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Bro i really loved your game ( Blairewood) ... NTR will be the part of your game Or not ... If it's then it will be avoidable ???Artemis fan art View attachment 1601365
Bro i really loved your game ( Blairewood) ... NTR will be the part of your game Or not ... If it's then it will be avoidable ???Artemis fan art View attachment 1601365
Tastes vary. I happen to find the body types in this VN quite attractive. Not to put words in your mouth, it might be stated something like "For those of us who get bored with a relatively singular body type, the lack of others breaks immersion". What you're really saying is you prefer VN with a variety of body types. Your immersion is your business. There are many body types I find attractive. As long as I get to choose who I spend time with and there is at least one that I find attractive, I'm good.Also after couple of characters, women having same body type kinda ruin "immersion" also Tony Stark level tech Kindra possess.
will you be updating for v3.1? or is it unnecessary?Updated for v0.3.0
I've made a multi-mod for this game
Features:
- Walkthrough - added green color for best dialogue options
- Added unlock all options for the archives (scenes and images)
- During free roam objects that can be interacted with are highlighted
- Scene changes (Can get both Katy and Zoe scenes, can call both Katy and Zelda)
Download: MEGA PIXELDRAIN
The INKs work for me because of how they are utilized. I don't mind each of them having sexual history since almost all of them seem to be about 20-22 years old with Reina being a bit older than that. Also, Paige, Naomi, and Zelda have shown a lot more intrigue than just being hook ups. Even Katy who has been used mainly early on for quick sex scenes, already has some intrigue about her. Reina's entire character is basically tied to them and by design she has had to mature from her INK days. Didn't include June in that list since June, while an INK, has a clear identity outside of them due to her existing relationship with the MC. I feel this is an interesting take on them since while they are a sorority and most games like this would only use them for sex, there is a lot more going on for them. Artemis, Kindra's tech, etc. I feel gives the game a lot of identity through worldbuilding. I think if those were removed it would be taking a lot away from it and it also gives several characters interesting traits such as the MC who is a skilled coder. The game has already shown it is able to use aspects like Artemis and the INKs to help build up friendships, relationships and talk about serious subject matter. Especially when a main plot point currently is MC rekindling his friendship with Kindra through working on Artemis. People deal with trauma differently, and I feel it is more due to the fact June already had a strong will and a clear vision about who she wanted to be in order to move on. In fact, I think the fact June hasn't given the MC a hard time about his trauma after we learn about hers is very telling about their relationship and just overall interesting and nice to see. I think the game can be story centric with both drama and erotic elements and not be a detriment to itself.I won't comment on story, but this game flexes its "animations" left and right. I was really suprised June ate her plate and her plate gradually decreased. Only thing that bothered me switching to next scenes. Always suprise me that if I pressed space more than once, because story jumps so far ahead.
People talk about Ink club, I really don't care about them. Fraternity or female version of it never clicked with me. I don't choose hook-ups or people who do that. Kudos to June though, she is better at dealing with trauma than MC. I guess fucking around helps. Though I don't consider her as "friend". I'm just waiting for Claire scenes.
Also after couple of characters, women having same body type kinda ruin "immersion" also Tony Stark level tech Kindra possess.
I think devs could do better at creating drama game than ero game. Remove artemis and soronity, build up abusive relationships,friendships etc. Because imho, those are strong collums of game.
That would be my choice. In game as in real life.Does the dev read the posts here?
If they do my question is; if this have a harem thing at its end will I get the choice of saying something like "hey if I can date other people so do you"?
I mean good for you. Like I said, it's not for me. Also not talking about sexual history. Whole "blowjob" constest is giving me bad vibes about group. We don't know how deep rabbit hole goes. We don't know how weird things going on there. We weren't there. We weren't told.The INKs work for me because of how they are utilized. I don't mind each of them having sexual history since almost all of...
I don't think so, MC can still be coder but more realistic approach. Moment game started throwing me Stark level technology I stopped believing story. Like no goverments involved, no secret ageny. Hell Kindra released footage to live show, you are telling me noone hunting these people? And what these people talking about? Dance,sex, robots, relationships etc. Imho that's naive.I think if those were removed it would be taking a lot away from it and it also gives several characters interesting traits such as the MC who is a skilled coder.
Yes her existing relationship with MC kinda bonkers. You don't throw your friend to nonsense blowjob constest, knowing if there is possiblity to get them hurt, emotional or physically. Also she knew Raina being someone who works for company so... she intentionally threw MC. Of all the people out there, I thought June would be the last one who could do that. I don't know what kind of friend June is but I'm pretty sure I wouldn't... no I won't sent my friend who were abused and not fully recovered into cunningulus/blowjob contests for my benefits.Didn't include June in that list since June, while an INK, has a clear identity outside of them due to her existing relationship with the MC.
