VN Ren'Py Completed A Petal Among Thorns [v6.0.2-RE] [Lockheart]

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Son of Durin

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Well I can wholeheartedly say thats one of the best little renpy games i've played. Just the right amount of realism to lewd shit, great GREAT writing character and story wise, got me emotional at parts and had me really not wanting it to end. Looking forward to A Moment of Bliss immensely. Fucking incredible game. I'd give it a 9/10 and that purely just cos i wish it lasted longer. The degenerate writing of lewd scenes, the charcter writing for the mains characters, god man. Will be waiting on the sequel with bated breath.
The initial installment of the first sequel, A Moment of Bliss, is out. I have other things I'm trying to get to first, so I'm hoping there will be more to it once I play. If you want to get started, though, it's here:

https://f95zone.to/threads/a-moment-of-bliss-ch-1-lockheart.113727/
 
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Derived

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Apr 25, 2017
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Hey fans,
It's come to my attention that there was a misunderstanding with some of the content in A Petal Among Thorns. Petal was always meant to be portrayed as a mature young woman. This is obvious by the way she speaks and her physical features such has her large bust and full hips.
With the age-play variable, I never meant for her to be below the age of sixteen in fantasy but canonically she's always been eighteen. I tried to alter the code to make sure she couldn't be portrayed as younger than sixteen, but unfortunately I couldn't figure it out. Since I figured we were all adults and could enjoy the game however we damn well please, I decided to leave it alone and let the player decide to make it whatever they wanted.
This is a fantasy game which means there are no real people involved in any capacity except for me writing the scripts and rendering the images. People have the capacity to differentiate fantasy from reality. We've been doing it for thousands of years as storytelling has been an important part of society since cavemen started drawing art on walls.
What baffles me is that we're fine with games that have you killing police officers by the hundreds, such as in Grand Theft Auto, but depicting consensual sex with a seventeen year old in a fantasy where no real people are involved makes people lose their minds.
I don't condone sexual interactions with young persons. Sex is innately an extreme act. There's a vulnerability aspect, tons of chemicals flood the brain, there is a power dynamic, it can be confusing and scary. It's a profoundly intense experience at any age. While a young person is still developing, this can be shaping, defining, and even traumatizing. I don't condone it.
Natural selection bred men that favor young, healthy, and fertile females. The men that bed a healthy young female tended to be the ones whose lineage continued because they would more likely have healthy offspring. Our desire for a sexually mature yet still young woman is not something that just went away when we, as a society, decided it was best to experience sex at a more mature age. Even if I'm wrong on this point, my point holds. It's better to have a healthy outlet in fantasy to reduce the build up of sexual frustration that can lead to unhealthy real world behaviors.
Fantasy is the best possible solution. We men can still enjoy young women without having to involve any real persons. It seems obvious to me that if we can enjoy slaughtering thousands of people in video games without taking to the streets armed to the teeth, we should also be able to indulge in sexual fetishes and kinks that may also be inappropriate in real life.
This is not a commonly held opinion, and I have been aggressively shamed for it. I'm a small fish in a pond full of sharks and whales. My opinion doesn't matter when it comes to business. While I don't agree with censorship, I'm not willing to die on this hill.
I've added in a bonus scene to A Petal Among Thorns that takes place after the last sex scene. It's not terribly long, but it is a nice addition. I've removed the age play mechanic and any references to school that I found. Petal is eighteen, she's decided to forgo college for a few months after High School, and starting in A Moment of Bliss she'll be taking two classes in college.
I know this isn't going to be a popular decision. I don't have the capabilities to fight the system, and I certainly could be wrong in my opinion. For now, I'm rolling over and letting the big dogs win the fight so they don't utterly rip me to shreds. I'm trying to build something here, but I can't if I'm fighting a war that isn't winnable.
I adore all of my fans. I'm going to do everything I can to make my stories as incredible as I can.
Thank you for all your support and kindness.

MEGA
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jaw1986baby

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Lockheart and Myrabelle
I am one of your fans that really likes the age play, like really a lot :p

But I understand this decision totally and 100%

The evangelical sex hate crowd is very strong and scares even Steam (which isn't afraid to have incest) out of any hint of 15-17 year olds let alone more Loli-types (Not in your game but just part of the point). So the smart thing to do is to hammer that rigid 18+ armor together and wear as much of it as you can. I will still follow and play your games and should they get onto Steam with your new protective coat I will buy them. So just send me a link (well post in thread obviously) and I will be there.

No worries about the change. My head can imagine whatever number I want after all :devilish:



PEACE

EDIT: I would also request that a modder of VNs simply make a mod to put the Age Play back. This game already has an in game WT so we don't need that. Then Lockheart is free of the burden but we get what we want anyway (us Age players)
 
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KoGa3

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Lockheart and Myrabelle
EDIT: I would also request that a modder of VNs simply make a mod to put the Age Play back. This game already has an in game WT so we don't need that. Then Lockheart is free of the burden but we get what we want anyway (us Age players)
That's a good idea, if there would be a modder out there and put that back into the game ..... :unsure: ...... wait a minute :oops:
Well, I'll have a look at it...

