Saruh Hats off to you turning an average first try into an incredible rebirth. Story, pacing, scenes, animations and still renders are great. Your time away has really paid off. And this new game is definitely 'fappable'.
A few things, don't make the conversation scenes too long unless you use many renders during the conversation. The average player wants to get from one sexy scene to the other with as little 'effort' as possible. Throughout the game the pacing was good but sometimes I felt that the conversations with the therapist, the final make out with Mark before being caught by Aria and some scenes with Aria were too long winded and should have been spaced out either side of a 'distraction'.
The 4some in LV on their honeymoon was OTT. It would have fitted in better a short time after, maybe to celebrate 6 months of marriage or something like that. Next LV trip she has to bring her wedding dress and get Gangbanged in it after She and Henry renew their vows, normal HW or Cuck idea.
The english is adequate but the underlying prose is very exciting. I wouldn't change the scriptwriter and if it's you, you have definitely improved over the previous iteration. The grammatical mistakes can all be corrected over time but the format shouldn't be modified.
Lastly, I find your tiers to be too restrictive. I like the Dom version because I like to see everything but a $15 monthly pledge is above my self imposed $10/month per new projects. Of course this is me. The tried and tested method is the release delay, voting ability and patron only renders and favors that determine a patron's level of support. The different paths would be according to choices made in-game. But that is really up to you. If you provide quality and quantity every month patrons won't mind upping their pledge.
I didn't think TAC would have any competition but Angelica may well prove to be a hotter wife than Anne. And just for that Kudos to you. Keep going.