Yea what a "blowing" start.The game has already shown it is able to use aspects like Artemis and the INKs to help build up friendships, relationships and talk about serious subject matter.
They were doing good before all super uber bunker underground that nobody knows about. Kindra was helping a friend who were at his limit. A dude who were with her when they were younger. You don't need a MacGuffin for that. Now I feel like Kindra interest in MC because of his coding skill, not geniune friendship. Artemis plot poisoned story-well for me.Especially when a main plot point currently is MC rekindling his friendship with Kindra through working on Artemis.
I don't think she is ready to move on,at least not right now, she can't move on. She has to face with abuser, she wants to. Up until there or something changes, she will still be somewhat broken.June already had a strong will and a clear vision about who she wanted to be in order to move on
Larger you are harder you fall, quality of quantity, easier to juggle 2 oranges than 3, etc. Problem is not that there is 2 elements. There are 3. Drama, Erotic and SCI-FI. Last part is the problem of story imho. Also someone on previous pages explained how blowjob contests was detrimental to story. That was a good read.I think the game can be story centric with both drama and erotic elements and not be a detriment to itself.
I think devs could do better at creating drama game than ero game. Remove artemis and soronity, build up abusive relationships,friendships etc. Because imho, those are strong collums of game.
Sorry to but in on your conversation but I have questions and opinions; I'll try and do this in order:I often don't reply with this way but you made me intrigued with your post.
I mean good for you. Like I said, it's not for me. Also not talking about sexual history. Whole "blowjob" constest is giving me bad vibes about group. We don't know how deep rabbit hole goes. We don't know how weird things going on there. We weren't there. We weren't told.
I don't think so, MC can still be coder but more realistic approach. Moment game started throwing me Stark level technology I stopped believing story. Like no goverments involved, no secret ageny. Hell Kindra released footage to live show, you are telling me noone hunting these people? And what these people talking about? Dance,sex, robots, relationships etc. Imho that's naive.
Yes her existing relationship with MC kinda bonkers. You don't throw your friend to nonsense blowjob constest, knowing if there is possiblity to get them hurt, emotional or physically. Also she knew Raina being someone who works for company so... she intentionally threw MC. Of all the people out there, I thought June would be the last one who could do that. I don't know what kind of friend June is but I'm pretty sure I wouldn't... no I won't sent my friend who were abused and not fully recovered into cunningulus/blowjob contests for my benefits.
Yea what a "blowing" start.
They were doing good before all super uber bunker underground that nobody knows about. Kindra was helping a friend who were at his limit. A dude who were with her when they were younger. You don't need a MacGuffin for that. Now I feel like Kindra interest in MC because of his coding skill, not geniune friendship. Artemis plot poisoned story-well for me.
I don't think she is ready to move on,at least not right now, she can't move on. She has to face with abuser, she wants to. Up until there or something changes, she will still be somewhat broken.
Larger you are harder you fall, quality of quantity, easier to juggle 2 oranges than 3, etc. Problem is not that there is 2 elements. There are 3. Drama, Erotic and SCI-FI. Last part is the problem of story imho. Also someone on previous pages explained how blowjob contests was detrimental to story. That was a good read.
That is fair, but is also worth noting that entire plot point behind that is that while they did things like that in the past, that event was considered one of the more extreme ones evident with the whole subplot of them not wanting Reina to find out and Reina's reaction to the whole thing. They only resorted to it in order to ensure the one girl would not pass the test.I mean good for you. Like I said, it's not for me. Also not talking about sexual history. Whole "blowjob" constest is giving me bad vibes about group. We don't know how deep rabbit hole goes. We don't know how weird things going on there. We weren't there. We weren't told.
