" romance one. That's my prediction, but who knows.

Otherwise the MC constantly wondering about doing the wrong thing, as in cheating, will become tiresome.

 

[JC23]

I know Jenny is like the main girl and possibly the dev's favourite. But could it get anymore 'in-your-face' especially in that movie, it was a romeo-juliet theme where the heroine is a rich blondie who was adopted with a 'superior' brother. Like c'mon it's so blatantly obvious the game is telling you she's the one.

I just hope she's not forced onto players too much going forward, cuz I'm getting that vibe even on a non-Jenny route. Don't get me wrong; I love Jenny, she's my 2nd favourite after Ashley. I just felt the need to express this.

I went the non-Jenny route, it's just as good if not better in some aspects. I just don't like that you need to remove Rebecca as an option if you're on Val's route.

 

[Deleted member 3428287]

in the entire 3 chapters you seee 1 BJ ... seriously ... ppl will get bored and turn the game off and forget it fast man ... im sorry this game had so much promise but im done with it

Idk, game is doing pretty well for itself despite having only 2 sex scenes & a blowjob.

Also, that lewd scene with jenny is better than a lot of avn sex scenes out there.

 

[Vollezar]

Idk, game is doing pretty well for itself despite having only 2 sex scenes & a blowjob.

Also, that lewd scene with jenny is better than a lot of avn sex scenes out there.

The story is interesting. And the characters give me all sorts of feels. That's why i am here. Though that Jenny scene is sure as hell a great bonus. Talk about zipper ripper.

 

[Excedrinboy]

Hi! I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this story so far. That being said, there are some grammatical errors that kind of pull you out of the immersion. They're mostly having to do with tenses, and it's relatively minor in the grand scheme of things, but at the same time, they're frequent and they're things that can be fixed fairly easily. It's stuff like "If you passed this class with a good grades, you'll be able to get to any of the courses available in this academy." would be "If you pass* this class with good grades* (or "a good grade"), you'll be able to get into* any of the courses available at this academy." Or things like "The topics in this class isn't all that difficult to grasp," where the "isn't" should be "aren't," given that the subject "topics," is plural.

It's minor stuff, but I like what you're doing with this one and I'd be willing to help proofread as a native English speaker if you want me to give your scripts a once over.

If not, that's cool too, just know I'm a fan and I'm enjoying what you've done so far.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I'd say I am sorry, But I am not.

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[Vollezar]

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Just giving her a hug. And seeing her actually smile. She smiles often, but it always feels like it's a pretend smile. Just "See, me can smile, me be happy." sort of thing. But when MC is around she, after a while, started to actually smile.

 

[Canto Forte]

Jenny is the face of the university, she accounts for the giving back part of it,
while Adam wants the money glittery shiny precious side of it.

Adam is such a potty mouthed arrogant miscreants, speaking wise and
actual tactics exhibited land him the neaandertal specter of being in charge and
mouthing off people as a means to not bark orders to them.

So, of course, Jenny is a forever smiles not much substance kind of wealthy,
because Adam just fuks everything up in that university,
starting with lambasting the freaking dean of all people.

Never could understand as8888les treating people from the back bone of their organisation
so poorly and still expecting them to deliver. What could they deliver? His insults back to him?

Anyway, as long as MC keeps being in the wind, no affiliation, no baggage, nothing to tie him into a tight spot, we can see him be around all those babes and do the little good he can do considering
the big pickle they find themselves in right now.

 

[-zoneout-]

I havent finished the story yet but does Reb have a past story yet?

 

[Canto Forte]

A very close to what MC has of a past story ... still haunting her by the end of this episode.
Do go back and swim with her and hang out at the pool,
right after you give Jade the deep throbbing she deserves.

I havent finished the story yet but does Reb have a past story yet?

She is a brilliant star of her favourite skill, she got dealt a rough hand at the luck table tho.

 

[Canto Forte]

Please consider giving Jade the release she desperately needs to function right,
pretty please. You would be doing Reb a solid, the poor gurl needs to sleep also,
Jades needs are keeping her up all nights also ... help these wonder babes have a rest.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Just giving her a hug. And seeing her actually smile. She smiles often, but it always feels like it's a pretend smile. Just "See, me can smile, me be happy." sort of thing. But when MC is around she, after a while, started to actually smile.
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bro I don't know if you remember this about me but I hate open relationships and Harem I don't like three ways I don't want to share Jenny
with anyone

so do you know what I was thinking about when all three of us are sitting on this couch together?

I was thinking somebody needs to tell the mother of dragons to get the hell up out of here because two is a company and three needs to fuck off

 

[Vollezar]

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bro I don't know if you remember this about me but I hate open relationships and Harem I don't like three ways I don't want to share Jenny
with anyone

so do you know what I was thinking about when all three of us are sitting on this couch together?

I was thinking somebody needs to tell the mother of dragons to get the hell up out of here because two is a company and three needs to fuck off

Yeah. Though the way she is seating, she just might be laying some dragon eggs. Kind of looks like she is lifting herself up a bit to make space.

I do feel kind of bad for her considering her predicament and to whom she'll have to lose her virginity. But daaaamn girl take a focking hint.

P.S. I just wanna bite Jenny's thigh there. make that whole situation as clear to the snow white as possible.

 

[Canto Forte]

Guys .. why the uncalled 4 hate thrown about this beauty?
She is the sole reason 4 her dad to oppose Adam.
Their closeness is the sole reason her father feels some kinhsip towards Jenny
so he did not just sell her out to Adam. Jenny is invested into giving back, and so is this gurls dad.

MC needs to warm up to the friends Jenny has, like the babe in the store, this babe,
Jade ... those babes who genuinely have a care about Jenny,
do y”all wanna turn into Adams all of a sudden?

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bro I don't know if you remember this about me but I hate open relationships and Harem I don't like three ways I don't want to share Jenny
with anyone

so do you know what I was thinking about when all three of us are sitting on this couch together?

I was thinking somebody needs to tell the mother of dragons to get the hell up out of here because two is a company and three needs to fuck off

Yeah. Though the way she is seating, she just might be laying some dragon eggs. Kind of looks like she is lifting herself up a bit to make space.

I do feel kind of bad for her considering her predicament and to whom she'll have to lose her virginity. But daaaamn girl take a focking hint.

P.S. I just wanna bite Jenny's thigh there. make that whole situation as clear to the snow white as possible.

 

[Vollezar]

Guys .. why the uncalled 4 hate thrown about this beauty?
She is the sole reason 4 her dad to oppose Adam.
Their closeness is the sole reason her father feels some kinhsip towards Jenny
so he did not just sell her out to Adam. Jenny is invested into giving back, and so is this gurls dad.

MC needs to warm up to the friends Jenny has, like the babe in the store, this babe,
Jade ... those babes who genuinely have a care about Jenny,
do y”all wanna turn into Adams all of a sudden?

I am just messing with her. She is alright in my books. She did help Jenny.
But liking friends of those you care about is not a requirement, though.
P.S. The babe in the store is the one that sells out Jenny. Don't care about her excuses. She could have warned Jenny, at least. She betrayed the only friend she has in that family (according to what she herself implied).