heres a rant
eve doesnt go away, like god fucking damn it go away please. its like the radio guide in bad video games constantly butting in to tell you what to do,what to think, what to feel! and its almost always being something you were already thinking and were already going to do. quit robbing me of my notchoices. or at the very least have an option to turn her off. she really does ruin everything... after while you think "okay, im at that point of the game where i finished the main talking and i can just hang out do the trainer vn adventure thing and maybe only talk to eve for plot stuff since theres an option to talk to her alone " but no, shes still around for every other line of text.
in a way the mc is also guilty of this, like you can sort write in sometimes if he does or doesnt want to do X if it isnt clear that doing X isnt part of the game but mc will often write how he feels about something you just read and something you can make your own feelings about. arent these games supposed to be more ambiguous in the writing for the main character so the player can feel more like theyre the ones doing the stuff? like if hes has to feel a way about something shouldnt i have the choice on how?
at the very least could you separate the general narration from his voice so i know what to ignore.
TLDR: the constant narration and reaction from eve and the main character is bad, tone it down... please.