We know the government is involved in some capacity as Kindra's parents were government contractors. We don't know the extent of the hunting, but we already know Cassandra and the company she works for are looking for Kindra because they were not aware if Kindra was in possession of the tech from her parents or if she had those resources which was basically revealed when she showed off Koko on the talk show. It is very possible more people are after Kindra, but we already have a plotline where Cassandra is hunting them down to try and use their technology for their Hunter AI software. As the other person stated, we have reason to believe there are other people with similar levels of technology. Since Kindra's parents were with the government it is very likely they have some of this tech for private use. This is evident when Kindra talks about the holograms and when she upgraded MC's phone stating the government and by extension her parents had this tech for years, but never released it to the public, and that parallels the real world with government use of advanced technology. I can understand if you wanted the game to be more grounded in present day, but I don't see how that is an overall negative to the game itself. The way technology is handled in the game is not outlandish enough to solve every problem and to not have any flaws. At best this is a near future setting and utilizing these sci-fi elements gives the game identity which separates it from many other games.I don't think so, MC can still be coder but more realistic approach. Moment game started throwing me Stark level technology I stopped believing story. Like no goverments involved, no secret ageny. Hell Kindra released footage to live show, you are telling me noone hunting these people? And what these people talking about? Dance,sex, robots, relationships etc. Imho that's naive.
Replay the early part of the game. June is very hesitant to allow the MC to participate, but the MC seems to be the only male friend she has or at least the only one she trusts. The entire plot point surrounding Reina is that Paige was supposed to make sure Reina did not show up, but Paige got drunk due to stress and forgot. Which is why June gets pissed at Paige before they talk it out. June was looking out for the MC and even asked the MC if he was ok to do the event and was trying to make sure his job interview with Reina was not ruined.Yes her existing relationship with MC kinda bonkers. You don't throw your friend to nonsense blowjob constest, knowing if there is possiblity to get them hurt, emotional or physically. Also she knew Raina being someone who works for company so... she intentionally threw MC. Of all the people out there, I thought June would be the last one who could do that. I don't know what kind of friend June is but I'm pretty sure I wouldn't... no I won't sent my friend who were abused and not fully recovered into cunningulus/blowjob contests for my benefits.
Sure, but inherently I don't think there is anything wrong with having a central aspect like development for Artemis as a core goal for MC and Kindra as a part of their storyline. Is your issue the fact it is advanced technology to the point of sci-fi? Because I don't think it brings the story down in anyway and I think it is too early to say if Artemis is a MacGuffin and I don't even think it would be bad if it was if the story can manage that. What evidence is there that Kindra only wants MC for his coding skill and not genuine friendship? She gave him a place to stay, fixed up his phone, felt bad about his car and is going to fix it, registered the gun and the prototype car for the MC to use, has shown care about the MC's trauma from Cassandra, if you win the race she goes out of her way to cook a meal similar to what the MC's mom use to make, and actually has shown interest hanging out with the MC at the loft or during the camping trip. I just don't see how any of this indicates she only wants the MC for his coding skill and shows that she is truly a genuine friend. Maybe it is an elaborate ruse, but there is no real evidence for that. On top of that, it is pretty clear Kindra had a crush on the MC when she was younger and maybe still has those feelings, plus due to her parent's history and her own lifestyle she doesn't seem to have close friends besides her ex which she has mentioned a few times. I don't think it is outlandish for Kindra to seek help from the MC who she knew when she was younger when both of them need someone right now. The MC needs something like Artemis to start moving beyond his trauma and Kindra needs a friend to support her in trying to respect the legacy of her parents as she starts to revive their company while she is also still trying to get over her ex.They were doing good before all super uber bunker underground that nobody knows about. Kindra was helping a friend who were at his limit. A dude who were with her when they were younger. You don't need a MacGuffin for that. Now I feel like Kindra interest in MC because of his coding skill, not geniune friendship. Artemis plot poisoned story-well for me.
June's entire speech to Kindra is that she does not need to see her abuser again. If she does she will, but she does not need it. Moving on is not about always having to face the past. Sure she may be broken, but that is why she has tried to rebuild herself and surround herself with better people and likely why she values her relationship with the MC so much. I wouldn't be surprised if June's abuser does show up later, but I do not think he has to return just so June can move on.I don't think she is ready to move on,at least not right now, she can't move on. She has to face with abuser, she wants to. Up until there or something changes, she will still be somewhat broken.
I just don't agree that you can't easily do all three of these when the core elements of them blend together with the core concept and premise of the narrative. The sci-fi element is primarily an aspect of the worldbuilding but also blended into the drama within several plotlines already. It comes off like you don't like sci-fi or don't think sci-fi can be used also in tandem with other things especially when the sci-fi aspect while a major part of aspects of the story, is not at all overbearing to it overall. So a story with drama, erotic, and medieval elements couldn't work either? I just think this mindset limits what stories can be told.Larger you are harder you fall, quality of quantity, easier to juggle 2 oranges than 3, etc. Problem is not that there is 2 elements. There are 3. Drama, Erotic and SCI-FI. Last part is the problem of story imho. Also someone on previous pages explained how blowjob contests was detrimental to story. That was a good read.