Edit:
Updated my Mod and added the age input back again
 
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Son of Durin

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Jul 5, 2021
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Hey fans,
It's come to my attention that there was a misunderstanding with some of the content in A Petal Among Thorns. Petal was always meant to be portrayed as a mature young woman. This is obvious by the way she speaks and her physical features such has her large bust and full hips.
With the age-play variable, I never meant for her to be below the age of sixteen in fantasy but canonically she's always been eighteen. I tried to alter the code to make sure she couldn't be portrayed as younger than sixteen, but unfortunately I couldn't figure it out. Since I figured we were all adults and could enjoy the game however we damn well please, I decided to leave it alone and let the player decide to make it whatever they wanted.
This is a fantasy game which means there are no real people involved in any capacity except for me writing the scripts and rendering the images. People have the capacity to differentiate fantasy from reality. We've been doing it for thousands of years as storytelling has been an important part of society since cavemen started drawing art on walls.
What baffles me is that we're fine with games that have you killing police officers by the hundreds, such as in Grand Theft Auto, but depicting consensual sex with a seventeen year old in a fantasy where no real people are involved makes people lose their minds.
I don't condone sexual interactions with young persons. Sex is innately an extreme act. There's a vulnerability aspect, tons of chemicals flood the brain, there is a power dynamic, it can be confusing and scary. It's a profoundly intense experience at any age. While a young person is still developing, this can be shaping, defining, and even traumatizing. I don't condone it.
Natural selection bred men that favor young, healthy, and fertile females. The men that bed a healthy young female tended to be the ones whose lineage continued because they would more likely have healthy offspring. Our desire for a sexually mature yet still young woman is not something that just went away when we, as a society, decided it was best to experience sex at a more mature age. Even if I'm wrong on this point, my point holds. It's better to have a healthy outlet in fantasy to reduce the build up of sexual frustration that can lead to unhealthy real world behaviors.
Fantasy is the best possible solution. We men can still enjoy young women without having to involve any real persons. It seems obvious to me that if we can enjoy slaughtering thousands of people in video games without taking to the streets armed to the teeth, we should also be able to indulge in sexual fetishes and kinks that may also be inappropriate in real life.
This is not a commonly held opinion, and I have been aggressively shamed for it. I'm a small fish in a pond full of sharks and whales. My opinion doesn't matter when it comes to business. While I don't agree with censorship, I'm not willing to die on this hill.
I've added in a bonus scene to A Petal Among Thorns that takes place after the last sex scene. It's not terribly long, but it is a nice addition. I've removed the age play mechanic and any references to school that I found. Petal is eighteen, she's decided to forgo college for a few months after High School, and starting in A Moment of Bliss she'll be taking two classes in college.
I know this isn't going to be a popular decision. I don't have the capabilities to fight the system, and I certainly could be wrong in my opinion. For now, I'm rolling over and letting the big dogs win the fight so they don't utterly rip me to shreds. I'm trying to build something here, but I can't if I'm fighting a war that isn't winnable.
I adore all of my fans. I'm going to do everything I can to make my stories as incredible as I can.
Thank you for all your support and kindness.

MEGA
PC - Mac - Android
Google
PC - Mac - Android
Thanks for this. I enjoyed my dessert immensely.
 

Jack-ish

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Jul 12, 2018
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702


Hey fans,
It's come to my attention that there was a misunderstanding with some of the content in A Petal Among Thorns. Petal was always meant to be portrayed as a mature young woman. This is obvious by the way she speaks and her physical features such has her large bust and full hips.
With the age-play variable, I never meant for her to be below the age of sixteen in fantasy but canonically she's always been eighteen. I tried to alter the code to make sure she couldn't be portrayed as younger than sixteen, but unfortunately I couldn't figure it out. Since I figured we were all adults and could enjoy the game however we damn well please, I decided to leave it alone and let the player decide to make it whatever they wanted.
This is a fantasy game which means there are no real people involved in any capacity except for me writing the scripts and rendering the images. People have the capacity to differentiate fantasy from reality. We've been doing it for thousands of years as storytelling has been an important part of society since cavemen started drawing art on walls.
What baffles me is that we're fine with games that have you killing police officers by the hundreds, such as in Grand Theft Auto, but depicting consensual sex with a seventeen year old in a fantasy where no real people are involved makes people lose their minds.
I don't condone sexual interactions with young persons. Sex is innately an extreme act. There's a vulnerability aspect, tons of chemicals flood the brain, there is a power dynamic, it can be confusing and scary. It's a profoundly intense experience at any age. While a young person is still developing, this can be shaping, defining, and even traumatizing. I don't condone it.
Natural selection bred men that favor young, healthy, and fertile females. The men that bed a healthy young female tended to be the ones whose lineage continued because they would more likely have healthy offspring. Our desire for a sexually mature yet still young woman is not something that just went away when we, as a society, decided it was best to experience sex at a more mature age. Even if I'm wrong on this point, my point holds. It's better to have a healthy outlet in fantasy to reduce the build up of sexual frustration that can lead to unhealthy real world behaviors.
Fantasy is the best possible solution. We men can still enjoy young women without having to involve any real persons. It seems obvious to me that if we can enjoy slaughtering thousands of people in video games without taking to the streets armed to the teeth, we should also be able to indulge in sexual fetishes and kinks that may also be inappropriate in real life.
This is not a commonly held opinion, and I have been aggressively shamed for it. I'm a small fish in a pond full of sharks and whales. My opinion doesn't matter when it comes to business. While I don't agree with censorship, I'm not willing to die on this hill.
I've added in a bonus scene to A Petal Among Thorns that takes place after the last sex scene. It's not terribly long, but it is a nice addition. I've removed the age play mechanic and any references to school that I found. Petal is eighteen, she's decided to forgo college for a few months after High School, and starting in A Moment of Bliss she'll be taking two classes in college.
I know this isn't going to be a popular decision. I don't have the capabilities to fight the system, and I certainly could be wrong in my opinion. For now, I'm rolling over and letting the big dogs win the fight so they don't utterly rip me to shreds. I'm trying to build something here, but I can't if I'm fighting a war that isn't winnable.
I adore all of my fans. I'm going to do everything I can to make my stories as incredible as I can.
Thank you for all your support and kindness.

