VN Ren'Py Completed A Petal Among Thorns [v6.0.2-RE] [Lockheart]

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Yngling

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Just discover this game. How is it compare to Avalon?
It's much more focussed.

This game is about a father and daughter together in a cabin for a week. The daughter basically seduces the father.

The relationship is fixed, the setting is fixed, the time period is fixed. Given that it's a porn game, the outcome is predictable, (but the way to wards it isn't.)

Avalon is much more "open" in all respects.
 

Fitshace

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Just discover this game. How is it compare to Avalon?
I would tentatively call it "better". Certainly much better render quality, and Lockheart makes much better use of music and sounds in this one. That being said, it's a different kind of game with a much narrower focus. There's only one LI, Petal, and not a lot of choices. It's also very focused on the relationship between MC and Petal and their exploration of what that relationship could be. There's very little of any larger story going on in this one. It still has that Lockheart blend of emotional and funny going on though!
 

UncleFredo

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Just discover this game. How is it compare to Avalon?
Petal is the first of three VNs that complete a story arc. So effectively, this is the first of three chapters and as such is much more narrowly focused than Avalon. The writing is excellent and as the first third of the story it does an admiral job of setting the foundations, relationships, and by its end providing a pretty hot finale.

The first update of the second VN "A moment of Bliss" has just been released. If you like Avalon, I'm pretty sure you'll like these VNs as well.
 

KamuranGUCUK

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I love this game. Congratulations to everyone involved in the making of the game. Like everyone else, I will be looking forward to the sequels. The story, characters, flow and graphics of the game... Everything is very good. I don't like incest stories, but this problem can be overcome thanks to the name editing options...
 
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I love this game. Congratulations to everyone involved in the making of the game. Like everyone else, I will be looking forward to the sequels. The story, characters, flow and graphics of the game... Everything is very good. I don't like incest stories, but this problem can be overcome thanks to the name editing options...
Yeah... but no matter what you do for naming I don't see how the story around the names leads to anything but "related"
More so once you get another daughter involved and all that.....

But that's me





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Prancing Pony

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I didn't care for Avalon, the game or the character, but I liked Petal quite a bit, so I would call them very different games. ;)
APAT is different style of game to Avalon, but it also shows Lockhearts's progression as a game developer with, IMHO, better text and images than Avalon. Not that I think Avalon is bad; it leaves many other games for dead.
 

longjohngold

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I thought this was going to be too vanilla to really work for me, but I was pleasantly surprised and really enjoyed... though I felt like Chuck was an unnecessary addition and started to kinda zone out during those bits, seemed to just be there to overly justify the situation that was happening.
 

Son of Durin

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I thought this was going to be too vanilla to really work for me, but I was pleasantly surprised and really enjoyed... though I felt like Chuck was an unnecessary addition and started to kinda zone out during those bits, seemed to just be there to overly justify the situation that was happening.
If I'm properly remembering who Chuck is, suspect that he will play an integral role in getting the rest of the family to open up to the changing dynamic, possibly helping get his sister on board. He isn't simply a non sequitur, but probably part of the catalyst.
 

Maverick1965

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Another brilliant piece from Lockheart. Avalon was the bomb, A Petal among Thorns has gone atomic and from what I've played so far A Moment of Bliss is nuclear. I can't wait to see the three complete and together!
 

MaxTheDark

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This was a really good and entertaining story, I think made especially good by the fact that nobody there was an unlikeable asshole (most games feature one token character who hates the MC for no fucking reason whatsoever) and Chuck is a really cool character. Although I do have some questions:
1. Does anyone actually get off on getting their dick massaged by shoes? I have a foot fetish and while I never cared much about footjob, I could at least imagine it rather pleasant. Shoejob sounds silly...
2. Why does the text at the beginning of the game say 'All characters are over 18' if Avalon is stated to be 15? There is no sexual content with her, fair enough, but those disclaimers are getting silly... (especially since you can change Petal's age to anything you want)
3. Where did the idea of people talking during sex come from? I mean, seriously, I don't remember having conversation during any of my sexual encounters (BOTH of them!) while here they seem to be having philosophical debates. And on the note, how the hell is the MC capable of talking WHILE EJACULATING? When Im cumming Im barely able to just let out a few grunts at best.
4. Has the development on the sequel started yet? Is the aforementioned Avalon girl a crossover with their other game, Avalon?
 

