alexanders
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- Oct 18, 2018
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Hey Guys, Can anyone tell me what changes are made in the prologue?
That's what he said but I tried so hard to spot the difference and couldn't find any. Correct me if I'm wrong, my best bet is that he subtly changes some of the dialogs(or maybe rearrange them), so that we didn't feel that different.I'll rewrite and add some scenes in the prologue chapter along with the first chapter to make her less forceful in her approach. However, this will necessitate a full replay of the prologue chapter, which I don't think that most people would like to do.
I didn't expect people to hate her as much as they did. Maybe it's a writer's bias, or perhaps it's because I already knew her story while writing the prologue chapter.
There is an imbalance of power dynamics between the MC and Jenny, which is because she's rich and owns half of the school and the player being a normal person who comes from a farm. But the imbalance won't stay that way forever, in the next few chapters it'll shift and become a healthy relationship between Jenny and MC.
PS. I have no problem about Jenny's personality and her approach to begin with