MEGA
PC - Mac - Android
Google
PC - Mac - Android
As someone who has always liked older women from a much too early age I don't entirely agree that "guys like em young" is an ingrained type of thing. but I get it. I completely disagree with rolling over. F them. Looking at this site, all the devs, and the majority of content here should illustrate how it's mostly formed and allowed independent devs to thrive by catering to the niche markets that was getting nothing from mainstream. It's why patrons are so desperate to support devs who are obviously playing them. People that want you to roll over are not interested in yours or anybody else's success, and never will be.
 

YoukoKurama

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Nov 29, 2017
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I thought this was going to be too vanilla to really work for me, but I was pleasantly surprised and really enjoyed... though I felt like Chuck was an unnecessary addition and started to kinda zone out during those bits, seemed to just be there to overly justify the situation that was happening.
Gotta have the rich MacGuffin to facilitate the plot
 

hp53

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May 13, 2022
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This was the first AVN I ever played and the writing, characters, and animation was so good that you ruined most other games for me lol.

This one still remains my favorite.
 
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seethreepeeoh

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May 16, 2022
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I think Lockhart could significantly expand the appeal of the game (and it's sequels) with some minor changes.

BDSM isn't for everyone. This game has both physical bondage and also psychological dom/sub. For people that enjoy the innocent, mutually supportive nature of the relationship in the beginning of the game, the way the characters start to use/withhold intimacy to manipulate each other is both incongruous and disappointing. None of these interactions are essential to the plot; a few extra dialog choices would be all that was necessary to allow players to avoid these themes.

I think that change would take the game from "weird" or "ok" to "good" for a lot of people.

I think getting the game from "good" to "great" would require changes to the Chuck character. Chuck and his partner don't add any dramatic tension so the story. They only solve problems, and they are deus ex machina to an extent that breaks immersion. The unlimited wealth is unnecessary, and flattens the character. Loading the character with both the business and guru aspects of the plot overwhelms his plausibility. Splitting those aspects into different characters (and giving those characters some flaws) would make big difference.

Hope that's constructive!
 

msleomac

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Feb 1, 2019
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Nice game start, looks promising!

While checking the game I "had to" cheat the game a little - I unlocked the Gallery...
Also since v2.02: a Jukebox player function to play the game music tracks by your own.
(I added a button in the main menu. While playing the game you can press "Shift"+"k")

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April 29, 2022
- Updated my Mod for the new game version v5.1.0 (download latest game
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- Added the age input back again to the new game version


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coffeeaddicted

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Apr 13, 2021
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Well, lots of things that are right.
1) male MC is invisible. Thats a big yes.
2) toying with fetishes.
3) incest (i usually like mom/son better but thats ok)

So far, it feels good even though its wrong. As a porn game its what i am looking for. Though i would prefer a more "dominant" route.
But romance is nice too.
Thanks for making this game.
 
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Cigzag

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What's with Petal calling her father, the MC "guardian"? and referring to herself as his "ward". We all know this is an incest game... so what gives!?
 

Fitshace

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What's with Petal calling her father, the MC "guardian"? and referring to herself as his "ward". We all know this is an incest game... so what gives!?
Patreon won't allow it otherwise, it's not like you cant change it though.
 

Havik79

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Sep 5, 2019
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Finally got around to finishing this, disappointed in the sex, that whole destroy my pussy thing is such a mood killer if you destroy something you ruin it and make it useless, why on earth would you want to do that to a pussy.
 

Draakaap23

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Finally got around to finishing this, disappointed in the sex, that whole destroy my pussy thing is such a mood killer if you destroy something you ruin it and make it useless, why on earth would you want to do that to a pussy.
Yeah, makes a lot more sense to talk about adding some protein-based lubricant for vigorous, future use.
 
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