VN Ren'Py Completed A Petal Among Thorns [v6.0.2-RE] [Lockheart]

[hp53]

This was the first AVN I ever played and the writing, characters, and animation was so good that you ruined most other games for me lol.

This one still remains my favorite.

 

[seethreepeeoh]

I think Lockhart could significantly expand the appeal of the game (and it's sequels) with some minor changes.

BDSM isn't for everyone. This game has both physical bondage and also psychological dom/sub. For people that enjoy the innocent, mutually supportive nature of the relationship in the beginning of the game, the way the characters start to use/withhold intimacy to manipulate each other is both incongruous and disappointing. None of these interactions are essential to the plot; a few extra dialog choices would be all that was necessary to allow players to avoid these themes.

I think that change would take the game from "weird" or "ok" to "good" for a lot of people.

I think getting the game from "good" to "great" would require changes to the Chuck character. Chuck and his partner don't add any dramatic tension so the story. They only solve problems, and they are deus ex machina to an extent that breaks immersion. The unlimited wealth is unnecessary, and flattens the character. Loading the character with both the business and guru aspects of the plot overwhelms his plausibility. Splitting those aspects into different characters (and giving those characters some flaws) would make big difference.

Hope that's constructive!

 

[msleomac]

Nice game start, looks promising!

While checking the game I "had to" cheat the game a little - I unlocked the Gallery...
Also since v2.02: a Jukebox player function to play the game music tracks by your own.
(I added a button in the main menu. While playing the game you can press "Shift"+"k")

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April 29, 2022
- Updated my Mod for the new game version v5.1.0 (download latest game here so far)
- Added the age input back again to the new game version

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Android basic port from the game compressed
with integrated Mod v5.1.0 (~654MB)
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Some ingame pics of the Mod:
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need to be updated to final version

 

[KoGa3]

need to be updated to final version

Hi. The Mod version v5.1.0 is for the final version (the game itself uses that version number, too). But I add that info to my post now also.

 

[johnyp]

awesome game indeed, petal is such a cutie.

 

[coffeeaddicted]

Well, lots of things that are right.
1) male MC is invisible. Thats a big yes.
2) toying with fetishes.
3) incest (i usually like mom/son better but thats ok)

So far, it feels good even though its wrong. As a porn game its what i am looking for. Though i would prefer a more "dominant" route.
But romance is nice too.
Thanks for making this game.

 

[Cigzag]

What's with Petal calling her father, the MC "guardian"? and referring to herself as his "ward". We all know this is an incest game... so what gives!?

 

[nevermoreXX]

Lockheart If i could i would have awarded you with title: Teacher , VN porn academy Teacher. You are definitely a person that could teach most of the writers of this kind.
Its like super rare achievement. Well done!

 

[Havik79]

Finally got around to finishing this, disappointed in the sex, that whole destroy my pussy thing is such a mood killer if you destroy something you ruin it and make it useless, why on earth would you want to do that to a pussy.

 

[Draakaap23]

Finally got around to finishing this, disappointed in the sex, that whole destroy my pussy thing is such a mood killer if you destroy something you ruin it and make it useless, why on earth would you want to do that to a pussy.

Yeah, makes a lot more sense to talk about adding some protein-based lubricant for vigorous, future use.

 

[Nevermind_]

Hi, is there a no incest patch?

 

[fuul]

Hi, is there a no incest patch?

I was wondering the same so I helped myself. Create a patch.rpy in the game folder with the following content:

init -2:
    $ persistent.chester_rel = "dad"
    $ persistent.petal_rel = "daughter"

 

[Nevermind_]

I was wondering the same so I helped myself. Create a patch.rpy in the game folder with the following content:

init -2:
    $ persistent.chester_rel = "dad"
    $ persistent.petal_rel = "daughter"

Isnt this the contrary of what I asked? I asked if theres a patch to remove incest, like changing dad for the player name or friend, etc.

 

[Nevermind_]

You set your own relationships in the game, it's not incest by default. If you want them to be friends you can make it so, you can set Petal to be MC's interior designer if you really want.

Yeah but I want to see the sex content, I just dont want her calling the mc dad or he calling her daughter. How can I make this change, for this and for other games?

 

[Nevermind_]

What do you mean? In this game you choose what they call each other. If you play it right now without making any changes they'll call each other ward and guardian or something like that. They'll never call each other dad and daughter unless you input it. That includes during sex. As for other games, that always depends entirely on the game.

Thanks I should probably ask how they call each other next time.

 

[Sveipar]

Awesome work Lockheart. Got me hooked on your games with this one

 

[MrSancini]

Just finished last night, and while I liked the sexy bits, the thing that also made me immerse in the VN was the fictional works in-game, like the movies that were shown (the PR porn parody being the exception because of parody) and the story the MC was writing was kinda good also.

I know that we already have some content on the sequel, but I think for the sake of my penis, I will wait for more.

 

[Time Killer1981]

Translation of the game A Petal Among Thorns [Final]
Russian language.
This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.
Instructions: unpack the archive with the replacement files in the root directory of the ORIGINAL game APetalAmongThorns-5.1.0-pc, not in the folder Game!
Перевод игры Леперсток среди Шипов на русский язык.
Перевод неофициальный и сделан для развлечения.
Инструкция: распаковать архив с заменой файлов в корневую директорию ОРИГИНАЛЬНОЙ игры APetalAmongThorns-5.1.0-pc, не в папку Game!
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[PoopinTwice]

I never leave comments and just lurk but I have to say the scene where Petal is blindfolded and she is showing you the scantily clad pictures of Bliss on her phone while describing in detail how she would masturbate in a corner as you defile another daughter is one of the hottest scenes i've ever read. Thank you Lockheart, can't wait to play A Moment of Bliss!

 

[Diajivial]

What am I supposed to do with this?