Son of Durin

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This was a really good and entertaining story, I think made especially good by the fact that nobody there was an unlikeable asshole (most games feature one token character who hates the MC for no fucking reason whatsoever) and Chuck is a really cool character. Although I do have some questions:
1. Does anyone actually get off on getting their dick massaged by shoes? I have a foot fetish and while I never cared much about footjob, I could at least imagine it rather pleasant. Shoejob sounds silly...
2. Why does the text at the beginning of the game say 'All characters are over 18' if Avalon is stated to be 15? There is no sexual content with her, fair enough, but those disclaimers are getting silly... (especially since you can change Petal's age to anything you want)
3. Where did the idea of people talking during sex come from? I mean, seriously, I don't remember having conversation during any of my sexual encounters (BOTH of them!) while here they seem to be having philosophical debates. And on the note, how the hell is the MC capable of talking WHILE EJACULATING? When Im cumming Im barely able to just let out a few grunts at best.
4. Has the development on the sequel started yet? Is the aforementioned Avalon girl a crossover with their other game, Avalon?
I think your third item has something to do with mental acuity. ;)

And talking can help prolong the experience: get it to the edge, ask about supper and get a reprieve; then go a bit longer, plan next weekend; get close again, change positions, talk about how nice her ass looks; after about the fourth or fifth delay, let forth a firehose rather than a water gun.
 
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Fitshace

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4. Has the development on the sequel started yet? Is the aforementioned Avalon girl a crossover with their other game, Avalon?
Yes, Avalon's appearance is a crossover, she's the main LI in Avalon which is set a few years after APAT. As for the sequel, not only has development started, the first release is out: A Moment of Bliss

Oh, and Lockheart removed the age variable for Petal and put in the age disclaimer after Steam rejected the game because of it.
 

MaxTheDark

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Yes, Avalon's appearance is a crossover, she's the main LI in Avalon which is set a few years after APAT. As for the sequel, not only has development started, the first release is out: A Moment of Bliss

Oh, and Lockheart removed the age variable for Petal and put in the age disclaimer after Steam rejected the game because of it.
Ahhh lovely. I'm kinda torn between wanting to see what happens next RIGHT AWAY and wanting to wait till it's actually finished so I don't get the 'Coming soon' cockblock...

In terms of the variable, I would leave it there, but if someone enters a number under 18 it should show a massive red text on black background saying 'YOU SICK FUCK' and revert it to 18 :D

I think your third item has something to do with mental acuity. ;)

And talking can help prolong the experience: get it to the edge, ask about supper and get a reprieve; then go a bit longer, plan next weekend; get close again, change positions, talk about how nice her ass looks; after about the fourth or fifth delay, let forth a firehose rather than a water gun.
Ahh I see. What I do instead is make sure the girl cums, and then do what I feel the best. I kinda don't like interruptions, but I guess it is a valid way to prolongue it :)



Now to solve the mystery of the shoeful footjob...
 
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Son of Durin

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Ahhh lovely. I'm kinda torn between wanting to see what happens next RIGHT AWAY and wanting to wait till it's actually finished so I don't get the 'Coming soon' cockblock...

In terms of the variable, I would leave it there, but if someone enters a number under 18 it should show a massive red text on black background saying 'YOU SICK FUCK' and revert it to 18 :D


Ahh I see. What I do instead is make sure the girl cums, and then do what I feel the best. I kinda don't like interruptions, but I guess it is a valid way to prolongue it :)



Now to solve the mystery of the shoeful footjob...
She should already be "one in" by the time you get yourself in. That's what foreplay is about. More than one, and she might be too sensitive to start the main event. Once started, two additional is a nice goal.
 

MaxTheDark

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She should already be "one in" by the time you get yourself in. That's what foreplay is about. More than one, and she might be too sensitive to start the main event. Once started, two additional is a nice goal.
I like to give girls a cascading orgasm that lasts as long as I can hold on to them haha. Do see what you mean, that's when she finishes me off with her mouth :D
 

Soundprime

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Well I can wholeheartedly say thats one of the best little renpy games i've played. Just the right amount of realism to lewd shit, great GREAT writing character and story wise, got me emotional at parts and had me really not wanting it to end. Looking forward to A Moment of Bliss immensely. Fucking incredible game. I'd give it a 9/10 and that purely just cos i wish it lasted longer. The degenerate writing of lewd scenes, the charcter writing for the mains characters, god man. Will be waiting on the sequel with bated breath.
 

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Well I can wholeheartedly say thats one of the best little renpy games i've played. Just the right amount of realism to lewd shit, great GREAT writing character and story wise, got me emotional at parts and had me really not wanting it to end. Looking forward to A Moment of Bliss immensely. Fucking incredible game. I'd give it a 9/10 and that purely just cos i wish it lasted longer. The degenerate writing of lewd scenes, the charcter writing for the mains characters, god man. Will be waiting on the sequel with bated breath.
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-moment-of-bliss-ch-1-lockheart.113727/
 
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