- May 29, 2018
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I feel you used that pun on purpose lol
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- Nov 20, 2018
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Sorry; I seem to get myself into hot water sometimes. I'll be better going forward.
Insanepenguin91 The story and characters seem like they could be really interesting, however the two biggest issues I saw can have a serious impact on the imersion. First are the constant changes between person (First person: I/me/my and Second person: you/your) often times in the same text box, and how you ask for a customized name but don't use the custom name consistently. Other than that it was a pretty decent first release that had some really nice eye candy and showed potential to be one of the better stories in a porn game.
- May 18, 2017
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Yeah - i realize i have to go back and check the pov of the game, my goal is to have a narrator - but also have MC's inner thoughts. Thanks for playing
Ah if that's what you're going for, and need inspiration, Lewd Island does a really good job of that... assuming you like 4th wall breaking. I am sure there are other great examples, but I just finished playing the most recent update for that so it's stuck in my head at the moment. I think the most important thing is to keep the perspective changes confined to their own on screen text, but it may also require the name plate of who is talking... I don't know for sure. Maybe the community knows of some good examples of a narrator with an active who is not the main character in addition to an active first person character?
- May 18, 2017
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Hey guys - I’m working on the next update on the game. And I’m really paying attention to how the MC is going to treat Melissa going forward...
- Apr 4, 2018
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Well, she at least knows how to treat the bitch the way she deserves ...
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Why is this Melissa chick still around?
She has shown her true colors and why the hell do we not have the option to totally avoid her?
Is she just a character we will constantly have forced on us?
Its funny that the dev says he doesnt see his MC as a beta/cuck but that is literally all we have seen out his MC so far. Reverse pschology? Like the MC is really a beta/cuck living off of sloppy seconds? I bet he has Todds cum in his mouth after kissing that nasty ho after she was slobbing on his knob. Just gross.
She has shown her true colors and why the hell do we not have the option to totally avoid her?
Is she just a character we will constantly have forced on us?
Its funny that the dev says he doesnt see his MC as a beta/cuck but that is literally all we have seen out his MC so far. Reverse pschology? Like the MC is really a beta/cuck living off of sloppy seconds? I bet he has Todds cum in his mouth after kissing that nasty ho after she was slobbing on his knob. Just gross.
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Dude it is the first releaseWhy is this Melissa chick still around?
She has shown her true colors and why the hell do we not have the option to totally avoid her?
Is she just a character we will constantly have forced on us?
Its funny that the dev says he doesnt see his MC as a beta/cuck but that is literally all we have seen out his MC so far. Reverse pschology? Like the MC is really a beta/cuck living off of sloppy seconds? I bet he has Todds cum in his mouth after kissing that nasty ho after she was slobbing on his knob. Just gross.
Maybe there is revenge route ,, dump her route ,, or win her over route
But you seriously want the end right from the first release
If there is a dump her / avoid her option it wont be in the fucking demo version
Have you ever played a game before is this your first
Give the dev a break and see in later updates whether you like the game direction or not but after you get to see the direction
- May 6, 2017
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Good scene, it is appreciated that you are listening to the players, I really look forward to the next update. Although if I have to say that in this scene it shows us how badly or hard we are going to treat that bitch or how ... or if we are going to be the ones in charge of its punishment or corection because I want the MC we should be seriously that if it's an alpha and puts anyone in its place
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MC is someone that shouldnt be messed with. Im working with my writer to expand his story and background - we didnt think he would come across as bland, because that was not our intention at all. We wanted to present a game with a diverse cast of characters with interesting backstories so that the game world. thats why im going to start rendering comics that go along the game, showing side stories or explaining events that take place in the game world
The first comic will be featuring Melissa - because she is the main girl of chapter 1. later comics will show the other girls of the game, attached are some renders of the comic
- Jul 6, 2019
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Wait, what?
Joke aside, I appreciate your dedication to this story. I am not sure starting the comics with a much disliked character is wise (personally, I wouldn't mind seeing the backstory of the MC+Wife's rise to CEO of AT to demonstrate their awesomeness) but it's your call. Good luck.
- Nov 22, 2018
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Yeah I am not sure spotlighting a character that is helping the enemy make your MC look like a little bitchboy is going to do any favors for the folks already questioning your description of the MC as some badass. Unless your MC really is just a total wussbag.
- Nov 22, 2018
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Look, I like to give games a fair shake but when a dev comes in here and says his MC is gonna be some badass "not a beta/cuck" then proceeds to make him look exactly like that it just gives me some serious doubts the guy has a clue what is what.
Hey guys, I'm the writer for Amore Tech. I came in after chapter 1 was mostly finished. I've been reading what you are all saying and from knowing whats coming next, just be patient. MC isn't an instant gratification type of person when it comes to revenge. Hes slow and methodical about setting people up and tearing them down.
I'm more of a show don't tell type of person, so if you're on the fence just wait for chapter 2 and then decide.
I'm more of a show don't tell type of person, so if you're on the fence just wait for chapter 2 and then decide.
- Nov 22, 2018
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Ah christ another "just you wait and see how awesome its gonna be!" line...
Well if history tells us anything the next update MC's wife will be raped right in front of him while hes sitting there watching it go down thinking to himself "ill be a badass someday!
We'll I'm glad you're so invested even when you don't like whats happened so far. I'm looking forward to you sticking around for the coming updates.Ah christ another "just you wait and see how awesome its gonna be!" line...
Well if history tells us anything the next update MC's wife will be raped right in front of him while hes sitting there watching it go down thinking to himself "ill be a badass someday!
- Nov 22, 2018
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I am intrigued so far and also confused. Dev says one thing and delivers another. I hope im wrong but I will check out the next update and see if the actually content marries up with the given description.We'll I'm glad you're so invested even when you don't like whats happened so far. I'm looking forward to you sticking around for the coming updates.
- May 18, 2017
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Hello Everyone - these are this week's pin up renders, featuring Natasha
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